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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Luv it..rey n kriya ka chit game was too gud..n swayam toh already sporting rey..wah wah..eagerly waiting for nxt update, rey in kriya room...:o lagta hai kriya se pitega woh..thnx for d pm..n plz pm me further..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow . . . . Kriya is a fullon diva 😃
sharon se takkar . . . . Apni bestie ke liye 🤗
kriyam ko dekh ke sharon jealous . . . . . 😉
lolzz . . . . . 2 diva's ke bich me swayam to pis jayega 😆
aww . . . . Kriyaansh hug
he looks already in love wid her . . . . 😊
get out of the class 🤣
inki romantic 1st meet kaisi thi? . . . Meko padhni hai 😛
precap ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Awesome update
loved it
lol loved krisha's reaction when they got to know swayam was related to both of them
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update... precap sounds interesting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

Swayum was sitting on his bed all tired. His room looked like a strom has striked there

He heard voices from outside of kria and neha
he shooked his head and went out
sw-NOW WHAT (HE SHOUTED)

Neha made a crying face

You made neha cry! Kria said dramatically

Wait I will call mom

Sw- ok I m sorry what u guys want now

Kr + ne- where are the pizzas

Sw- kitchen mein

Ne- le aao plzz with a puppy face

Sw- fine

Swayum went to kictchen and mentally laughed at his situation

Swayum's P.O.V.

God these girls always drive me crazy. I am looking like a servent of two 5-year-old-girls. I can't handle them now they always do this since childhood.

~~~FLASHBACK~~~

It was another day when swayum's parents left for a party leaving them alone at home. Kria called neha at home and they both were making swyum go mad

Kr- sw hamare liye ice creams

Ne- jaldi jaana chotu

They both giggled

Sw-yes mam

An hour later

Sw- guys its enough ok mai 1 ghante se tum logon ka slave bana hoon I m tired now he shouted at both of them

Kr- no problem neha mai mom ko phone karke batati hoon ki swayum ne school mei'

Sw put his hand on kria's mouth to stop her

Sw- ok m sorry but

Ne- but

Sw- but sleep now its getting late and girls no late-night movies

Do u get that

Ne+kr- yes mom

The trio laughed and left for their respective rooms

~~~FLASHBACK OVER~~~

he came to hall with pizzas

sw- ok girls I am going to sleep now and please no late night movies

kr- ok

ne- mom

the trio laughed and swayum left

after sometime kriha also went to their room

neha slept in guest room and kria in her room

kria was trying to sleep but her thoughts ended up on rey. She was forcing her mind to think about anything else but failed everytime .

KRIA'S POV

I am trying to sleep but I can't god knows what has happened to me nothing new I used to get these type of feelings earlier also urhh kria can't u shut ur thoughts for a minute.

Wait a sec is that a knock on window !!

She got up from the bed and went to the window she put the curtains aside and saw rey standing there

She opened the window

Kr- god tune mujhe dara hi diya tha

Re- tujhe ye nahi pata tha ki vo mei hi hoon

They shared an eye lock

Kr- umm tum yahan itni raat ko

Re- haan mei tumhare liye ye laya tha

He gave her a polythene

She opened it

Kr- ice cream nice but tumhe achaanak se ice cream kahan se yaad aa gai

Re- actually maine socha bohout din ho gaye hain tere saath ice cream kaye so mai aagaya

Kr- ok come have a seat

They both sat on the window and started talking while eating

Re- so tumhe neend nahi aai

Kr- nah just thinking about school days

She bit her tongue

Rey smirks

Re- accha ji school days us category mei toh hum bhi the as if we were in same school

Kr- ya I knw

Re- so miss kria shekhavat what do u think about ur school life

(acting as taking interview)

Kr- ahem (clearing throat) actually my school life was awesome with friends some very special (looking at rey) and some enemies

Rey- *thinking* rehne de rey agra pia ka naam lia toh kacha chaba jayegi

Kr- 1 person was very special to me who gave me confident to do what I want to so thank you reyaansh singhania for being with with me and helping me. Really jo swayum, nahi kar paya vo tune kar dia I really owe u a big one

Re- ab kya senti maar rahi hai

Rey hugged kria both felt something different, something they don't know something they wish they could feel every minute of the day. Both their hearts were on a race now unwillingly Kria pulled back

They felt awakward

Rey sensing the awakward situation said

Re- baton mei pata hi nahi laga ki ice cream khatam ho gai

Re- I missed u loads in these years really

Kr- me too

Re- so tumhe koi mila jo yumhe pasand ho umm'.

Kr- no aur tumhe

Re- selftalk- tumhe kaise bata doon vo ladki mere saath hi baithi hai

Kr- rey

Re- ya

Kr- ya? You tumhe koi ladki mili *thinking*kria chill he is your best friend don't be jealous what jealous ?? kria tu pagal ho gai hai urghh chuck it

Re-nope

Kria sighed in relief

Re- tum logon ne swayum ko accha pakaya hoga he chuckled

Kr- ya bahout maza aaya tune miss kar diya yaad hai we used to have nightout at our farmhouse hum kitna maza karte the I miss those days

Re- me too vaise hum first time vahi pe mile the na

Kria was trying hard not to smile

Kr- ya tell me something about Sharon

Rey said in a disappointed tone what huh sharon tu rules bhul gai na when we are here no talking about someone else he looked away pouting cutely

Kr- arre sorry holding ears

Re- huh ye accha hai tera pehle galti karo phir cute se faces bana ke sorry bolo and finish but this time itni jaldi..

Kria didn't let him complete and pecked on his cheek they share a cute eyelock kria broke the LLHH and whispered

Kr- sorry making cute face

Rey was still in a shocked state but he didn't miss the blush on kria's face

Re- accha ok apology accepted

Kr- late ho raha hai u should go now

Re- but tum kal milogi na

Kr- ye kaisa question hai offcourse miloongi now stop acting like a kid goo

Rey started climbing down the pipe. He took one step and stoped

Re- bye

Kr- bye

He again took one step

When he was at the last step he looked up and saw kria smiling he called kria from his phone. Kria was hell confused by his actins but she picked the call

Kr- kya hua

Re- vo mujhe tumse poochna tha ki

Kr- ki

Re- tum mere sapnon mei aaogi na

Before kria could react he laughed and ran from there. Kria saw his shadow last time and went to bed

Kr- jhalla jahin ka aise cute harkatein sirf rey hi kar sakta hai mera cute linecutter rockstar

she said dreamingly

what kria just give it a break.aaj kal tera dimaag kuch zyadaa hi chal raha hai. He is just a friend we are just good friends. wait a sec call disconnect to ho gaya na

and drifted to sleep thinking about rey

NEXT MORNING

KRIA woke up she stretched her hands in the air and got up from the bed

She brushed and came out in shorts and a tee she went to kitchen and grabbed an apple she looked at the clock

Kr- kaka aa rahe honge

The door bell rand she opened and greeted kaka

Kr ' kaka breakfast 3 logon ka banana aaloo ke paranthe

Kaka ' theek hai beta mai swayum baba ka juice le jaata hun phir breakfast bana doonga

Kr- nahi juice mai le jaoongi

She went to swayum's room and was trying to wake him up but all in vain finally pissed she slapped him hard on back

Sw- aah kaka he said half sleepingly
KR- swayum uth ja

Sw- haan kaka apki aawaz ko kya hua

Kria again slapped him lightly on head

Kr- oye majnu uth na

Swayum covered his face with pillow and again slept

Kr- ufff Sharon tum yahan

Sw stood with a jerk

Sw- kahan hai Sharon

He said looking here and there

Kria started laughing hard

Sw- kria ki bachhi ruk tujhe batata hun they started the chasing game and finally after 10 minutes they were standing outside the guest room with swayum ticking kria

Kr- I m sorry na she spoke between her laugh
sw ' chal tujhe maaf kia

Kr- swayum chal neha ko utha te hain

Swayum saw a mischievous glint in her eyes

Sw- chal

They rushed to kitchen and filled beer mugs with water.

On the other hand Sharon had come to swayum's house for some cs work but the door was open

Sh- kaka swayum kaha hai

Ka- beta vo upar guest room mai hai he said smiling

She went to the room and saw kria and swayum standing on sides of bed with mugs of water in their hands and chuckling silentlysshe stood at the door .

They tip toed to her room with the mugs and splash

Neha ' what the hell

There swayum and kria were laughing hard holding their stomach

But seeing neha in raudra roop they went quite

Still chukling neha throwed pollows on both of them kria ducked and was saved but the pillow hit swayum right on his face

Kr- nice shot she hi fied neha

They started a pillow fight

They heard a knock they all turned around and saw Sharon standing

Sw- hie Sharon tum kab aai

Sh ' abhi aai

Kr- ho gya majnu shuru kria and neha chuckled and left

Swaron went to swayum's room to do work

After half an hour swaron heard noises from kria's room

He quickly went followed by Sharon

Kr- oh c'mon neha maine tumse poocha nahi iska matlab yeh nahi ki mujhe koi objection nahi hai

Ne- but listen tome once'

Kr- no buts this time miss neharika kapoor what do you think meri bestfriend ko koi insult karega and I will just keep quiet sorry to tell you I m not swayum I really can't understand tum logon ko kya ho gya hai

Because of this nonsence divide tum dono college mein strangers ki tarh behave karte ho. You guys are sick I m going bye

She grabbed her jackect and phone and left here neha was on the verge of crying. Swayum was confused what to do.

Precap- kria tum yaha

''neha snd swayum asking sorry kria '''. Sharon kria face off


hie guys i knw i am updating after a long time but i was busy and now my FA are going to start on the top of that my mom don't allow me to use lappy for more than 1 hour so next update i really don't knw when but i'll try my best

plzz like and review

Edited by sharuKR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
awesome update...
loved it...
thnx for d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
awsm ...finally u update it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Rocking chappy 🥳
poor swayam . . . . . Slave ban gya hai 🤣
awww . . . . Rey's here wid icecreams
they look so cute besties 😃
kriya pecked his cheeks ☺️
hope she realize her feelings as well 😛
kriya's pranks . . . . . She's so dangerous 🤣
sharon aa gyi 😲
ohh . . . .kriya is upset . . . . 😔
I think rey ke paas gyi hogi 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
all parts r amazing
i really loved it
nxt part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!

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