kr SS WHEN I LOOK AT YOU - Page 3

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CHAPTER 3

A fuming kria left her house and she IS now standing infront of a house ringing the door bell she checked her watch 7 am c'mon open d door was all she was saying in

her head from last 5 minutes. The door was opened by an old lady . she suddenly stopped seeing kria

Kr- ho gaya apka the lady was still in shock or acted as . kria

shook her a bit

she shut the door.

Kriya thought yeh dadi na kabhi nahi sudhrenge mujhe irritate karne ke liye phir chaloo ho gaye never mind

abhi door kholegi 3..2..1..open and the door open

Kr- kya baat hai bilcul time pe

The lady gave her a bone crashing hug

Kr- dadi leave me I can't breathe

She left her immediately

Dadi- kria ki bacchi kal se yahan aai hai aur milne ka

time tujhe ab mila raat ko to rey ke sath badi baaatein

ho rahin thi vo bhi ice cream ke saath

Kria's face turned red.she looked around and pulled her

Inside the house

Kr- dadi dekh kar bola karo koi sun lega yahan mujhe sab mujhe jaante hain

Da- accha ji vaise bhi sari colony ke log yeh jaante

hain aur sun meri ek advice man apne majnu ko bola kar ladder baad mein rakh ke jaaye

Kr- dadi rey mera majnu nahi hai(trying hard not to blush) we are just friends

Da- pata hai mujhe ab tu bata kya hua (sitting on couch) subha subha mere pas vo bhi in kapdon mei

Kria looked down and sighed she was wearing the jiya

jale dress with a hoodie jacket

Kr- sorry voh jaldi jaldi mein jo hath aaya utha liya shayad swayum ka hai

she said sitting beside her

Da- ab kisse ladai karke aai hai swayum or neha

Kr- neha

Da- kya hua

Kr- IDK she is acting too filmy I mean there is a limit. firstly she asked me not to tell anyone about neha being neharika and then she was not speaking english properly

and moreover eyeryone in the college had nicknamed her

miss broken English and she expect me to keep quite.

On my very first day of college I had a fight with

Sharon..

Da- rai prakash swayum ki girlfriend

Kria darling don't go round and round just tell whats d matter

Kria sighed again and said

Dadi meri problem ye hai ki swayum ne mujhe yeh nahi

bataya ki uski koi gf hai and that too d diva of college who is arrogant self centered and egoistic

And neha uski toh alag hi baat hai mera deewana mujhse

mei jaisi hoon vaise pyaar karega na ki neharika kapoor

se kria said imitating neha

Da- kria tum thoda sa over react kar rahi ho.

Kr- maybe

Da- betaji time kya hua hai

Kr- shit 7:45 dadi I gotta go she rushed to the door came back pecked dadi and shouted luv u while going

Da- bilcul jhalli hai 'sigh' in logon ke aane se ghar

jaise phir se khil uthta hai ……….

Kria was now standing infront of her house all ready to go and cursing swayum

Kr- aaj phir se late pehle bada keh raha tha I'll be on time

In mean time a car similar to that of Sharon but black

in color stopped in front of her. Swayum came out of the car

Kr- wow is this ur car its just amazing

Sw- nope its yours dad have sent this for u

Kr- awesome but

Sw- license kria nodded

Don't worry I've got that also here handling her the license

Kria jumped in excitement swayum u r (swayum was raising his collar) not but dad is the best hahaha

So driver keys please

Sw- here u go

Kr- so since ur car has gone to garage for repair I'll

give u lift
sw- but

Kr- c'mon driver mai tumhare liye itna toh kar sakti

hoon

They sat in car and kria started driving with swayum guiding her with directions

Sw- ahem ahem tujhe na apne majnu ka kuch karma chahiye

Kr- kaunsa majnu trying hard not to blush

Sw- array jo raat ko aaya tha aur ladder vahin chod gaya tha

Kr- dude subah se sab mujhse yahi keh rahe hain mai kitni bar bolun vo mera majnu nahi hai we're just good friends

Sw- ya I knw just good friends

They reached college and kria parked the car kriyam came out of the car they were walking when they saw rey standing leaning to his car waiting impatiently for someone

Sw- vo dekh tera majnu teri wait kar raha hai

Kria glared at him when rey joined them

Re- hey guys

Kr- hi

Re- swayum chal Sharon bade gusse se college mei aayi thi
Kr – kyun mera bhai uska p.a hai

Nahi boyfriend hai simmi said from behind

Kr- whatever

Re- BTW wats wrong with neha he whispered to rey
Kr- we had a fight this morning

Swayum left with simmi

Kr- I hate that bitch

Re- kria

Kr- what now u don't start please

Re- fine but I need to tell u something important let's go to canteen I don't have a class

Kr- fine

They started moving towards canteen

Re- kria jo tum Sharon ke bare mei sochti ho vo vaisi nahi hai

Kr- please tum uske lawyer ho kya

Re- but kria vo vaisi nahi hai jaisi trum sochti ho

They reached canteen kria saw the scene infront of her dazzlers excluding swaron

(sorry did I forget to tell Vicky is not here in college actually he has a special entry) were sitting on their seats and on the other hand weaklings were sitting and dazzlers were making fun of them. Kria fumed but she controlled her anger. She went and sat on a table between dazzlers and weaklings. Rey looked here and there said some curses and went to kria.

Kria looked at his face

Kr- wat if u want to talk then sit or else get lost

Re- urhh kria he sat on the chair next to hers

Re- kria Sharon aisi nahi hai….

Kr- kabse laga rakha hai vaise nahi hai aise hai trumhe kaise pata mei uske bare mei kya sochti hun

Re- cuz I knw u better than urself

Kria looked at him staring at his eyes. Dazzlers and weaklings were looking at them in shock. After few secs kria started looking here and there. Rey also came out of his dreamland

Re- its just that situations ne use aisa bana diya hai

Kria looked at him confused

Kr- situations?

Re- abhi nahi ye log hume ankhe phad- phad ke dekh rahe hain pehle mei jata hun phir tum piche aana

Rey left with kria following him. He went in fire exit.

They sat on stairs.

Re- Sharon ne apne mom ko kho dia.

she even said she lost her 2 most important persons she

never talked much about that special friends but I knw one was a girl and the other boy. When she grew up uske classmates sirf uske dum par popular hone ke liye friendship karte the u knw na teenagers she was the diva of her school and offcourse super popular because of her dance since then she had built a

guard around her hiding the real innocent, sweet and

kind

sharon. Its either me or swayum who can see the real Sharon.

Kr- IDC jo mene dekha meri opinion mei vahi sahi hai.

Agar aisa hi hai toh usse tum logon se milne ke baad ye

toh pata hoga ki sab ek jaise nahi hote. Toh voh vapis

real Sharon kyun nahi banti

Re- kria jo insaan last 5 years se arrogant attitude diva bani hui hai voh ek dum se sweet kind devi toh nahi ban sakti

Kr- par yeh so called LOC its all rubbish

Re- I knw being the gs princi ne mujhe bataya hai ke 2-3 days mei rules aayenge jisme no weakling no dazzlings

only louisans hoga

Triiing

Kr- we have class come lets go

Re- ya

CHAPTER 4

After the college was over kria and swayumweregoing to parking area when a boy came to swayum

Boy- dude auditorium mei kuch weaklings ne dance team ke liye auditions rakhe and Sharon is there……

Swayum didn't let him complete and ran to audi with kria following him.

They stood near the door catching their breath. Everyone was present there including weaklings.they heard Sharon say

Sh- you weaklings wings nikal aaye hain tum logon ke. Lagta hai tum log apni right place bhool gaye ho so don't you guys dare because you weaklings can never compete with us.

Kr- dare to hum karenge

Everyone looked back to know who have dared to speak against Sharon. Reyam hit their hands on forehead.

Kria walked to Sharon and stood giving her tashan look. neha and vishakha came and stand beside her. Swayum came following her and stood beside rey.

Re- pakka kuch gadbad hogi

Sw- pata nahi ab ye log kya karenge

Re- dekh drama ab

Sh- oh tum agar tum swayum ki behan nahi hoti toh

Kr- nahi hoon

Reyam and Sharon- what

Sw- kria tum ye……

Kr- pehle meri baat sunle so miss Sharon rai prakash imagine I am not swayum's sis, just a weakling who is challenging u

Sh- for dance huh dear u better don't cuz Sharon rai prakash never loose

Kr- that means u r scared. sharon rai prakash is scared

Sh- I m not scared of anyone I just doubt u even have some dancing skills or not

Kr- u bet that

Sh- fine then perform a solo and prove u r capable of a dance face off

Kr- I never dance to prove I am good but also have to perform a solo against me let's see who is better

Kria was standing at backstage doing warm up

Kr- univereji mei toh hun hi jhalli par aap toh samajhdar ho rok nahi sakte the ab mei ho gain a phir se nervous

Gadha swayum apni gf ko manane mei busy hai usse nahi pata uskti behan ko stagefright hai

Rey came and stood beside her admiring her

Rey patted her shoulder

Kr- rey tum kab aaye

Re- jab tum apne universe ji ke sath busy thi

Re- nervous

Kr- super nervous

Re- baatcutter don't be afraid I knw u can do it just don't look at the audience imagine u only practicing your routine alone

Kr- got it

Re- all the best

Rey walked back. Kria came and stood in the middle of

Stage. Rey gave her a thumbs up she nodded.

Kria performed on loose my breadth

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9F7HIt6MgRI

everyone was quiet for a moment and then stared clapping

kr- your turn Sharon

rinni messged simmi that Sharon don't knw any routine

simmi came from back and started saying

si- guys proff ne princi ko bata dia hai that we all are bunking classes all day and after college we are here

when we are not supposed to. Guys run princiis coming.

Every one left the auditorium in a matter of seconds

Except sharey and kriyam

Sh- is baar toh tum bach gai I'll see u next time

Sharon left followed by swayum.

Re- u did awesome job

Kr- thanx but I seriously sometimes I think swayum is

her pet dog following her everywhere

re- but kria don't u think u r being a bit too judgemental

kr- maybe but swayum loves her a lot

re- I know

kr- agar isne galti se bhi swayum ko hurt kia then she

will have to pay for it

re- she won't.

kr- how are you so sure about that

re- leave it lets leave aren't we getting

late

kr- yup

kria went to home with rey.

Next day in college.

Kria had just entered when she banged into someone rather a boy. The boy looked at kria shoked

Boy- kria tum yahan

Yuppiee.. . . .
Me first. . . .
Me first. . . .
Me first. . . . .
Yayy. . . . .double updates. . . . .woww. . .
Lovd the dadi's c.s. . . . .
Rey justifyng sharon character was nice. . .
Then the krisha face-off was awsome. . .
Woww. . .new entry. .
I guess tat boy is vicky. . .i realy dnt knw. .its just a guess. .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . .
And do pm me wen u update. .