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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sofiaroth

it was such a good read.so well written.

keep writing:)



Thankkyou so much dearss.🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nav_bat



Yawwrrr, tu kabsein anti hogayee?

When Anji did all that melodrama you wailed at me to understand her, and now that Arnav is doing something that is preety much understandable (I am not saying hes doing the right thing) you got anti him?

not anti its just ki he stood stand by khushi no matter what he was going through...

just because he din reached the venue khushi had to went through all the humiliation once again...

is she not a human being..?? why she has to go through all the humiliation every time...??

is about khushi's self respect... even if he come back now and the marriage happen... that won't undo all the shame she and her family went through...

even if i want i can't support arnav in this... instead of going all senti arnav should have used his brain.. but in ipkknd mein only shyam hai brain...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shruti21

not anti its just ki he stood stand by khushi no matter what he was going through...

just because he din reached the venue khushi had to went through all the humiliation once again...

is she not a human being..?? why she has to go through all the humiliation every time...??

is about khushi's self respect... even if he come back now and the marriage happen... that won't undo all the shame she and her family went through...

even if i want i can't support arnav in this... instead of going all senti arnav should have used his brain.. but in ipkknd mein only shyam hai brain...😛



Hahahhaa, agree.😆 Shyaamoo had super sonic brains.🤣

Tabhi tou I am saying I am not pro anyone, puts me somewhere in middle.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ya,,,very well written!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nav_bat



Hahahhaa, agree.😆 Shyaamoo had super sonic brains.🤣

Tabhi tou I am saying I am not pro anyone, puts me somewhere in middle.


but you have written os after ages... right..??

it was nice for me till khushi's part...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow batool beautiful one
thanks for pm yar
keep writing more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully written!aur kya bolun..Tu humesha mujhe emotional karti hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW !

This was written amazingly Batool !!

I dont know, but then yesterday's epi was one of the best ever !
Barun and Sanaya, their acting, hats off !

When Khushi sat their in the mandap, with tears in her eyes, I wanted to cry too ! And Arnav , facing his horrors of the past ! And then there is his unlying love for Khushi too !
And this OS, encompassed both their feeling and emotions together wonderfully !

Vaise I didnt know many people noticed ! Khushi was wearing the same coloured dress which changed her life once last year and now this year too !!

Loved how you brought that in ! And the otehr flashbacks !

Amazingly written !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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quite emotional😭i hate seeing both of them in pain...amazing one👏pls do continue this n pm me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome work! <3 He is truly and completely human and thats why i love him. Beautiful work dear!!

Keep writing such OS'es! *Im too lazy to read any FF's😆* but trust me you are a fab writer!

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