OS: Lawless - Page 5

This was sooo beautiful and emotional

Hey Batool!🤗

Great to see you back, even if its just for an OS!😃

It was just Awesome!!
Heartbreaking though!

"That is when he actually realized that not marrying her was never an option." Love this line❤️

Beautifully written yaar!👏

PS - All the Best for ur exams!👍🏼

Originally posted by: sneha0504

beautiful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: achu_arshi

great os dear

loved it

Originally posted by: mishti_17

Wonderfully written.. Loved it...

Originally posted by: subiscs

awesome ya,,,very well written!!!!😊

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

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*Edited*

Nice one

Originally posted by: clarissajohn

wow batool beautiful one

thanks for pm yar

keep writing more

Thankkyou so much guyss.🤗

Yourr comments always make me swell with hapiness.😳😳

Originally posted by: kbtr

Great, but sounds incomplete!

Thankkyouu so much.🤗

Incomplete? 😕 Kind of was only their thought processes, no real event.😳😳

Originally posted by: Shruti21

but you have written os after ages... right..??

it was nice for me till khushi's part...😛

HAhhaha, yeaahh.😆😆 My last OS was when WAT got the runner up FF award.😆

Kyaa yawrr, Khair, Thankyou.🤗

Originally posted by: -Gautami

Beautifully written!aur kya bolun..Tu humesha mujhe emotional karti hai.

Hayyeee Gautaammi.🤗

Thankks yawwr.🤗

Main tujhe emotional karti aur tere comments mujhe.❤️

Originally posted by: -Shobhu21-

WOW !

This was written amazingly Batool !!

I dont know, but then yesterday's epi was one of the best ever !
Barun and Sanaya, their acting, hats off !

When Khushi sat their in the mandap, with tears in her eyes, I wanted to cry too ! And Arnav , facing his horrors of the past ! And then there is his unlying love for Khushi too !
And this OS, encompassed both their feeling and emotions together wonderfully !

Vaise I didnt know many people noticed ! Khushi was wearing the same coloured dress which changed her life once last year and now this year too !!

Loved how you brought that in ! And the otehr flashbacks !

Amazingly written !

Shobhanaa..🤗

Thankkyou so much honeey.🤗

Oh yeah I definitely agree. If their is any episode that i love in a drama, is the one with pure angst or the one with pure love, and yeah Barun and Sanaya are perfectionist, they do the extreme's so flawlessly if you cant cry with them then you are in human.❤️

Yeaah, my mood went so dim after that, but okay honestly the part where they get the flashbacks was likee someone like me wass cryinng.😳 And in yesterdays episode (27/9) Man, the flashbacks their journey from the beginning, WOW, WOW, WOW. It was worth my time really, made me cry now.😳

That was the first thing I noticed when they showed it in Monday's episode. I am like dude seriously, what are they doing? That dress, I knew something was to happen (waise bhi pata thawn) but it was bound to be life changing for her.😳

Thankss once again for the long comment, I loved it.❤️

Originally posted by: vkp1989

Great.

Originally posted by: adithyan

nice...very nice

Originally posted by: AnupamaJY

Awesome... just loved it!

Originally posted by: MISTIE

wow,nice os

Thankyou so much dearss.🤗

I am glad that you liked it.

Originally posted by: sana11

quite emotional😭i hate seeing both of them in pain...amazing one👏pls do continue this n pm me😊

Thankyou so much love.🤗
I cant, there is no second parts to it.😳

Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

Awesome work! <3 He is truly and completely human and thats why i love him. Beautiful work dear!!

Keep writing such OS'es! *Im too lazy to read any FF's😆* but trust me you are a fab writer!

Thanks alot deaar.🤗🤗

Yeaah definitely, I respect everyone's view however I still fail to understand why this one fact cannot drape all his mistakes?

Hahhaha, never mind. 😆 I am too lazy to write anything at all.🤣

Aww, Thats very sweet of you to say that.😳

Originally posted by: IPKKNDkaur92

wow that was an emotional piece

Originally posted by: snoopy84

great os

Originally posted by: tanurocks

omg its really beautiful👏

Originally posted by: kvarsha

nice ONE..

thnx 4 pm😃

Originally posted by: SubhaShreeNanda

beautifully written os

Originally posted by: KreyaArshiLover

Awesome

Originally posted by: luvbarunsanaya6

nice

Thanks alot all of youu lovely people.🤗🤗

Yourr commentts mean alot to me.😳