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Tulipdulip

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

read all the chap in one go...

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so gripping...

OMG i still cany believe payal is the woman who is sleeping with shyam...😲

pls pm me for future updates...

BUDDY request is on its way!!!!

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vaish912

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

payal with shyam ..shit man but then who is that mystery woman who is after khushi can't guess really but the rest all was just fantabulous and loved the hot update ... u have tremendous knack for the love scenes dear very beautifully updated

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khusipra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

wow tina u r an awesome writer... wow!!

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duncanelise

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Their first time, the urgency and all that, very wonderfully described...

And my god! Payal was sleeping with Shyam, absolutely unexpected! I'm dying out of curiosity.

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794754

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

I simply love this fanfitction and I'm stalking to it shamelessly. 😉 😳

Coming to the last update, it was awesome and hot like always. I love it when you add the pics, it heightens my imagination.

Arnav and Khushi's love is very intense and beautiful. I can't get enough of both of them.

I don't why I feel this story is coming towards the end? Can you please tell us how many more chapters are left? 😕

I feel the figure is neither three of them, It's someone who is left out, which will be very shocking.. My mind is going all filmy (after watching yesterdays episode), I think the figure could be Khushi's twin sister (or hamshakal), Lavanya or Mamiji. 😆

Anyways, please update soon. 😊

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xo, Frannie.

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ducky_anne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

It's someone else! Has to be! OH LORD! Payal wouldn't be cheating on Akash right? URGH. Can't wait!

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Eggon_Snow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Wow, quite sickening the shyam, payal, anjali trio. amazing update though.

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Bani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Oh Gosh!
Tina Babe! This was such a HOT update! ☺️
I can't get over it! Reading it again and again! 😳

I loved the part when he first time entered her and kissed away the tiny droplet of tear! Such a blissful moment it was!

Oka. The last part was terrible!
I couldn't even guess that it would have been Payal! 🤢
Oh god eww! 😲
Payal was sleeping with that creep! Sounds yuck! 😡
Shessh!
Anyways.! I am in love with you writing style! ⭐️
God bless you! 🤗

Don't forget to PM me!

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Esther

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

wow...wow...wow...wow...wow...

that's all I can say...wow!!!!!!

Gosh I am literally speechless!!PAYAL?!!!!!!Really???!!

EEWWW!!!!

The wedding night!!Haila...maar jawa!!!!!!!It was exciting as it was realsitic...almost felt like the fly on the wall!!!!!!

hmmm...can't wait to see how it goes from here on out!!!

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