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HOT UPDATE...OH NO IT CANT BE PAYAL..WAITING FOR NXT PART.

i really cant beleive it k wo payal he 😲

two words for this update - WHAT THE..PAYAAL? srslly?

Originally posted by: glamourbird

OMG!! I just read this fanfic!!😛

How on earth did I miss out on such a good writing piece!!😆

Just read all the chapters right now..& must say I am hooked!!

This story is so interesting..filled with all the emotions...love, hatred, anger, scared, thriller...a bit of everything!!👏👏

The characters of arnav & khusi are so intersting...

Their love is so pure..how can ppl want to seperate them...

Btw i hate the rainas & the rest of Raizadas!!😡😡

WHy cant they leave Arsshi in peace!!😡

Love aman in ur fanfic! He has always been my fav after Arnav & khushi..always been so loyal to his Boss & Mrs. Boss!!😃

& their cossumation scene was so well written... u can actually feel the love, the longing these two love birds have for each other...😳😳

& u ended on such a interesting note... its Payal wid Shyam! I mean OMG!! 😲😲😲

Continue soon!!

P.S: DO PM me the next part as I am really hooke dto this fanfic!!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Anjali250194

PAYALLL.

It can't be her, it's Khushi's JiJi! And Akashhh...no.

I actually don't know who it could be now, you've kept me on my toes throughout this whole story that i'm sure i will gasp when you finally reveal the mysterious figure!

great job on such a great story idea, it's had so many twists and turns but you've managed to make it so passionate and so readable...this chapter was intense, but you wrote such a hard scene to write so believably! It was sexy, not awkward!

and now i'm gonna repeat myself, great job! can't wait for the figure to be revealed.

p.s. taffy from mind games is cute!!! but i thought that was a given so didn't mention it, didn't want to insult his cuteness ;)

Originally posted by: vs_2706

This ff is superb,amazing & thrilling .Don't know how to say What I'm feeling after reading this ff ,one min I was amused at certain part & the next second will be in 😡 towards rainas,anjali,shyam.

In first few chapters I was crying for Khushi's state & then also feeling sorry for Arnav's helplessness till he finds out Khushi's innocence .But loved how Arnav supported Khushi in every step & stood by her.😃

Hmm then again comes a boom that Arnav is shot.Oh God man wat an emotional scene was that btw Arhi in hospital.😭

Then comes the news that someone is trying to kill Khushi, that too a woman is doing all this & also in her way the woman kills many ppl ,She is really phys-co😡.

And ewww Anjali she is really pathetic😲 I'm really shocked by her behaviour.I don't even want to talk abt Shyam😡 & also the Rainas😡

Then comes the scene where Khushi's memory return's & Arhi clears their MU.👍🏼So well well here who tried to create rift btw Arhi is none other than Arnav's own sister Anjali,Mami & that too with Rainas.I hate them here more 😡

Then our ASR great mind works & the love birds escapes to farm house free from Raizadas,the idiotic Rainas & the phys-co woman.

At comes the Gala party where again the phys-co tries to kill Khushi by injecting deadly spider venom.But here this part was really fun to read as that Physo-co herself gave antidote to Khushi long back.😆

Loved the part where Arhi escapes from the party & also from the guard due to the great ASR mind.And now they r one in every sense ☺️

As I was reading ur FF from start I had an inking feeling about Payal ewww but never thought she would have an affair with Shyam😲 Really I mean some one pinch me😵.Here u gave me heart attack🤢 I wonder whether Akash knows all this😕 who knows the next twist may be abt something of him.😈

I like this Aman he is doing his best to help Arhi 👏

Looking forward for next update where the Phys-co is going to be revealed and also reaction of Khushi where she will learn abt her beloved jiji's mahan act😡

I love ur every twist & turns u r going great.A big 🤗 hug to presenting this FF to us.This FF now comes under my all time fav list.

According to me all the members of RM & Rainas r looking like culprit in one way or the other as they r part of the crime in some way or the other except Arhi, Aman, NK, Nani & detective ofcouse 😃 Who knows maybe NK too involved😆

I must say ur an EXCELLENT, FABULOUS,AMAZING, STUPENDOUS not getting more words to describe ur skill ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 👏

continue soon...

😊

Originally posted by: sinner-like-me

I simply love this fanfitction and I'm stalking to it shamelessly. 😉 😳

Coming to the last update, it was awesome and hot like always. I love it when you add the pics, it heightens my imagination.

Arnav and Khushi's love is very intense and beautiful. I can't get enough of both of them.

I don't why I feel this story is coming towards the end? Can you please tell us how many more chapters are left? 😕

I feel the figure is neither three of them, It's someone who is left out, which will be very shocking.. My mind is going all filmy (after watching yesterdays episode), I think the figure could be Khushi's twin sister (or hamshakal), Lavanya or Mamiji. 😆

Anyways, please update soon. 😊

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xo, Frannie.

Originally posted by: BBani

Oh Gosh!
Tina Babe! This was such a HOT update! ☺️
I can't get over it! Reading it again and again! 😳

I loved the part when he first time entered her and kissed away the tiny droplet of tear! Such a blissful moment it was!

Oka. The last part was terrible!
I couldn't even guess that it would have been Payal! 🤢
Oh god eww! 😲
Payal was sleeping with that creep! Sounds yuck! 😡
Shessh!
Anyways.! I am in love with you writing style! ⭐️
God bless you! 🤗

Don't forget to PM me!

Originally posted by: Ezther

wow...wow...wow...wow...wow...

that's all I can say...wow!!!!!!

Gosh I am literally speechless!!PAYAL?!!!!!!Really???!!

EEWWW!!!!

The wedding night!!Haila...maar jawa!!!!!!!It was exciting as it was realsitic...almost felt like the fly on the wall!!!!!!

hmmm...can't wait to see how it goes from here on out!!!

well the first thing i should do is apoligize for commenting late, so very sorry about that! 🤢i promise i read your update as soon as i got your pm but didn't get a chance to comment. 😃just can't tell you how addicted i am to your story; for the past weeks my family has called me crazy so many times because i debate who the mysterious "figure" is in your story out loud all the time!😆 (i'm still leaning towards natasha cause she's screwy in the head whereas mami isn't smart enough for such a grand scheme and anjali is just plain pathetic. strangely i kinda like dia, i mean, i see no reason why she would kill khushi) more on this update-loved it😳 the whole time though i was so scared something was going to happen and they wouldn't have their wedding night. i think i hold my breath everytime i read one of shameless updates and have a goofy grin on my face when i read a mind games update😆 but then at the end of the chapter it was payal in ignatius tower!😲 i freaked! i still can't beieve it. please update soon and save me from spontaneously combusting after comtemplating so much about your story😉 and the mind games spoiler is making me restless too so please update soon!😃 and thanks a bunch for the pm! (though i still stalk your stories and keep reading old chapters over😉) Almost forgot: congratz on thread 4!