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anisa79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

what a surprise, i hope it isnt payal betraying her!

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Ayera

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Aaahhh! :D

Completely HOT!! ;D

Finally khushi lost her virginity..Lol! :P
The Arnav khushi moments were..Amaazing! <3

Amaaazing update!
*Shameless* Zindabad! :P

What the Phuck!!!! :O :O :O
Did it have to be Payal?!!! PAYAL! SERIOUSLY!
That was sooo Freaking unexpected!!!! :O

PAYAL was making out with SHYAM?!! What the! :O
That is just simply Eww! :P

Khushi was completely in shock!! :P :O
Godd! I still cant believe that Payal was making out with Shyam :P *eww*

OMGOMGOMG! You're revealing the figure in the next chapter!! :D
Yaaayy! Finally the wait is over!! :D :D
Last guesses...umm..it had to be either Anjali or Natasha!! *though i started having more doubt on Anjali* ;)
And now you've confused me by bringing Payal in the line :S :S :P

Thaaanks for the PM :D :D

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LilaUK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Wow that was Unexpected!! Payal?? Seriously? Ewww with Shyam grosse!!

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shalinii173

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Payal sleeping with Shyam?!!! 😲 OMG U have given me a heart attack. For a minute I thought its Payal who's trying to kill Khushi coz of Shyam's Obssesion towards her. But no, coz u have mentioned that figure noticed Payal taking Khushi upstairs to change her saree. Then who is it????? update fast

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Wait so Payal was the one that had sex with Shyam in the rose garden??? Why?!

And so is she the killer? Or just an accomplice? Or maybe just a s**t that sleeps with her brother in law?

This just got so much more confusing, but I lurrved it!

And Arnav and Khushi was just, well, wow. I have no better words to describe their love!

Beautifully written! Continue soon (:

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glamourbird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

OMG!! I just read this fanfic!!😛

How on earth did I miss out on such a good writing piece!!😆

Just read all the chapters right now..& must say I am hooked!!

This story is so interesting..filled with all the emotions...love, hatred, anger, scared, thriller...a bit of everything!!👏👏

The characters of arnav & khusi are so intersting...

Their love is so pure..how can ppl want to seperate them...

Btw i hate the rainas & the rest of Raizadas!!😡😡

WHy cant they leave Arsshi in peace!!😡

Love aman in ur fanfic! He has always been my fav after Arnav & khushi..always been so loyal to his Boss & Mrs. Boss!!😃

& their cossumation scene was so well written... u can actually feel the love, the longing these two love birds have for each other...😳😳

& u ended on such a interesting note... its Payal wid Shyam! I mean OMG!! 😲😲😲

Continue soon!!

P.S: DO PM me the next part as I am really hooke dto this fanfic!!😆😆😆

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Anjali250194

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

PAYALLL.

It can't be her, it's Khushi's JiJi! And Akashhh...no.

I actually don't know who it could be now, you've kept me on my toes throughout this whole story that i'm sure i will gasp when you finally reveal the mysterious figure!

great job on such a great story idea, it's had so many twists and turns but you've managed to make it so passionate and so readable...this chapter was intense, but you wrote such a hard scene to write so believably! It was sexy, not awkward!

and now i'm gonna repeat myself, great job! can't wait for the figure to be revealed.

p.s. taffy from mind games is cute!!! but i thought that was a given so didn't mention it, didn't want to insult his cuteness ;)

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kaymail

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

What Payal is having an affair with Shyam...your twists are awesome...can't wait

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SViji_2706

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

This ff is superb,amazing & thrilling .Don't know how to say What I'm feeling after reading this ff ,one min I was amused at certain part & the next second will be in 😡 towards rainas,anjali,shyam.

In first few chapters I was crying for Khushi's state & then also feeling sorry for Arnav's helplessness till he finds out Khushi's innocence .But loved how Arnav supported Khushi in every step & stood by her.😃

Hmm then again comes a boom that Arnav is shot.Oh God man wat an emotional scene was that btw Arhi in hospital.😭

Then comes the news that someone is trying to kill Khushi, that too a woman is doing all this & also in her way the woman kills many ppl ,She is really phys-co😡.

And ewww Anjali she is really pathetic😲 I'm really shocked by her behaviour.I don't even want to talk abt Shyam😡 & also the Rainas😡

Then comes the scene where Khushi's memory return's & Arhi clears their MU.👍🏼So well well here who tried to create rift btw Arhi is none other than Arnav's own sister Anjali,Mami & that too with Rainas.I hate them here more 😡

Then our ASR great mind works & the love birds escapes to farm house free from Raizadas,the idiotic Rainas & the phys-co woman.

At comes the Gala party where again the phys-co tries to kill Khushi by injecting deadly spider venom.But here this part was really fun to read as that Physo-co herself gave antidote to Khushi long back.😆

Loved the part where Arhi escapes from the party & also from the guard due to the great ASR mind.And now they r one in every sense ☺️

As I was reading ur FF from start I had an inking feeling about Payal ewww but never thought she would have an affair with Shyam😲 Really I mean some one pinch me😵.Here u gave me heart attack🤢 I wonder whether Akash knows all this😕 who knows the next twist may be abt something of him.😈

I like this Aman he is doing his best to help Arhi 👏

Looking forward for next update where the Phys-co is going to be revealed and also reaction of Khushi where she will learn abt her beloved jiji's mahan act😡

I love ur every twist & turns u r going great.A big 🤗 hug to presenting this FF to us.This FF now comes under my all time fav list.

According to me all the members of RM & Rainas r looking like culprit in one way or the other as they r part of the crime in some way or the other except Arhi, Aman, NK, Nani & detective ofcouse 😃 Who knows maybe NK too involved😆

I must say ur an EXCELLENT, FABULOUS,AMAZING, STUPENDOUS not getting more words to describe ur skill ⭐️⭐️⭐️ 👏

continue soon...

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Edited by vs_2706 - 12 years ago