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Jai.Mata.Di

@Jai.Mata.Di

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Eagerly waiting to read why Khushi became like this!! Coz, it is unimaginable how "your" Khushi can ever harm anybody!!😕

Thanks for the PM!!😊

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Oh I absolutely loved the way you described mid-summer storms...beautifully written and I have never looked at it this way before...😊

Khushi...WOW!!! You described her so well and so vividly...the fact that she was so calm and collected throughout her mission (if you will) to kill the lady , makes me feel that she isn't guilty about her actions and neither is she afraid of the consequences...calm, collected and precise. That's Khushi in a nutshell in this update for me!! Her characterization is something...and I can't wait to find out more about her!

Great writing!!

Thank you for the pm.

Edited by raomedhz - 12 years ago

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

superb updt

luvd it

updt soon

thanks for pm

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

The description you gave about the character kushi is really amazing.

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rupa1902

@rupa1902

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Wow, Khushi a cold blooded murderer, awesome, I mean such characters make for an interesting read.

Loved how you started the chapter. I had never viewed mid summer storms as that, and now always will :)

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masam

@masam

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

I like this deathly calm, calculative, mysterious Khushi.
A stark difference between this and the prologue Khushi and I'm so ready for this thrilling, criminal FF.
An interesting update.

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

I love the cold precision of Khushi. It's intriguing and sexy!

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

thats actually quite interesting...khushi seems so intense and fascinating...would love to read more!!

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Vindhy

@Vindhy

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

mm... Khushi a sniper?!!! quite out of the blue...now this is one I must read... so please keep sending the PMs..

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neena

@shadesofme

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

oh god that was awesome...
when i read the expert i thought kushi was just normal girl trying to avenge her mothers death...and thought how can she stand against a powerful man like arnav ...but when i read the 1st chapter i am thinking kushi is professional killer and does arnav has a stand against kushi??
nice one and very interesting...i like to see how u are going to take it further...