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blue_sapphire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

nice start..

this khushi is really different..

waiting for the next update!!

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medha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

very interesting!!!... khushis characterization is pretty unconventional n d thing about arnav...intrigued!

im looking 4ward to it...plz pm when u update!

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Res. I'm painting atm..read later..

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Woah!! Where did this khushi come from? I'm intrigued on what's her deal..
No emotions and just shot someone and left..

Awesome update..:) ..

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago

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Farwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Woho khushi a sharp shooter ... Quite unique n interesting ... Loved it ... Cant wait to read more... It really interesting... Thnx for the PM

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

that is an enigma.. i would have never put the name "khushi" on that character ..
but since this is fanfic, i am kinda hoping that there are at least some familiar characteristics in this khushi..

very well written👏

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Anon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Oh man, the way you described everything in that was just ... phenomenal.

And the calm with which she went about killing that woman ... wow.

I'm really loving this Khushi - she's a BAMF!! 😆

A brilliant first chapter!! ⭐️

Waiting for more and thanks for the PM! 😃

Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 12 years ago

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Neha

@howler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Just came across ur ff and i must say, well done...really nice and beautiful...This Khushi is really different...can't wait to read ur next update...

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

It is hard to imagine Khushi in such a role.
She is ruthless.Wondering what made her so?
Thanks for the update.

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

The metaphor between the earth and a pleasured woman was beautifully penned. Neither is she the embodiment of non violence nor is she as forgiving as Buddha; but her achieving his calmness indicates a remorse free mind of her future actions. 'The kill' was neatly done leaving no loose ends; taking in minute details by avoiding personal appearance at the crime site, no gun recoil sound, abandoning the car present during the crime.

A totally new avatar of Khushi, with an intriguing storyline makes a reader re-read the updates and eager for more.