SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: massu91
simply amazing...loved d update...

loved d last para more n ofcorse d last line..."his lemon smell was bak in d car" n surely dats wer khushi n her perfume belong...

awww cute...lovd it...

.wen is d full fledge romance cuming...nt dat m complaining...

m loving dis ignorant love tooo alot...cont sooon 😊 😳

Hey There! Thanks for the lemony comment! 🤗

I am trying to keep the story in sync with the original .. this Denial, Denial play will take some time to solve, especially from Arnav's part. Still it wont be long since this is an SS but there will be random Rabba Veys. 😆 And I am thinking of recreating a few scenes from the show as I would have loved to see it! Let see!!

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Annie12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

awesome!!! your every new update leaves us waiting for more !!!

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chetanahooda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Chetana!

Me and my subtelty issue .. .. LOL .. thank God it finally made sense! I was trying to explore her confusion though she has kind of accepted the fact that she is drawn towards her ..in the process, I have well managed to confuse you. 😆

Habit, my dear, is a start ... lets see where this ultimately takes this two! 😉

I will be off to read your update now!! See you there!!

Have I already said that I love how well you use habit, after reading your work, I have started noticing habits of my room-mate, enough said- she thinks I am weird and creepy..😆😆

The qualms of a writer!

I think, or lets say I have a feeling that I'll get that monologue after a couple of updates. For I like yourself, have a habit😛..the habit of 'know-it-all-now'. I think that was working while I read the update.

So now I am going to wait, patiently wait for the story to unfold and then sit and decide if I have understood the monologue...but I think I have majorly accepted her that way.

Love!

Chetana

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND
Finally she back in his car!!!

You explained their feelings so well👏

Both tried their best to dress up for the other

Khushi with her hair open...

Waiting for the next update apu 😃

Hi Sam! 🤗

Hope you are feeling better now. I am trying to explore the growth in their feelings ..I just hope I am not dragging.

Update your works when you are better ..eagerly waiting! 😊

Take Care!

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: laksh65
cute update, khushi is really behaving like a teen age girl who is meeting her crush,
loved it. especially the image of the lemon was superb, going well with the update.

Thank you so much!! 🤗

I was a bit apprehensive if that image was inconsistent..but I really loved it! Yes .. you have worded it just perfectly .. the feelings of having a crush. She is still at a tender stage .. perhaps willing to give it a chance too! I dont know what Arna will do .. 😛

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: arnavbarun
Fabulous update dear!!!

His lemon is back!!!!! and so is the peace of his mind...

Thanks for giving us an insight of what khushi was going through...

Its difficult for both of them!!

is arnav really taking her for a client meeting???

Thank you so much for the comment! 🤗

I will try to explore their feelings simultaneously going forward ..they will not be at the same level most of the times .. I hope what I worte so far about these two made sense!

What do you think Arnav is capable of doing at this stage? 😉 As I have said before, the character sketch is exaclty similar to the show and I am willing to be in accordance with that as much as possible! 😃 So more or less, you will know what is coming!!

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: GirlOfFire
very cute update!! me want more!!

LOL ..in that case Madhu, you would need to wait a bit more! 😆

I am done till 22+ part of WTL right now .. thanks to Ritz! Will get back to you on it once I would be able to catch up with the current update .. in one word, right now, FABULOUS! 😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Originally posted by: saomom
It's official. I'm a fan. Looking forward to the next update!

Awhh! I am flattered. 🤗 Thank you so much. Will try my best not to disappoint you!

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: srmirji
this is one amazing story...reminds us of the good old times of IPK.

thanks.

written very well..

sri.

Thank you so much Sri ..this is totally inspired from the old school IPK .. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#730

Originally posted by: vqwerty
Farah Di...U getting us hooked to this ss...It was an awesome update...🤗
Khushi talking to her mom abt Arnav and her confusion was very good...😃

Awww she asked Dm to take few years of hers for him...😉😉

Arnav getting ready to impress Khushi...how cute...

Anji and Arnav convo was so good...😃

Morning phone conversation was hilarious...😆😆

Last line "His lemon was back in car"was Awww...

Thank you so much!!!! 🤗

It means really a lot that you liked this update .. I myself was a bit apprehensive altogether. 😳 And the last few episodes have left me totally confused! 😕 I dont even know if I am liking it or not!

Keep me encouraged, darling! 🤗

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