SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: Shweta1691
Lets rejoice!!! Lemon is back!!!
So where r they gng so early morning???? Next updatewa check karne ka padi 😃

Thanks for the PM

P.S. : Eagerly awaiting D for Desire

Yeap celebrationt time ...! 🤗 Cant keep them apart for long!

Where do you think he might take her? 😛 He is still ASR! 😛

PS: 😳😳😳😳 Early next week! Promise!!

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: bs_deeps

Another wonderful update..I loved that last para...I was just imagining how BS would do that scene..and that last line 😉 his lemon..eh?

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Lemon in so many ways .. Dips, what exactly do you have in your mind?? Come, on tells me!!! 😉

When I write, I try most of the times to imagine them in the picture .. and when I imagine Arnav i.e. BS .. I sometimes have to take break to drool mentally for a few minutes! 😆 I was thinkin of your DP when I was writing about the office confronation of the last chatper and this time Gandhari's DP. 😆

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Tara Singhania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Finally after so many days shez der in his car...lovely!! 😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: sias2
loved the update.,oh Khushis new hairsTyle..interesting..
Arnav is so cute he actually dressed up for her..
thanks for pm

LOL ... yes he did and he would never admit it. 😆😆

Thank you so much for being here! 🤗

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: Ethereal-Path
Perfect line - His lemon was back in the car.

Though not much happened in this update, but the changes in their thoughts, anticipation and battling emotions were all well expressed ! I loved how Arnav was feeling restless coz of the missing tangy smell that he couldn't just wait to get it back again... .lol

loved the update!

-V-

P.S: Did I tell you I love this FF coz of another reason, that's coz of my love for Citrus ... I'm myself in love with lemon flavored fragrance... :P

Thank you so much! 🤗

I wanted the readers to understand where they stand right now with their acceptance of each other before proceeding the story further. Hope it worked! 😊

PS: Same here! I am more into fruity or citrusy fragrance than floral ones. Even green tea would do! 😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: tash10

I loved the whole Khushi's point of view about how she was feeling! We had seen Arnav's in the last update and here it's just perfect! And yes, jalebis are a must!!😃 How she first wished for his sweet death and then panicked asking Devi Maiyya to take years from her life was so so adorable ❤️

Anjali is such a sweet sister!! She alreaady guessed what is going on in Arnav's mind!!😃

Haha the phone convo was hilarious 🤣

His lemon was back in the car!!😳 Aww!!

Awesome update!! I so love this SS!! ❤️

Thank you so much for the lovely comment!! 🤗

I am thinking of introducing a few more characters .. but no Shyam! 😛 Will keep the character sketch similar!

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arnshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#737

perfect plx pm me the next part...its really a fantastic story.

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: chavvi16
oh my what the hell is going on with these two
so she too missed him huh well not surprised about it at all man
poor khushi cant understand what she is feeling why she is feeling it
what else is gonna happen i wonder
man this arnie he is determined to irritate her aint he
well he needs to after all his sanity is in question as well as his ego
cant wait for what he does next man

These two are nutters .. that's all I can say!!

That's why we need Devi Maiya to intervene at times. 😃

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: jakhushi
This was beautiful Farah... Loved how you captured her feelings..But Trust you to do that for our KKG 😊.
Both dressed to Kill😆 and yet they remain the Emperor & empress of Denial. Atleast Khushi has a little more sense...

Now That " His Lemon" is back in his SUV...Cant wait for the "Meeting" to happen. I know you are super busy...but please jaldi update much needed!

Both dressed to kill .. haha! Khushi, do you know I actually wrote that? And then deleted it .. 😆 This Denial Game has just started ..and Arnav Bitwa is not going to let it end that soon, this much I can tell you.

Will be off till Sunday and will update the FF first this time! 😳

Hope you are having great fun with Puja! 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: reallyhappy
dt was sooo amazin..:):) 👏👏👏👏 juz tooo gud.. none of dem wer at peace.. bt none wntd 2 take d initiativ.. he cudnt say sorry.. n she wudnt move w/o his sorry.. well well well.. equals nw.. d fragnance z back in d car..
bth notices each othr..

both r dressin 4 each othr evryday..

bt cnt make things norml..

d anger z back..
Jalebis..lol..dont remind me of dt..

shw ka scene ghum ra dimaag me mere ab..😆😆😆

she said evrythin abt Arnav 2 Arnav in sleep... lol nw he wud b knowin wt she was xpctin.. isnt it? well.. wer dey really goin 4 sum meetin or a date? i mean itti subeh meetin? haah..!!! Anjali was cute wid her teasin..:D loved it.. hope things gets back 2 nrmal in d nxt chptr..
..:)

doo pm me wen u update more..😛😛😛😛thnxx😊😊😊

Is that you in the DP? You do look really happy ..mashAllah! May you always be this happy in your life! 😊

I was wondering ..Arnav cant say sorry so easily, can he? But I have to finish this SS soon too ..I am thinking if I should make him say sorry soon! 😛

Haha .. yeah I am using things from the show here .. I really want to relive the old school IPK and I hope the readers can do that to along with me.

That phone convo was a hint to Arnav on what he needs to do ..I have no idea if he is going to pay any heed to that! 😉

Meeting or date or both ..lets see!