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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

very interesting start...

who was the man chasing the girl...

who is the man she is going with...

and first who is the girl...

is she Geet...Geet is a call girl...

thanx for pm...

for Khumari-2...I will suggest if u are planning to write same story of Khumari-1 forward with same CS then it is ok to call it Khumari-2...but if u are planning to write completely different story then I think it is better to start with new name...

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Cynthia

@CiaMaaneet

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Interesting...👍🏼

I guess woh dono Maaneet thein...😕

Continue soon...😉

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

congrats for new storyy...

love ur stories and beig a dark one i would enjoy itt

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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

love u alottt
another ff :D
acha suno wonderful concept really loved it
im soo attached to ur writing alwayss and same here 😳
umm dnt knw abt chars re but im sure one of dem is msk 😉
update soon
waiting fr more parts
love u ❤️

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allibr

@allibr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

superb,.continue soon with the updates

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Congrast On New FF
Amazing Prologue...Loved it
Do Continue soon
Thankx for pm

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

congrats for new story

d concept is different nd interesting

continue soon

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Oshi, welcome back to the 'thrill' ride. As far as KHUMAARI2 is concerned, Sara don't have any problem untill and unless you dare to think of dropping the idea to write the season2. About this, here me go.

The title, the warning, the prologue, the suspence, the poem, the siggy, the secret, the story, the wait, the response and the EVERYTHING, amazing beyond simply words. Neither a CS nor names nor anything much except the 'keep banging your head for guessing it all' makes it more enjoyable. That's what i LOVE about you. Never fail to surprise, to try, to imagine and makes us all flow with your blissful creation. By now, you know how i am feeling.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Another ff from you...WOW!!!!

I have been a silent reader of ur ff khumaari...i loved it a lot...

Now i don't want to miss the chance of reading this ff from u...

Coming to this ff...the concept is a bit serious...but still i liked it...i hope that the persons int he prologue were maan and geet...idk really...it's a guess...

Update soon...waiting...