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Posted: 12 years ago
Now that's what i call a BLOODY comeback...!!!

What a bang yaar...!!

Supper Doupper concept...!!!!

That's tottaly my style...'different'!

I am really 'head over heels in love' with u'r story yaar!!!!!

Now...here's what u gonna do:

1.Add me in u'r pm list.

2.Never ever care about critisism.u'r doing mindblowing work!

3.Don't ever think about stopping this ff(as it's been a latest fashion here...lol)

4.Don't make me wait for update...i can wait not more than 3 days...so..(get my hint)

5. ...umm...don't have number 5!...oh yeah...!Continue super Soon!


Plz...plz...update soon,

Love,

Zahran.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: OsheenDGr8


@dazzlingdivz
Yaar I also luved dark lover, one of my fav. So happy that u are hooked to tis one too n U are most wlcm on my all threads but only if u wud leave such nice comments lol😛


hehehehe i loved it actually 😉

and main waise aapke thread pe nahi aa sakti 😲 bina cmnts k 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago


shit girl i soo wnna kill u for doing this to me...grrr if not me my hitler gang will sure shot u dead if they came to know i was all ready to lose mt sanity over this Maan...shit!! I mean!! The way you described him I was looking at my lappy screan boring
my small small cute eyes with mouth hung straight flat...thinking how will he look in real...*thoughts jerked...iss se zaida sochne ki himatt hoti uss se pehle i was brought to real world with mum's continuous nagging asking are u talking to some BF of urs that u all red and pink* m a pure virgin girly dont give such yummy tortures to this poor baby...i was about to get kicked out my house if any of my hitler would have read what i was reading and the way i shut my lappy screen they sure i have some BF...hmmm cribbing throwing all jutties and chappals ur way for this ;(

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part1--


aoww the morning couldnt be much blisfull for a girl finding such a hwt handsome hunk lieing rt next to her protectively holding her in his strong arms from the damn world outside...aowww that was a perfect start u know

ooOps now tell me one thing clear...who was actually drooling over Maan? Then her sister and now she LoLz ab kya kare baba Maan Singh Khurana k charm se kambhakhat kab koi ladki bach sakti hai winkie winkiesss !! But i have something irking my mind...from the talk t seems she belong to some good family with a real family with her, than what circumstances lead her here in this world...? I guess U gnna take ur own sweet tym revealing that now isnt it!!

Aoww then the other scene woop woop this girl going gaga over just his look but over his gestures as well...wo-a-oow am in love with that part...LoLz subha subha dream world se uthane k lie bed se neeche faink dia princess ko LoLz

ooppsss after that sweet relaxing bath the end was...i dont know what to say!! Actuallly ...blank...now what will she say...actually dint lyked that gesture of his but yet he is right on that part...grrr just i dint lyked it...jaldi se meri Geet ko Maan k paas pahunchaao samjhiii !!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part2--
ohkiz the start was something worth it although i missed my darling Maan throught the part but yet found it needed to explore Geet's background as well so jaao maaf kia Maan ko na dene k lie tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi kaise readers se palla pada LoLz

ohk jokes apart

update was good, Means Geet's present life was all the more revealed getting us know what the real world and cercunstances she is dealing with ohkiz...but the fact remains still unleashed is...how she came here...grrr waiting for that...

Naina got away from this skumpy atmosphere means she is saved from her life and needs ahhh sooo soothing isnt it!

And then coming towards Geet, her false name is Muskan here ohkis...for a second i was confused u know...

Ooopppsss she she brought money given by him won't deny i dint liked that part although it was the requirement of theme yet...i cant help my baby heart that part...

And that too 25,000 baba ji mehar karo...sheesshhh

ooo meri ek baat btaana zara, actually warning...DARE U NEXT TIME COMPARE MY MAAN WITH ANY FILTHY PHSYCO LIKE DOG I'LL CHOP U INTO TINNY MINNY PIECES SAMJHI!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part3--


aoww so Ms Handa was on leave from her job for a long tym! Oye does U mean she is doing this just for her leisure and fun! Aisa kya? Aoww How am I suppose to say oops she saved the last bit to enjoy her night in this pub means frm 2mrw she will b back to her norml job...grr I so wnna see Geet out of it! Hushhh! I wnt Maan to save her out of this hell please and that to soon!! M going insane U know!! But trust me U going me crazy for this the same way I got for DL i completed that in two nights tym skipping my sleep for 2 bights well aware dad won't let me mob or lappy as it was my xam thn also n now i stoop low to become thief for steeling my own lappy to read U hush what have U done to me?
Are U a black magician who bound me with ur magic *sob sob* JK

oOops did I told U the song was supa sexy aoww I love it

and specially Geet's stalked aowww I love MSK ops was he following her!! Heheh he felt possessive and insane for her aowiee jealousy is a symptom of love U know na atlst start of kashish here

and now will be waiting to see how MSK will get his desire back

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Posted: 12 years ago

Pata nahi when she will update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz


hehehehe i loved it actually 😉

and main waise aapke thread pe nahi aa sakti 😲 bina cmnts k 😭

Of course Jaan aa sakti.. was just kiddin😆... N see u commented yesterday n m updating today😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

BEAUTIFULLY FLAWED

⭐️Happy Eid Guysss⭐️
Part 4
Muskan darling someone's here for you. A girl in her twenties informed Geet when she came out of her room.
Who?
How would I know? The other girl named Sam or Pam-Geet didn't remember-said with a shrug.
Geet started going down the stairs when the girl again spoke.
It's seems you are going to have a fab night. The girl mocked n then whispered. The man is wearing a mask.
Shit! Geet cursed why all mental patients were in her fate. At least his cloths are good. She thought when she saw him after coming down.
Your customer. The guard said who was sitting before the TV on sofa, like always.
Okay I will be back in a minute. Geet said feeling envious of the guard even he had better luck than her. Giving last glance to her weird customer she again went upstairs to her room, she was already dressed well in a silver top n pink short skirt. Slipping her feet into the heels, she grabbed her purse n came back.
Her apparent customer when saw her coming walked out without saying a word n she followed.
Looking at the mysterious mask she, for once thought about not going but couldn't bring herself to refuse due to some unknown reason moreover the guard was sitting there n she didn't wanted him to complain about her to the boss.
A white BMW was waiting outside n it looked so out of place standing gloriously on her not-so-glorious street. The man opened the passenger door n Geet slid in while he occupied the driver's seat coming from other side.
He turned on the ignition n the car rolled out of their street. Don't know why but Geet was feeling restless, she looked outside the window but nothing good caught her eye.
Soo... Geet started, tapping her foot. Where are we going?
Where do you want to go? Geet stopped; she knew that deep lustrous voice n this increased her restlessness even more.
How did you find me? She asked now only looking at him. Those eyes were unmistakable. Why she didn't pay heed before? You should be more attentive. She mentally slapped herself.
Not that hard. Maan said with a smirk n removed the mask which he wore to keep his identity secret from other's in that soiled surrounding. Press was everywhere n he didn't wanted to be on front page of tomorrow newspaper for hiring a girl.
You remember my driver dropped you n he saw you entering that building, Muskan. He reminded her, emphasizing on the last word to which she just blinked.
Hmm. Was all she said. Should she again ask where they were going? He would again answer with a question or did he not consider it important to answer a wh**e. She would automatically come to know about their destination once they reach there.
Why that mask? She asked out of blues taking a chance.
You would also need one because we are attending masquerade party tonight. Maan said knowing it would surprise the girl beside him.
Geet was left thunderstruck, did she heard it right. Before she could collect some words n utter them they had already reached the place.

Maan Singh Khurana. Maan ducked his head outside the window n spoke to the machine. The large metal gates opened shortly n he drove inside.
It was not Maan's residence Geet knew because of her earlier visit there but it was no less either. It was peppier though but similarly huge n swish.
He stopped the car n rounded towards her n like a gentleman opened her door but Geet was not sure. Was there a protocol while coming out of the car when someone opened your door? Was she to put right leg out first or left?
Why is she not coming out? Maan wondered n grabbed her hand pulling her out.
Let's go. He said closing the car door with his leg n walked inside the house all the time his warm hand held hers in firm yet gentle grip. He halted outside a room n Geet followed example.
You go inside; my sister is waiting for you. He pushed his sleeve back n gazed at his watch. I have a meeting; will pick you up at 8.
Geet was hell confused n she had not even nodded when he walked away in a hurry. She turned to push open the room door when he came back swirled her around n pecked her cheek then he was gone.
What just happened? Geet asked herself, her hand lightly touched her cheek as if not to spoil the lingering sensation of his lips.
But men didn't pecked wh**e's cheek like this n wh**e didn't blush. She chided on catching her reflection in a mirror. Like it would get her blood flow normal, she rubbed her cheeks n walked inside the room.
Listening to the movement a small girl turned n grinned at her. Geet. Right? She came closer. Maan told me about you.
Aa hi... Geet greeted while the girl scrutinized her from top to bottom.
Ooo... Are those real? She suddenly asked pointing towards her breasts making Geet blush for the second time on the same day.
Like brother, like sister. Geet thought n quickly replaced the blush with a smirk. Yeah.
Nice. The girl appreciated. Nikita Khurana, you can call me Niks. She said offering her hand for a shake.
Geet smiled accepting the outstretched hand. The girl was cool n friendly in spite of being rich which was weird; she was supposed to be a bitch.
Geet also noticed that the girl was small but was also beautiful in a cute way. I am a designer n Maan's my younger brother though he likes to boss around.
Wait I know you. Geet exclaimed. I saw you on TV.
Of course sweetie you would, hundreds of fashion shows are organised by me. Now come on we have only little time.
For what?
You can't go to party like this. Nikita asked indicating towards her cloths. Can you?

Nikita's house was a mini mall in itself. There were several rooms attached to one another with just cloths n footwear n cosmetics, she had it all. The next 2 hours were spent in selecting a dress, footwear n accessories.
Then some saloon people came, they did god knows what with the hairs on her head while waxing every other over her entire body as though she was going for some bikini photo shoot.
Geet didn't know why Maan was taking 'her' with him n why these people were dolling her up.

Tadaaa... Nikita sang making Geet stand in front of the mirror.
Geet rolled her eyes n looked at herself... She almost fainted what actually they did to her. She was in wine colour dress that ran down till above her keens kissing each curve n corner sincerely. The neck line was plunging down exposing her breast deliciously while the back fell dangerously low revealing almost everything there.
Her messy, wavy hair that used to be difficult to tame were now perfectly straight descending to her waist in a decent cut. Not only that they had changed the colour too, previously they were jet black n had few streaks of red... now they were shade 3, darkest brown. It reminded her of her natural her colour.
While her hair looked phenomenal her skin was glowing. She always used dark make up n sparkly colours but the makeup done now was... amazing.
Her eyes were smoky n lips glossy, subtle pink n there was a little blush over her cheek that accentuated her high cheekbones making her look all the more alluring. On the name of jewellery there were just two big studs in her ears same colour as her dress. N man she was in love with her stilettos.
Wow... Geet breathed truly astounded, she felt sexy.
She liked it guys. Nikita cheered. Good job everyone.
Other's left the room with that n Nikita turned to Geet. Maan must be coming, he is very punctual. Nikita informed or warned Geet didn't understand. Okay I am going to eat something you want anything.
Aaa no. Geet said afraid if she ate something the dress would give away.
As you wish. Nikita smiled. Here you go.
She handed Geet a beautiful, mystic mask decorated with dark feathers n rhinestones, n left. Geet tried the mask; it covered the top portion of her face letting the plump lips do all the talking.
Geet waited for a few minutes then started checking the various shiny things in the room. There was a book on the table beside the door she picked it up.
The cover flaunted 'Othello', she had read it. She was big fan of classic tales when she used to be a normal girl. Gone were the days when she read books n wore round glasses, she smiled mockingly at her providence n threw the thoughts at the back of her mind.
Maan entered the room n stilled. His eyes stuck to the figure before him not just a figure but angelic figure. Only half of her face was visible while she remained immersed in some book, Maan previously thought she was absolute beauty but now she crossed all limits.
She felt the heat radiating from the side, looking up she found Maan standing there, eyes darker than usual.
Oh am sorry. She said keeping the book down on the table.
When her eyes met his, he lost all control n next Geet was pinned to the wooden door. One of his held her right hand against the door while the other rested on her waist. His hand moved over her waist with such finesse that she practically felt his skin touch her despite the delicate material n wondered how much strength it would take to rip the cloth off her body, if... he attempted.
Geet tried but didn't succeed in tearing her eyes away from his.
Suddenly I was cut off from the entire world around me; I just saw my reflection in his eyes, heard my heart beats in chorus with his, touched what he offered n breathed in his warm breath.
Her long sleek neck invited him n he didn't wasted anymore time. His lips kissed her neck n she gasped, when he kissed her throat she clutched his hairs n when licked her raw skin she almost collapsed.
Stunning. He huskily said before placing his lips at the corner of her lush ones. He pushed her more against the door, crushing her petite body with his hardness. She was unable to suck in the air n still... still she felt good, utterly good.
Maan closed his eyes n stepped back while she remained immobile in her vulnerable condition. He turned around unable to see her like that. The sight was making his patience slip, like sand in fist.
I would be waiting outside. Maan said n walked outside without sparing her another glance. Geet opened her eyes feeling uncovered n empty; she kept a hand on her heart to steady the fast pacing beats. She was not disappointed, she liked to believe that but the frown on her face said otherwise.
Precap- Party!!!
Ufff Geet talli 😳😛
NEXT- Part 5
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Please LIKE n COMMENT, if you liked the update...⭐️

Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
~~~Edited~~~

holy hell!! What was that now? I mean this was actually not expected one LoLz I could have imagined him come round her searching her and all extra but like this he making her catch up with his ELDER SIS?? that was actually no where In my any wild imaginatioan as well...Holy shit!! Is he in love with her already?? Or is he infactuated with her or what actually is going on sab sir k upar se going

LoLz U know I was imagining Geet in that Punjabi Song typ something but after the huge Make over

wo punjabi song kab classic hollywood ball room dance main convert hua even I dont know

LoLz could u plzzz give us a pic as well telling what has been her dress like LoLz if u could find one put it on in next update pwleaseee!!

Ohkiz so he took her there with him hidding his real identity from the bloody media I tell U sometimes media actually acts like a stalker with personalities n that's the only reason sometyms I dont belive in media LoLz

so they stalked her and finally came to know where she is what is her name?? Ooye does he know her real name Is Geet or he thinks that was also a fake name or something??

Ohkiz so itna tempting food saamne ho than how is a hungry lion is suppose to stray off his hunger there is is suppose to pounce and relish na *winkiess* kya yaar sahi tym pe roka

LoLz u always do this na!! In all ur Fictions u hide that aham aham part till a time...I have read 2 of urs n I can guess u wont be showing those X-rated parts here...n I actually love it...coz it make u diff

ooyeee Geet ko tallli hona kuch zaida hi psnd hai...hu-ahhh precap...hope wo Maan ka party main faluda na bnaaye 😛

will be waiting for party to start now
Edited by dazzlingdivz - 12 years ago

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