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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

That was yet another awesome one...

Seriously osheen... ur writing is becoming better each day...

the update was lovely... though nothing i can conclude with it as the characters all seem to be a mystery... but i love this mystery... the catch that is there in every character...

Shaan... he is hell bent on having her for a night..

Deepika.. hates her...

and Maan's client ... wants her to work for the project...

Three different characters having different intentions and opinions of the girl..

and Maan... seriously this guy is an enigma... Geet's confusion was so true... she tried to throw self on him.. yet the guy maintained his control... and then the second time too he didnt cross any limit... but then he doesnt seem to leave her side for even some time...

And his dialogue of wanting her with heart, soul, and body and mind... awww... poor geet... ofcourse she is hell confused and scared... and scared more coz she for the first time is feeling some unknown emotions in her...

He knows her profession.. yet nothing seems to stop his want for her... and that too her entire being... and he is not denying his physical desire too... i loved the way you are just writing the whole thing... His desire and claim; her fear and inhibition... everything was just superb...

Eagerly waiting for the next... and i seriously wonder wat is in this MSK mind...

anyways continue soon.. i so missed ur updates

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#532

fabuls update. loved maan saying he wants her heart soul mind n body...

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Fantastic update

Truly worth the wait

😳

Geet😒 is confused with the emotions Maan is stirring in her

she is scared that someone may recognize her

and to add on to it Maan The Mystery Man😎

Shaan at his flirtatious best 😈

So Geet recruited in KC

Deepika's loss and Geet's gain😉

Maan clear and curt about Geet not going back

The question arises has he already settled the issues with Geet's Boss😕

He wants Geet for himself

Oh!!! boy his declaration and outright clarity of his needs and desire😉

ran chills down Geet's spine

Warning bells ringing😆

But Alas!!!!

Its too late I think😈

Osheen superbly written

each word, each claim, each gesture thickens the mystery around

👏 👍🏼 👏

Waiting already

🤗

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

lovely part dear😊

they both want each other😳

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CrabbyEntity

@CrabbyEntity

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

jealous and angry Maan a deadly combo...no wonder he desires to defeat her...initially i used to thnk geet z more mysterious but after this update i thnk both of them r equally mysterious but i'm lovin' it!!! continue soon :)

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

ooohhh
J Maan ...awesome

Nice update

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#538

wow lovely update.. te way geet is hungry and have no money was so sad, maan see ur geet ...te way shan trying to flirt with her and te way my maan ki angry was so lovely.. now geet is going to work with my maan in kc, wow romance in office.. te way geet is trying to leave km and te way my maan denying and melting her with his touch, was so lovely.. te way maaneet wants each other o no craving for each other was so lovely..geet ki thought and my maan words wow , buddhu maaneet accept ur heart...i love te update