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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

The title drew me to this TS (I have heard off OS & SS) this was unique.
I have read on many must read compilations that are doing the rounds on the forum, about your work and stopped to read this. It is not surprising your writing comes highly recommended, will read the other stories you have written as and when I get time, do share your index, if you don't mind that is.
Coming to this piece, it's fluid and well written; one falls into the trap of giving too many details, this does not. A feature I liked, you want to tell a story and have started off with a lot of promise, waiting for the next instalment.
It would be safe to say your work will be sought out, keenly.
Kalyaani

Hi Kalyaani.

Thank you and PM will be on the way, shortly. :)

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: masam

Hi Kalyaani.
Thank you and PM will be on the way, shortly. :)

@blue: hanging by this seven letter word :)

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

@blue: hanging by this seven letter word :)

That totally cracked me up 😆

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

^Issi baat par ek update ho jaaye *batting her eyelashes*

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Kaliopi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

It is good. Plse continue. Like the stalker concept. PM me when u can.

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: lazyleaves
^Issi baat par ek update ho jaaye *batting her eyelashes*

Patience my friend, patience. 😉

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

^ What is patience? I never heard of the word before!

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: lazyleaves
^ What is patience? I never heard of the word before!

Patience (or forbearing) is the state of endurance under difficult circumstances, which can mean persevering in the face of delay or provocation without acting on annoyance/anger in a negative way; or exhibiting forbearance when under strain, especially when faced with longer-term difficulties

SOURCE : WIKIPEDIA

Patience is the time lapse during which Masam writes and updates her second shot. She does not hold herself vindictive for the consequences or the situations that Lazyleaves go through. She can only tell her to cross her fingers.

SOURCE : MASAMPEDIA

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madhvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

cant believe asr is stalking :P
amazingly well written part.. plz put up part 2 soon
and pm me for other works, this one i will stalk :P

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

dear masam

wonderful story, i like the way you narrate, it is awesome

Cont soon.

PS: i am a regular reader of "IO" and I used to get notified till the chapter 16 and after that I could not get read, as it was continued on blog, could you please send me the pm with the link if you have updated after chapter 16. Thanks dear.