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Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

that was amazing *wipes tears* loved it

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

The intensity of each emotion for Arnav was portrayed beautifully thru words!

Wonderfully written!

Continue soon (:

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inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Sob Sob ...

Coupled with today's epi ...this left me in tears...

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Jammy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Khushi is what makes Arnav human! Through and through!

I am lost for words Rae! Literally just blank!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

beautifully written...but very heart breaking

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Mariam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Amazing update...loved it!!

I love this writing style with all the flashbacks!! All the dialogues were amazing and they do make the whole story more powerful!!

I love how you describes Arnav's feelings so beautifully!! His realization that Khushi actually changed him into a different person was awesome!!

Why Arnav is not thinking to bring back Khushi?? and where is she?? are we going to know this or not??

Do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

You have described every emotion so beautifully.. loved it

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Oh my god..loved it.so arnav dumped khushi after knowing the past.wat happened to her?.wer is she?.
2nd part - i cried for arnav,the same 15yr old boy and 3rd part i cried for arshi's love.fantastic job

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claireDD

@claireDD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

my eyes welled up..
i loved the way she made him human..and my heart wrenched when she left arnav incomplete..
wonderful update rae..
but bring them together soon..this seperation is way hard to handle !!!

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Beautifully written two parts.

The second part where you go through the timeline of events through Arnav's POV highlighting every emotion, ever little feeling he must have felt in those times, was just very wonderfully written.

I am looking forward to how you will take this story forward, Whether they will be separated for long, or a chance co-incidence will bring them together, or something entirely different is in store for us.

Thanks for the PMs

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