SS:Holding On To Emptiness (part 10 on page 64!)

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Khushi on the road to recovery! Great!!!A Wonderful update,

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

oh thank god she is out and he managed to get her out
man was that close or what
arnie you gotta be strong and you did and so she is back
man double update so cool
so what now that she is okay well conscious
the marrigae and all the other issues
cheers for pm

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durba

@durba

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

I'm telling you straight from my heart that this is outstanding. The emotions you portrayed, the characters sketch and the flow of the story with an enriching vocabulary is amazing. Its really very very good. Please continue soon and definitely PM me. I'll be waiting for more. I'm sure it'll turn out to be interesting too. Even though I don't like sad storied but urs had had gripped from start to end. I have three words for your work. Amazing amazing amazing 👏

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glamourbird

@glamourbird

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

so beautifully written!!

Loved how Arnav stood up for Khushi... their love is something u cant express in words!

Awesome work!!👏👏

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Khushi came out of coma, she responded to Arnav...

Don't worry anout updates being filmy, we are loving it...

What next! Would she listen to Arnav and forgive him!

Suspense e rekho na.

Taratari update karo...

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

That was simply beautiful!!! Gosh - I so loved it!

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Peppy

@darkangel93

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: durba
I'm telling you straight from my heart that this is outstanding. The emotions you portrayed, the characters sketch and the flow of the story with an enriching vocabulary is amazing. Its really very very good. Please continue soon and definitely PM me. I'll be waiting for more. I'm sure it'll turn out to be interesting too. Even though I don't like sad storied but urs had had gripped from start to end. I have three words for your work. Amazing amazing amazing 👏

thank you so very much!!!! your comment made me feel so happy!!! im really glad that u liked my story so much... the thing is, i do hv a plot in mind... but its the complete opposite of what ypu guys are expecting from me... im even a bit scared to write it coz im afraid ki bohot joote padenge mujhe... :P but don't worry... i'll pluck up the courage and update is as soon as i can!! :)