FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122

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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-
Hello Hi Samje ya Samjaye!?

This is SHEEER torture! Arnav aur Khushi kab milpayenge!?😳

One reason i absolutely LOVE this Fic apart from the fact that it's so realistic and awesome is the fact that you update daily!🤗I hope i didn't jinx it!!!😆

Your amazing and i'm in LOVE with this FIC!

DAAAMN, Payal!😉 and i LOL'D so hard at Buaji's reaction!🤣🤣

You did total justice to this update!x

The title of the chapter is "the pursuit for happiness" hindi mein tatparya hai "Khushi ki talaash" hahahaa so yeah they will meet obviously.. nai re you haven't jinxed it don't worry.. If I won't write everyday, mujhe neend nahin aayegi 😆

thank you so much for your lovely comments darling! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: Punkin22
This update is superb, you can feel ASR frustration with finding Khushi. I loved how he was thrown out of GH!!! Too funny. ASR is so strong and yet the news of Khushi in hospital totally devastate him emotionally and physically. You did a wonderful job on this update dear. Thank you for pm...

Also, Smithy, I don't know if I have ever thanked you for english translation. I truly appreciate your writing one update in all english. I don't speak Hindi at all so a big thank you.👏

Thanks so much dear for your lovely words! I'll let you in on a secret.. I have seen fics which are all in english and some which are in hindi but they have english subtitles in brackets.. I think those look messy.. so better to have two separate versions.. whoever wants to read whichever version happily reads it 😊

cheers!

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: segad
evil woman, enjoying this aren't you? a little too much 😆

bechaara arnav from pillar to post
buaji at 3 am is not gonna be a pretty sight, pehle to woh dekhna pada and then be womanhandled by her.

hahahaha I loved writing the part about Buaji and Arnav.. I actually imagined it all in my mind and my fingers automatically typed out the dialogues hehehe

enjoying this? oh yes I am 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: VasantiLad
Wow this is really exciting - cannot wait for the next part - naughty to stop at the most crucial part - plz up-date asap Loved how he just walked past Buaji & shouted for Khushi reminded me ogf that scene when he actually did that

thanks dear! naughty? well ya I know people here hate my cliff hangers.. but I really could not put more into the scene otherwise I wouldn't be left with much in the rest of the scenes 😊

will update as soon as I finish replying to all your lovely comments

cheers!

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: christmas
in the last part i was going to say..why do they not take akash into account for anything? if he was told/asked this trip would've been saved. but now i almost want to say he deserved this. however i am not sure what to say on redemption. for it is tricky especially because the two love each other the way they do. and neither wronged the other on purpose for something of theirs its all been misunderstandings because of others. its all a tricky situation. now if this was redemption for the initial days thats a different story. continue soon

Well you'll see the point about Aakash very soon 😊 The thing is Arnav was in such a hurry as if his pants are on fire, he didn't stop to ask anyone else..

redemption well, yes, I'm talking about the old days when he used to make his life a living hell.. now was the time when they were to live together happily ever after.. when they were to finally start their lives together, after putting every bad part of their past aside, but what did Arnav do? he left her all alone.. she is lonely and miserable without any fault of hers. So yes, he has a lot to make up for.

cheers for your comment! 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: *mad*

i know we asked u to make his life living hell practically... but now im feeling guilty... cos i think u r becoming evil...physical fitness?? he might have a heart attack at this rate😕

fuming and sleep deprived buaji..hahhahaahha
typical ASR...rather than sweet talk with Buaji he walks into the house
hahhahah what did he expect? other than getting kicked out of that house😆
Best part is he listened to only half of the msg...when we requested he suffer...i did not expect him to suffer this much😳
I want the nxt part ASAP

You won't feel too sorry for Arnav once you read the next chapter.. pakka! 😉

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Oh I can feel his frustration but I think he deserves it, I know he loves her but somehow I feel he needs to redeem himself big time...if this is the pain he feels her s must be a lot more but I want her to be wooed! I want over the top gestures from him...things that matter to her !

Thanks so much for your brilliant writing and the English translation !

Thanks a lot dear! Yes I think so too! The next chapter will tell you exactly how much he needs to work to get Khushi back. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva
And hes goin back to Lucknow!

Smitzyy🤗

Great Update yaar!😃

Bechari air hostess!😆
Atleast usse milne ka mauka toh mila, humein toh voh bhi nahi mil raha!😛

Liked how you potrayed Arnavs actions/emotions when he thinks about the "blown out of proportion" fight, especially the part where he rubs his chest implying his heart is in pain!💔

His mothers payals...it just makes me smile, everytime!😊

Hahahaa...
LOLed how Buaji treated Arnav!😆
He wasnt even being treated as an ex-damaad!
He was actually thrown out and got a door slammed on his face!🤣
That is so Un-Arnav Singh Raizada!

Arre vaah Payalia!👍🏼
Looks like even shes in noo mood to tolerate him!
She cut his fone...numerous times!!

Never seen Arnav being treated like this!😆
And looks like it, that only the Gupta parivaar can do it!😉

Ok, last part, felt sad for Arnav...jo bol rahi thi poora sun tho leta! paagal!
Why is it everytime when the main part is abt to be said, the phone drops!?😛

Chalo atleast he going there now!

Update soon!

Muah!😳

hehehehe

shwethaaa 🤗 tussi great ho ji! itne vadiya comments likhte ho ki saanu dil garden garden ho jaata hai 😳

Lucknow to Delhi, delhi to lucknow.. pata nahi kahan kahan bhatakna pad raha hai bechare ASR ko hai na? tum agla chapter padho.. fir tumhe gussa aayega ASR par 😆

yeah you are right, only Gupta family can snub him and he can't fight back.. frankly I think he is really scared of the Gupta women when they become all violent - Khushi, Buaji and Payal hahahaha

bechari air hostess indeed.. tension not meri jaan, air hostess will make a comeback 😉

muaaah!! 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: Newbiesoapfan
Smitzy---no words for this one 👏⭐️ - everything!

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR
Omg!! Its freaking awesome update...i loved it ll be an understatement...its amazingly written thought...i mean he is thinking khushi to be in hospital...literally...now this is my third best scene...i cant wait to read more so plz plz plz update soonish...thanks for pm:-)

Thank you thank you! 😃

hey what are your prev two fav scenes? do tell!