FF|Arhi|Th#2 How IPK should've been[Ch14/Sc3 pg122

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

arnie thrown out by buaji was funny n poor chap! now he'll panic till he reaches hospital (serves him right!)😆

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babli0204

@babli0204

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

Quote:"...jabhu titaliya se baat karne ka mann karega, khule sand ki tarah yiihaan chale aoge. Haan?"

...Then she grinds her teeth angrily and to Arnav's astonishment immediately grabs his arm. She walks him out of her house and whirls him outside the main door. Then she wordlessly walks back in and shuts the door on his face.

Silence descends around him.

He stares in utter shock at the door that Buaji had shut on his face. He had been thrown out of the house! Arnav Singh Raizada, of all people!"

WOWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FAB part!!!!!

Nandkishore-ki kasam...just loved Buaji's attitude in handling an agitated Arnav...Now we know where did Khushi get her attitude from !!!! Kudos to both of them!!!! They really know how to tackle and tame Arnav.

So Arnav is back to square one!!! He is thinking that something happend to Khushi as he missed Payal's last words!!!!!

Let's see his next course of action...

THANKS a LOT for the PM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

OMG! Smitzy, I feel so bad for Arnav. But that doesn't mean I forgive him or don't want him to suffer for making poor Kushi heartbroken!

I read your reply and I am glad you are going to make him suffer like he made Kushi suffer. I am not in a very forgiving mood right now, because what Arnav has done, can never be forgiven. Even if he now wants to marry her. Then what? The next time something else happens, he'll do the same thing again, and again and again...

I love the use of your monologues for him that gives us an insight on how he is feeling. And when I read how he is feeling, I feel like crying for him. But then I remember Kushi, I cannot even imagine how she must be feeling. Betrayal from her love, of her love. I'd really like to find out how Kushi is faring. We haven't heard about her for a while. Is she OK? How is she coping with her heartbreak. This is the worst thing a woman can face in her life - the broken trust of her love! I really, really hope she does not do a Kushi and forgive him! He should realize what he has done is the worst crime of love!

Thanks for a longer scene. smitzy. I understand as a writer, you have to make a decision on where to stop so as to make things flow smoothly. But as your reader, I am greedy and I want everything now!!😆

Waiting for the next scene. Thanks for the PM.😃

Appreciate your writing and having it share with us. Thank-you.😃👏

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

oh wow amazing update dear...so arnie thinks khushi is sick,,...lol..loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Natasha333

@Natasha333

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Wooww...Superb Update..

Now arnav will go back to Lucknow..

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Khadija

@fairy_stardust

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Nahii! That's what I feared that Arnav will travel all the way to Delhi just to meet an angry Buaji. And what a kamal welcome she did to the mighty ASR! Good, I didn't want her to be nice and make it easy for Arnav to find Khushi...after all it's his redemption time Poor guy though calling so many times and asking around to receive no response 😆 I feel evil!

I did a double take at Payal's response as she was very composed at first before she angry said- aaj achanak se kyun yaad aa gai uski? Go Payalia. He can't come talk to Khushi whenever he wants and leave her whenever he feels like.

Oh the drama that will ensue in King's George Hospital at Lucknow will be nail-biting. Can't wait!

On another note, you've kept things really realistic even with this FF going on CH 13 with Arnav just barging in the Gupta House and the hostess's reaction to seeing such a dashing man😉 It's even these small things that make me anticipate your updates.