Raizada and Sons - Thread 2

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

i like how you have written two opposite parts. one with high rush and high emotions... one with silence but powerful emotions.

the details of the beach and their feelings pour out of your writing!!

always a joy to read!!

I am nervous... whenever something is this good... something bad must happen...

I shall just bask in their holiday with them!

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: Kishmish
That is such a beautiful picture ...
can imagine the magical and romantic beach walk of our love birds in heavenly Greece ...
silence speaks the language of love in such places ...
"The whole experience left them with a satisfied feeling, to enjoy this beauty with that one person who meant everything..."

@Bold - I like that line and it is so true...

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

kn0w what Kalyaani I am really enj0ying these sl0w r0mantic m0ments y0u've presented and actually think they really need it bef0re the real adrenaline kicks 0ff...s0rt 0f preparati0n and b0nding and build up 0f trust which they wud surely need f0r the battle ahead
G00d w0rk Kalyaani...

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

You are doing full justice to the honeymoon; so all those updates without arhi scenes are more than compensated for😉. The beach backdrop was magical; makes one feel serene after reading about it. Personally I love beaches so it goes without saying that I loved your update.

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xmaangeetx

@xmaangeetx

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

this was very dreamy and i lived every moment

thanks

pm soon

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mirka88

@mirka88

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

This chapter is the kind you read with that slanted head, and 'aww' smile on your face. :P Loved it.

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#717

Just lovely - heartfelt moments between Arnav and Khushi and a walk on the beach - few things are as romantic in my opinion!

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#718

awesome update.

thanks 4 d pm

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

So romantic.. So Bollywood.. Nice change of situation. Thanks

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#720

Such a beautiful way for a day to end. And this chapter was written magically, the way way you have written about the sea, the colors, the sounds, it paints up a vivid imagination. Exquisite Kalyaani :)

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