Raizada and Sons - Thread 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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"You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you cannot fool all of the people all of the time." ~ Abraham Lincoln~

Raizada and Sons

This story showcases two areas of my interest, Politics and the serial IPKKND on Star Plus. The story bears some similarity to the serial and the due credit is extended, the rest I own, the content, premise and writing style.

I would love to read your comments and suggestions, I would not promise to include all in my writing and would like to add, constructive criticism is always welcome; it would greatly help the story and my effort to stay true to the concept. I am relatively new to writing and though I enjoy it immensely, my ability at writing regular updates is limited. The update soon comments, honestly cannot be honored as I mentioned earlier, cannot type that fast.

I request you not to copy/duplicate this work, it's petty to plagiarize and sincerely hope you enjoy my work, like and comment. In case you do find my work interesting enough to recommend to others, please direct them to this page. I strictly prohibit unauthorized use of this fan fiction in parts or whole.

Thank you for reading, please do hit the like and leave a comment if you found the update/story interesting enough. I do send out PMs to those who do so, as I would not want to flood anybody's inbox if they are not interested in reading or receiving PMs for this story. Alternatively, you can also block my name if you don't wish to receive PMs from me, I would not mind. I would want you to enjoy my writing and not like it to be forced.

Once again, thank you for reading

- Kalyaani

Thread One - Chapter 1 to 23

Thread Two

Chapter 24 - You are mine / Chapter 25 - Discreet / Chapter 26 - Jealousy

Chapter 27 - Fantasies / Chapter 28 - Dark Secrets / Chapter 29 - Doctor & Patient

Chapter 30 - Best laid plans / Chapter 31 - The days are mine... / Chapter 32 - Lady in Black

Chapter 33 - Joyride /Chapter 34 - Walk on the beach / Chapter 35 - Indebted

Chapter 36 - Cheat / Chapter 37 - Night under the stars

PLEASE DO NOT COPY UPDATES TO OTHER SITES, THIS UPDATE IS MEANT EXCLUSIVELY FOR INDIA FORUM MEMBERS.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OOHH RES
YES EVERYBODY!!! CANNOT BELIEVE I AM FIRST!
Alright! First up... my heartiest congratulations on Thread#2. You really do deserve it. Really.
Second up... this update was nothing short of amazing. I am in love with this Arnav. I know he has been promised to Aliya, but I cannot help but... WANT HIM SO BAD<3
I am so glad he did not have to sleep on the couch :') What I enjoyed was ofcourse... Arnav and Khushi in this update. Really. I love them.
Anjali is I SWEAR... GETTING on my NERVES. May I please kill her? PLEASE? I understand pregnancy has adverse affects on your mood... but seriously. I feel like going "Bitch, please" whenever she comes into the scene.
DUDE!!! I AM ALREADY WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE!!
Again, my heartfelt congratulations on the new thread! May there be many many more. :D
-V
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing chapter...
Grrr anjali! 😡 but khushi was very tactful
Thanks for the pm! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice ... enjoyed reading it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 update!!!!
when do i get to be the first one!!!!
really loved the arhi chemistry...anjali will always be a problem everywhere...atleast here arnav understands that!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: V323

OOHH RES

YES EVERYBODY!!! CANNOT BELIEVE I AM FIRST!
Alright! First up... my heartiest congratulations on Thread#2. You really do deserve it. Really.
Second up... this update was nothing short of amazing. I am in love with this Arnav. I know he has been promised to Aliya, but I cannot help but... WANT HIM SO BAD<3
I am so glad he did not have to sleep on the couch :') What I enjoyed was ofcourse... Arnav and Khushi in this update. Really. I love them.
Anjali is I SWEAR... GETTING on my NERVES. May I please kill her? PLEASE? I understand pregnancy has adverse affects on your mood... but seriously. I feel like going "Bitch, please" whenever she comes into the scene.
DUDE!!! I AM ALREADY WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE!!
Again, my heartfelt congratulations on the new thread! May there be many many more. :D
-V

V, my dear darling V….you know I like you and lots….a word of advice…..rinse that mouth with soap and wash your hands too….your language…heaven help us. I want you to become a lady, am I clear...a lady.

Thanks sweets…muuaahh

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalyaani

V, my dear darling V'.you know I like you and lots'.a word of advice'..rinse that mouth with soap and wash your hands too'.your language'heaven help us. I want you to become a lady, am I clear...a lady.

Thanks sweets'muuaahh

Sorry Kalyaani... I swear I am not USUALLY like this. ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all congratulation for 2 thread dear..:D
well about update loved it and love the way kushi tackle anjali awe some update:)
continue soon
thankx for pm
love
maria)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ughhh anjali !
Nice answer by khushi :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seriously why women become so bitchy when they come to their maternal home??? Bhavna should have a word with her bcz I seriously believe that it's a mother's job to keep their married daughters in line... Anjilli should remember that Khushi is her sister in law and her husband Krishna loves his sister like Kalindi so when Khushi will become pregnant should she be so mean with anjilli then??? Women like anjilli irk me so much who uses their pregnancy to be a license of being a bitch to their sister in laws.

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