Arhi OS: Grown Ocean *THE END* NEW note -pg17*

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sofiaroth

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

fantastic work ! thoroughly enjoyed the read:) ...and i do agree with bluemistique:D

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udaymanyata07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

👏👏thanks...loved it...fantastic👏👏

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diya33

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

⭐️👏great one. but pls consider this. increase the font size pls.

Edited by diya33 - 12 years ago

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sandyjerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

luved it...😛

👏 👏 👏

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Bushra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

OMG after today's episode i can barely even start on the fifth part! arnav's face, khushi's face
i have goosebumps all over me
on a lighter note
thank you to everyone who liked this story.
i really, really mean it. u guyz da bESt.
i'm not sure when i'll be updating because the last episode completely blew me off, i was so overwhelmed.
but i will update, so no worries! :)

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sandyjerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: cmileyfreaky
OMG after today's episode i can barely even start on the fifth part! arnav's face, khushi's face
i have goosebumps all over me
on a lighter note
thank you to everyone who liked this story.
i really, really mean it. u guyz da bESt.
i'm not sure when i'll be updating because the last episode completely blew me off, i was so overwhelmed.
but i will update, so no worries! :)

👍🏼

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@boyznaka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

No update? Nunununununununununooo 🥺

Update woman!

Waiting.😃

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Arina Raizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Loved it to no ends!!!

Once again I say the CV's should definitely take this OS into consideration for the show! 😛

For a second you scared me that Arnav was going back on his word and then you brought him back full force and I could barely contained myself from jumping with joy 😃

Loved the way you showed him fighting his demons and resurfacing for His Khushi. 😊

And ohh Dadi, I hate her so much!! I think your justifying everyone's hate for Dadi perfectly! 😉 lol.

And don't you dare tell me you're too out of it or what to update!!

I demand an update as soon as possible!!!

Edited by Arina_R - 12 years ago

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

just read parts 3 and 4 and loved them! not an advocate of violence towards women but felt no sympathy for anjali when arnav hurt her.

you've brilliantly portrayed arnav's torment and the blinding clarity of his realisation that khushi was the one for him: his port in a storm... her forgiveness and love heals whereas dadi's and anjali's machinations corrode... his sprinting toward khushi regardless of the onlookers was touching... a truly emotional story that tugs at one's heartstrings

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Amy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

I love the little epiphany he had about the stars. Its was almost like for a split second that he shared Khushis belief about their parents becoming stars.