Arhi OS: Grown Ocean *THE END* NEW note -pg17*

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Abi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

The intensity of the despair was amazingly written! It was absolutely brilliant.

And I'm so happy one more part!!!!! 😆

Loved the update!

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

awesome update love how he is getting rid of his demon one by one throwing them out of his life and their future loved it awesome go asr and get your woman and push dadi and anjali down the stair if they get in your way awesome update thanks for the pm

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Annie12

@Annie12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Wonderfully written.. Thus daadi is sooo..ughhh! Am sure her son must also be mean. No wonder Arnav rightly hates him.

Very nicely written all parts.. I especially liked the comparison between daadi's vengeful nature and Khushi's forgiving one...

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

loved it !!!!

pls continue soon !!!

dadi will neva learn...bloody female !!!!

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Arshi143

@Arshi143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Liked how he realized n went down to hold her... The turmoil n transformation was nicely handled. Waitin for next part :)

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

That was really good.

He knows his mother better and being the kind-hearted woman she is, she would def want Arnav to proceed.

Update soon😊

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Instead of an OS make it into a SS!

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Ahhh, Want This To Happen In The Show 😳

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masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

I read it all in one go. This is absolutely amazing, flowing so beautifully and I don't want i to end, EVER! His emotions are so magically described, it makes me want to hold on to them. The pain is so palpable and so heart-wrenching.
Great job, awaiting the next part! :)