OS: Apshakun (Ill-Fated One) WRITER's NOTE PG 15

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Aparna Mohan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Amazing one . . 👏
If Arnav does that to her then he also deserves that pain. .

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Farah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Wow!!What a pleasant surprise!Thank you for writing it!& thanks for the PM!

Edit:That's.. heart-wrenchingly sad!Neither mother nor the baby survived?& Khushi had to suffer all that before this final blow too? You know, when we hear or read about similar things happening to good people, people who never did any wrong to anyone, it makes you feel like there's so justice in this freakin' world!

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Its sad how she fared, poor girl! I hate the word Apshakun.

Wonderfully written part,

Arnav Singh Raizada stood on the edge of the hill, looking down at a small mound of earth. The crude wooden cross was jutting at a crooked angle above the small brown heap of dirt. The smaller cross, just next to the bigger one was jagged and crooked too, so he reached over, as if to straighten the grave markers, as if to right the wrong.

Loved this!

Thanks for the PM

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Abi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

AWWW, that was so depressing. No one should have to go through such mental and physical pain over a wedding...but it was written very beautifully! Loved it

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Vee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Please everybody. Kill me already.

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Gunjan Mukherjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Such a painfilled os..vry difficult to digest..cdnt help bt cry..
its sad dat women alwez has to bear d wrath, n men gt away wid murder evn..
bt m sure dat khushi wud get peace in some othr world, n d happiness she dsrved..
bt i sincerely hope this dsnt hppn on d show..