OS: Apshakun (Ill-Fated One) WRITER's NOTE PG 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow that was really emotional. I hope nothing like that ever happens in the show. I think khushi is a very strong character and if something like this did happen to her I believe she will survive it and become stronger.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a very poignant story, almost too painful to read... kudos to you for writing it! I had tears pouring down my face before I came to the end of it... it is so sad that women are always blamed for everything in this world whereas the men get away with murder! relief at the thought that khushi might be in a better world that truly appreciates her uniqueness... hopefully, arnav felt some sense of guilt for what he put his wife and innocent baby through, which might be why he came here
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh dear god you HAVE to continue this, you MUST, absolutely have to! *breaks into large sobs*
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ok i am speechless that was so heartbreaking and so sad so hurtful poor khushi her whole life she never got her happiness hope the bas***d suffer for all its worth and hope this never happens on the show you should do a part 2 asr need his pain

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ouch that was painful... and one that makes me want Arnav Singh Raizada to suffer like no man ever has...
I just hope that Khushi's love has allowed Arnav to be alive somewhere in that personna of ASR and that ASR is not a dissappointment again. But slim chances of that given that ASR's brains go for a walk when he is angry! Not looking forward to more rona dhona and ASR angst in the cming week.. if it does, this time Khushi should bang something on his head and walk out!
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Heart wrenching...very poignant...I salute you for writing such an emotional OS...I can understand te effort and pain you have taken to pen it as a author.Just being a reader , it brought tears...so expressing it is not an easy task...Hats off to you dear.Thanks for the PM
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I cried. And I can't give you a bigger complement than that.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Painful and so very very sad

*sobbing*

Sobbing some more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, That was the MOST sad OS I have ever read...and I have read a lot of them...
God, People are cruel...they always have been, But sometimes also the people we love are just if not more cruel then strangers...Their words hurts more then any other person...

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