OS: Night Of Honour

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@debby_11

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shit...I actually started crying...its sad but a beautifully written story. It touched my heart...Loved it dear :)👏

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kritu17krits

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Wooow
So emotional
I luvd it
Realy nyc

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

This is how it should be.

This is how I imagine it to be.

I know that everyone wants them together, everyone does not want a separation, but you made even the goodbye seem...beautiful in a way.

Lovely OS. I can't even tell you how much I loved reading this!

Great work on describing all the emotions, the circumstances, and the strong love that made Arnav reach the decision he made, along with how much it hurt them. In the end both wanted the other to be happy, and that resulted in them parting ways.

Hats off to you for writing such an amazing OS! I had been dabbling on the idea of penning something down along the same lines, but you did a beautiful job with this OS! :)

~K

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LuxCal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

OMG - what a fabulous OS...You should definitely write more...this brought me to tears!!!

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neverbefore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

That was truly exquisite...you kept their love and respect intact, which is so refreshing. I was bawling at the end.

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Zana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

OMGOMGOMG!! SO DAMN WELL-WRITTEN! Hell. I am in shock! OMG, please don't let the CV's read this. I might die 😭

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essess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

I'm crying!

Its so sad, and sadly its also what should really happen... unless there is a new twist and garima is not involved in the deaths -- maybe chacha ji did that--- otherwise this is how it should go...BUT still am very sad!

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

That was so painfully, achingly beautiful...

More so because of this one line that u have written...

Whatever shape his heart was in right now- every beat, every pump, every course of life it sent rushing through his body... was only for her.

Whatever happens, when he comes to know of the truth, his hurt, his sense of betrayal coz he has come to love and respect Garima as Khushi's mom... his love for Khushi, everything has so well been depicted by you. This is something so easily imaginable, something that can really happen.

I felt so sad reading it, and yet i felt happy coz the way he told her those things, laid out his heart in front of her...and her reactions from beginning to the end... simply brilliantly put.

Good Job!!!👏 👏 👏

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