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subiscs

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

just caught up with the pm,,,,!!!! annie loved it😊

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jenshad

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

I Loved This Khushi :) 😳

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Shariqa_here

@Shariqa_here

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Abeer this was brilliantly written hun.

Every word used was so accurate for the emotion that you wanted to display.

I kind of felt like I was watching it happen in my mind just as I would on TV.

It was awesome!

If you have updated further, do send me a PM.

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angelic_leena_3

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

love it..thanks for the PM😃

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starzyasha

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Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

loved it!!! Do update soon...
Thank you for the PM...

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Shariqa_here

@Shariqa_here

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Hi Annie!

I loved the way you described this scene with Dadi.

The only part where I just stopped is where you mentioned her to be caught like a goat in front of lights!😆

I think I would have preferred an elephant or something a bit more deadly to be caught like that and yet showing arrogance even when they know they are caught!😃

She does seem unmoved even when caught so goat for her would be like comparing a hippopotamus to a mouse😆

Anyway, on the whole that update was awesome👍🏼

P.S. You haven't replied to my maha-pm yet by the way😳

So y have u changed your ID?

Edited by Shariqa_here - 13 years ago

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varshini karthik

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Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I just hate that Dadi!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

loved the update dadi is so stupid the woman comes from the age of men are gods and women mean noting asr send her and her snake to live in one house without your money and she will see how fast he loves anjali thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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Natasha

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

awesome update thanks for the pm

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PhoenixRadar

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Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Shariqa_here
Hi Annie!

Hola Deedee!! Haaye! I love your font!! And I'm always waiting for your comment!! *sniff* And at last you commented!! 😳

I loved the way you described this scene with Dadi.

The only part where I just stopped is where you mentioned her to be caught like a goat in front of lights!😆

heheheehh... I know!! i actually wanted to put in something else, but couldn't come up with anything sensible enough for this female! 😛

I think I would have preferred an elephant or something a bit more deadly to be caught like that and yet showing arrogance even when they know they are caught!😃

She does seem unmoved even when caught so goat for her would be like comparing a hippopotamus to a mouse😆
🤣 Why you never fail to crack me up!! *hi-fi-ing you*

Anyway, on the whole that update was awesome👍🏼
Thanks, Love!! 🤗

P.S. You haven't replied to my maha-pm yet by the way😳

So y have u changed your ID?
P.S.: I did type out my reply and that too a huge one, but this crappy internet just gave the slip and I lost whatever I had typed for your PM! 😭 This blasted net problem! Hmmph!😡
Umm.. You'll get to know in the PM, love!!