Mirage #4 NEW NOTE Pg 146 18/2/2013

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

congrats on the new thread

great update

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: jshreya16
Muah I love this ff so much...thank a lot ! I have a request please try to bring a romantic scene as u had written in ur bedroom series here also for some fun!!!! I haven't read them in years n want to read it now! Please try to bring one! 😉 😆

i think she is talking about mischief managed series...

@bold: 🤣 here we all are worried about their survival and you are getting requests to write something romantic 🤣

anyway i don't mind if you bring some romance😉 maybe a pre honeymoon ☺️you know some rehearsal for their first night 😉 😆 and this will also help us to forget for a while about which will be the big day...??? Wednesday or Thursday

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NILOUFER

@BARUN-myladdu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: lilly205

i think she is talking about mischief managed series...

@bold: 🤣 here we all are worried about their survival and you are getting requests to write something romantic 🤣

anyway i don't mind if you bring some romance😉 maybe a pre honeymoon ☺️you know some rehearsal for their first night 😉 😆 and this will also help us to forget for a while about which will be the big day...??? Wednesday or Thursday

oh wow dis looks like an awesome plan..see rach...v ve got some great ideas here...plz USE THEM...

lilly u r right hun ll surely take our mind of dt thng...buurrr...i m so scared already 😭😭

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Hi !!!

I usually start my comment with 'wonderful update' so ...

Wonderful update !!! 😃😃

Gosh Arnav is in a big trouble !! I think I didn't realize until I read the first part of this chapter !

I thought that Arnav will give back the black file back and the problem is over !! I'm so silly !

Of course I tried to kill Kashyap, and Kashyap is a powerful man so he can follow the trail back to Arnav's gang !

On hand we have Lavanya who will do everything to take her revenge on Arnav and on the other hand we have Hari Kashyap who will do everything to take that file back ! I think Arnav is finished !

And Khalid who wants Arnav to kill Kashyap ! 😕😕

Not shocking at all ! Khalid is the boss, Arnav means a lot for him and he doesn't want anyone to follow the trail back to him so it's obvious he will get rid of Kashyap ! But what shocked me is that Khalid offered it to Arnav and didn't order ! Did Khalid realize that Arnav has changed ! And I also felt that Khalid somehow was disappointed with Arnav because he has been caught !

But that's a good thing that Arnav didn't accept to kill Kashyap ! That shows that Arnav changed for Khushi ! 😃😃

Abbas 😈😈

You own brother didn't leave you anything (just a family inheritance) !! 😈😆

But something scares me, is Abbas going to change his plans ?? I mean he knows that he can't fool Khalid, so maybe he'll kill Arnav before thinking that Khalid will change his will ! And also Abbas is really curious to know why Arnav is so important for Khalid, maybe he'll forage about until he finds that Arnav is his son ; what annoys me in that case is that maybe Abbas will brainwash Arnav with the father sentiment (hope you see what I mean) so Arnav will be on Abbas'side ! 😕😕

And what disgust me is that I'm almost sure that it's Abbas who killed Aarthi ! 🤢🤢

It seems that two persons covet the same fortune but none of them deserve it !!!

Btw where are my 100 crocodiles, you can use them also for Shyam I won't mind 😆😆

So Arnav has decided to accept Abbas's offer to settle himself with Khushi at Bangkok !

Well I think it will never happen not because Arnav will suspect that Abbas is up with something but because a lot of things will happen in the meantime !! 😉😉

Arnav and Khushi's part was so cute !! My smile was permanently on my face 😃😃

In fact I loved Khushi's attitude, reactions ... well she was perfect !! 😃😃

Her fears, her sadness are completely justified ! But just like Arnav I couldn't bear it, I love a bublly, a smiling Khushi and I'm really happy that Arnav knows how to bring her back !! 😉😉

The Ice candy scene was

Khushi's face at the Ice candy's sight was lol her mood changes so easily with small things !! I wish I was like her but I'm not, I'm so pig-headed !! 😆😆

Originally posted by: molten_lava
No matter how tough the circumstances were around them, they managed to make each other happy, often pulling out the other one from grief. And maybe, that's why they were meant for each other. Unknowingly, they had grown to become support pillars for each other, their lives interdepending on the other.

So well written !!!! 😃😃

The last part was also wonderful, that left me with a lump in my throat espaecially the last lines !! Khushi has sacrified a lot ofr Arnav, I hope now she'll get all the happiness she deserves !! However I have the feeling that there's still a lot of pain waiting for Khushi ! 😳😳

And the bullet, as you said it stands for the beginning of their relationship, it has a lot of signification !!

Pikachu : because of Lilly it only reminds me Lilly !! 😆😆

But the scene was so cute and funny !! After Aakash, Arnav is insecured because of a toy ! 😆😆

Now Aman !! 😊😊

Confused, confused and confused !!! I can't figure out him !! Really I don't what he'll do !!

The only thing I know is that whatever he does, I'll understand him !!

He's one of my favourite character of this FF, because he's in a big dilemma, his situation is worse than Arnav or Khushi's !!

Rachel I don't know what you reserve to Aman, maybe you have already planned to kill him , but please make that his family is safe because Aman endured a lot for them, I don't want it to be in vain ! 😕😕

So Aman is going to be witnessed on Khushi's side !!

Well it's interesting !! But will the mariage take place ?? will Aman be there ?? what will happen ?? 😉😉

It's a good thing that Arnav didn't ask directly about Aman lies because, otherwise Aman would have watched out ! 😉

Aakash 😆😆

I love him !! But I prefer Aman ! 😆😆

Really now I understand why Aarthi run away from her home !! I'm sure Aakash is like his gandpa, the same mentality !! 😕

It's quite sad !!

He proposed her !! Ok at least now he knows that Khushi really loves Arnav and not him, but why did he hold her face 😡😡

Aakash was right falling in love with Khushi, she's unique, she's perfect, she's the dreamgirl ! 😊

But Aakash, it's the time to forget her, and to find that nurse who has crush on you !! 😆

I hope we'll see him again ! afterall he is one of the 5 main character of this FF !!

I understand why he doesn't want to attend the mariage but it's sad that none of Khushi's friend will be present ! 😭😭

Will the mariage take place ?? Will Aakash change his mind ?? Will Aakash find out who the nurse is ?? 😆😆

Shyam, Abbas, Aman, Lavanya, Kashyap they all have some other plans for Arnav !

Are you leading us toward a sad ending ??? 😡😡

Originally posted by: molten_lava

"Khushi, you yourself have said that good things happen to good people. Even if I'm not a good person, you definitely are. I know nothing good lately has occurred in your life. But I'm sure, you will get all the happiness that you're entitled to." Arnav consoled her.

No, you're not 😃😃

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Ayera

@chocolover98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Omgomgomgomg!

AMAAAZING update x

And congratulations for the new thread! :)

This FF truly deserved it ;) :)

Now back to the FF--

Just Faaab x

Omg! Abhaas found the will...what's he gonna do? :O

Awwwh! They're leaving the place forever, taking all the memories with them :')

Aww! Khushi finally showed him the bullet she's been keeping with her all this while :')

That was kinda emotional :)

And Awww for the pikachu ;) :P

Omg! I'm so worried for Aman. I hope he changes his mind and doesn't kill Arnav ;) :/

And of course I hope first of all Arnav comes to know about the Aman drama x_x ;)

And akaash! Truly NO COMMENTS! I loved the way Khushi answered him...bahahahahahahaha! Lol ;) :p

But feeling bad for the man at the same time :/ ;)

Lol! Once again I love stalking you ;) ;)

Thanks for the update :)

Update soon ;)

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: molten_lava
First of all, my favorite all time best readers. Lilly205 and Agathe. Without you both, this FF would never be the same for me. Believe me, everytime I update, I wait for your comments coz you analyse my story very well. You pick up even the smallest nuances and give an entire different meaning to this story. When I read your comments, I have a huge smile on my face and you make even my most sad day, happy in an instant. Maybe you both are the one reason that I never want this FF to end, coz I will miss you both so much. I love you both!🤗

And the Best reader award goes to Agathe 😆😆

Seriously Thank you so much, I'm pleased to know that you love my full of mistakes comments 😃😃

But let me tell you that I comment so much, stalk, spam only for Mirage 😉😉

I'm just crazy of your FF, because of the suspense, the thrill, and the romance of course !!

You're doing an awesome job !! 😃😃

And even if you finish this FF, don't worry I'll stalk all your OSs and spam there 😈😈 so you won't miss me 😆😆

Originally posted by: molten_lava
And my other fav reader, now known as Agathe: Girl! I had a tough time figuring it out who you were after you changed your username. It was only by your profile pic I could recollect.😆

😆😆 Sorry I just wanted to have meaningful username than a random one !!

Gosh I'm quite late !! My patners in crime have already started their moral duty 😆😆

I love you too dammit

🤗🤗

Edited by Agathe - 13 years ago

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humsafar

@humsafar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Aveiro
Edit!

I'm first! I swear I'm an awesome stalker!

So Arnav wants to move away straight after honeymoon? I still feel as though something bad is going to happen just like the show where marriage won't happen. Unless you surprise as all.

Abhass found the will :O What's he going to do? I'm so worried now.

I don;'t know what to say about Aman I hope he doesn't betray Arnav. I really hope he doesn't.

AKash finally said he loves her but Khushi clearly told him she only loves Arnav.

Hope he finds someone else.

Amazing update

hey when r u updating ur stories

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Congrats on the new thread!

And the update as awesome! I ope hope hope that Aman changes his mind! Too much is tacked up against Arnav! But I want him to have his happily ever after, because Khushi deserves that.

Sorry, just in one of those moods when I want every type of pain to go away from this world!

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Shreya

@-MKB-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

FINALLY MY NAME RACH...:P

thank you!

and as for the update..

eeep *biting nails*...whats going to happen now?

arnav was scheduled to be killed a day before his wedding??...

NOOO!!!

and the scenes between arshi...awww...:')

update soon rach!...good work...;)

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Agathe
Hi !!!

Khalid offered it to Arnav and didn't order ! Did Khalid realize that Arnav has changed ! And I also felt that Khalid somehow was disappointed with Arnav because he has been caught !

Abbas 😈😈
what annoys me in that case is that maybe Abbas will brainwash Arnav with the father sentiment (hope you see what I mean) so Arnav will be on Abbas'side ! 😕😕

And what disgust me is that I'm almost sure that it's Abbas who killed Aarthi ! 🤢🤢

Btw where are my 100 crocodiles, you can use them also for Shyam I won't mind 😆😆

Pikachu : because of Lilly it only reminds me Lilly !! 😆😆

Now Aman !! 😊😊

Rachel I don't know what you reserve to Aman, maybe you have already planned to kill him , but please make that his family is safe because Aman endured a lot for them, I don't want it to be in vain ! 😕😕

Aakash 😆😆

But Aakash, it's the time to forget her, and to find that nurse who has crush on you !! 😆😆

I understand why he doesn't want to attend the mariage but it's sad that none of Khushi's friend will be present ! 😭😭
Will the mariage take place ?? Will Aakash change his mind ?? Will Aakash find out who the nurse is ?? 😆😆

i was so mad at Khalid when he offered Arnav to Kill Kashyap that i didn't think it in the way you mentioned... but i guess he has already know that Arnav has changed you remember their meeting when Arnav told him about Khushi and when Arnav had brought khushi to meet khalid...??? and i don't think that Khalid has disappointed with Arnav... he knows that the boy is in love... he is totally understanding his situation... but am sure Khalid will definitely disappoint with arnav when he will come to know that Arnav has planned to leave him and join Abbas 😕

i don't think that Arnav has any soft corner for his father... unless Abbas tell him some fabricated story... you know Abbas will never be able to convince Arnav to take his side by telling him the entire truth

and maybe you are right about Abass killing Aarti but in that case why is Khalid still unaware of that... you know Khalid is a man with brain or maybe he is just blind with his brotherly love...😕

and your crocodile are not multiplying???? i mean you should have some 150 crocodiles now 😆😆😆 100 crocodiles are so less for abbas

this is because of molten... it was Khushi's pickachu that made me fell in love with this character... and the way molten brought it into her FF just remind me of the scene of movie "Remember Me" when the hero wins the stuff toy for heroin on their first date...

i don't want Aaman to be killed...

your comment really cracked me at this point 🤣

you so want to meet the nurse???? 😆😆😆

and you asked about marriage so many times maybe you are expecting to get the answer by mistake 😆😆😆