Mirage #4 NEW NOTE Pg 146 18/2/2013

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Manesha

@manesha116

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1241

Just finished reading all the chapters n it was a long woderfull jurney.

When i came across this ff i felt like i also live with them.

Thanks for writing this beautiful story.

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Cookieg

@Cookieg

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#1242

Just found this story...what an awesome read...had me wanting to know the ending but also not wanting it to end

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Preeti Kawatra

@mysterious-soul

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#1243

Such a fabulous Story...👏👏👏 Bow down to YOU!!!!😊

Though I am not a fan of gangster type stories because most the times it has sad endings...😊 So I've never read any such story...But when I was searching best Arshi FFs, Both of your FFs were there (The Trumpled Butterfyy& Mirage). As I already said I never read such story in which main lead is "criminal"..So I started reading TTB thinking it is complete.. but it was not...

After reading all chapters of TTB, One thing was sure that YOU are such an amazing writer and I become your fan!!! . 😃 And And and...I can't stop myself reading "MIRAGE" my first ever reading such type of story...😃 I enjoyed reading this and I can't put it down... and I didn't wanted it to end...😆 I so wish I can watch it on screen ("Arnav" a gangster)...😆

Now come to the "MIRAGE" I loved each and every character except "ABBAS MALIK" Like everyone...😆 This man deserved even more harsher punishment...Such a ...🤢

I am really touched by two characters "Khalid Malik" & "Aman". 👏 😆

I so wish AMAN could survive at the end..but it was ought to happen from the beginning. I knew from the beginning that he will die saving Arnav, So I was already prepare for this!!!

I so wish KHALID MALIK came to know that Aarti loved him.😊but again it was impossible

And LAVANYA, I didn't like her much not because she misunderstood Khushi but the way she ignored Khushi in Shimla ...You came with your so called best friend but didn't spent little time with her and left her alone everytime...😕 "Best friends" never do this...but again it was demand of the story if they both spend time together Arnav won't be able to play his game. 😳

And finally AKAASH ..no words for him ..but still thankful he saved Khushi and helped her at times of need..😊

and special Thanks to "NAANI" giving surname to ARNAV..Loved her too..😊

YOU MADE EVERY CHARACTER SO LIVELY...I WISH YOU COME BACK AND WE GET MORE OF YOUR WRITINGS...👏

I think this is my first time I've written so much...😆

P.S. : I want to write more and give my views for "THE TRUMPLED BUTTERFLY" but as I already said I've never written this much so I'll do it in sometime.😆 I Know you are inactive or not going to read but still I will do it via PM or post it here(as TTB Thread is locked) hoping someday you will come back 😊

Edited by mysterious-soul - 7 years ago

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Princess_Safa

@Princess_Safa

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#1244

Awesome...

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Amna.

@Wrappedinblue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#1245

Hey R, this is Shona.angel. I hope you're well and doing good. I am not sure if you'll read this post or not but i'll still leave it here. I miss Mirage so much!! ugh.
Best wishes.