Mirage #4 NEW NOTE Pg 146 18/2/2013

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hotchic.

@hotchic

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#1221

It took me whole 24 hours, 78 minutes and 34 seconds to complete reading this story.

It's a wonderful piece of writing my girl. This was fabulous. I just thoroughly enjoyed reading each and every chapter and you never failed to impress with me with your brilliant writing skills.

The way you had woven the bond of Arnav and Khushi, that was totally enchanting for me. I truly loved each and everything of your story.

And the astonishing thing is that you managed to complete this oh so long FF so amazingly. Never for a moment, i felt myself bored. From the start till the end i was just intrigued and hooked.

You really nailed it. Hats off!👏

Edited by .MissStubborn. - 10 years ago

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Priyanjali Pullabhotla

@Priyanjali1998

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#1222

YOU ARE ONE AWESOME WRITER WITH PERFECTION😊AND THIS IS ONE FABULOUS STORY,I LOVED IT TO THE CORE❤️READ THIS STORY IN ONE GO AND COMPLETED IT IN A DAY.

I WANTED TO TELL YOU SOOO MUCH ABOUT THIS STORY BUT NOW I CANT COME UP WITH ANY WORDS, SORRY ABOUT THAT😕I BECAME VERY EMOTIONAL AT SOME SCENES,ESPECIALLY WHEN WE GOT TO KNOW THAT AARTHI IS THE RAIZADA AND WHEN AMAN DIED.I STILL CANT BELIEVE THAT AMAN DIED😭😭😭I EXPECTED EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE AT THE END BUT IT'S NOT.STILL THE STORY IS JUST PERFECT👏👏

AND IF YOU WRITE ANY OTHER ARSHI FF'S PLEASE PM ME AND BUDDY ME😊

HAVE A NICE DAY AND TAKE CARE😊

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#1223

Completed reading the story. It was really very well written.
Arnav's world was rather small. Be it his mother, father, hos cousin or Khushi and Lavanya. Everyone he was searching for, wanted to meet some day were there near him but he never knew the truth.
there are many if onlys' in my mind as of now. First is I wish Khalid had not been a part of this world. Arnav's life would have been so different, away from all the crimes. But now much can't be done about it.
I'm happy that you gave them a happy ending. Khushi didn't deserve to die and Arnav didn't deserve a lonely life although he has committed a lot of crimes.
I don't know why but still this story has left me with a feeling that it isn't over yet!!!

and Dee_J thank you for recommending it. 🤗

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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1224

Just can't believe I waited to read this gem ...

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#1225

Hey dear, I have read this beautiful story of yours long time back (may be 7 months back) as referred by Anonymous. But, blame it on my laziness, that I didn't comment on this beauiful story. I still remember,k I needed basically about a week to complete this story (as I got a chance to read it on my mobile , that too on my way while travelling to & from office). But, trust me, I read it continuously without looking at any other story during that time.

It's an amazing piece of work. It is not even needed on my part to tell you how amazing as a writer you are or what a brilliant story teller you are. The number of likes on your each update is the proof for that.

When, I first read Arnav as a sharpshooter in a FF- I was simply speechless. Infact, even if it would have beed a non-arshi story, then also I would have read it. No, matter, how many times I read it, I feel it's not enough. The twist & turns, just feels like I was watching some action packed Bollywood movie.

Well, thank you for gifting us such an amazing story.

Edited by tuli_jayee - 10 years ago

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1226

I can t it has been three years now !!

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#1227

Arnav has gone through so much since his birth. His good for nothing biological father didn't want him, his mother had to raise her all alone and at the end she was killed by his biological father. After that he had to grow up all by himself. He had to bear every possible pain that a human being can't even endure because of his bosses who don't even have a heart, who treated badly to an orphan child. All these difficulties caused him to be a murderer, a criminal. He so badly wanted to change his fate by starting a new life with Khushi but his past didn't allow him to achieve his wish so easily.

On the other hand, Khushi lost her aunt, had to break up with her best friend, Lavanya, to be able to save Arnav from getting arrested. She was almost losing her life to protect Arnav. But at the end, they had a second chance to start a new with their son. Although it's impossible for them to forget everything happened in the past but at least they have hope now for a better future.

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1228

Wow.. That was one of the best arshi story i have came across:) loved it!!

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#1229

Commenting To keep the tread open !

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#1230

U r the best writer in the world..that's what I wanted to say
U r the best..
This story lierally touch my heart
Now I have one wish to thank you hopefully one day I will able to get a chance to talk with u
Hope u reply me either here or in fb
I commented in fb too as angelarshi
Plzz whereever u are do reply me once..u r so awesome writer

Edited by Nickysweet - 9 years ago