Real love never Fails - Page 13

Awsome updates ..!
Loved it..!
Plz continew would love 2 read more..!
Continew soon n do pm me ..!

awesome part

amazing update
loved it
finally they confessed
and tes do continue

it was awesome loved it

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Finally u updated :D
Oki.. I hav already commented in d first part so directly cumin on 2 n 3rd part..
Only one word.. Mindboggling..
I loved it !!
Swayam finally saw kriya n he was in tears.. He intentionally asked kriya out fr dance so dat he cud question her...they wer dancin d same way as they use to earlier.. N dan d partners got exchange n their came our rey.. He somewhr knew it dat d person in front of hin is none another dan kriya bt he dint say it..
Omg.. I love d way u described d song!!
Mtlb d passion.. I cud easily sense it in those written lines.. Commendable job done n d pistures used wer beautiful..:)
Now d last part.. It took my heart away.. U penned down kriyaansh's emotions amazingly:)
Rey was hurted so unintentionally he was hurting kriya.. Obv he was heartbroken yaar.. Acha now d que rey putted on kriya.. Wer d finest one..
I was able to picturise d whole scene in my mind.. N those pics got along really well wid their confition...
Awww.. Rey was crying :( m sure.. Nobody cud hav portrayed dis whole scn better dan u... Schi !
I loved it... Simply alluring!!
I cud feel the intensity of their love thruout d story..!

Plz do not end it here.. Do continue :)

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Originally posted by: sachiarsha

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unres

HUH!!!! 😭

aaa!!!!!!!!!!

main jaa rhi hoon...

nhi comment nhi karing...

are what why?????????????????

hawww

emotional blackmail??????????/

areee

don't do that to me...

nhi nhi nhi...

bye...

theek hai sochti

are bola toh soching...

are sochne toh de...

Soch liya...

are jhada tension mat le i'm commenting...

par next time se...u better...hehehehhe...

accha chalo ab to the update...

OMG it was totally januable...

aaa that confession was just charismatic...

totally enchanting...

the rain the shouts the furious actions and expressions were certainly just soo splendid...stainless...

i was once again totally mesmerized...

Maggie Darling pitne ka man hai???????????

do u rlly need to ask if u gotta continue it or not??????

obviously without any dubiety just continue it i'm totally fully zeal-ed n sealed here ab i need an update baki sabka toh nhi pata but mujhe continuation chahiye...may what cum...n i'm damn serious...

n haan ab isse bada cmnt ke liye perfect wrds bhi hone chahiye hai na...heheheheh isi se kaam chala 😆

bye...

Originally posted by: karthikasekhar

omg 😭 i loved it sersly loved it to the core ...each and every lines r so touchbl and ya i felt it each words r so spl..feel like to be cry loudly😭 i hav no words to exprss..the only thng i wud like to say s ths s vat love..awsm update😛

thanku so much for awsm update

Originally posted by: enrique

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saachu darling loved ur comment 😃

kisi aur ke liye nahi to tera liya contu karungi and dedicate be 😉

my saachu itna sunder comment i loved ittt⭐️

ya saachu i ill dedicate it to u coz tera comment touched mee

Wonderful update..loved it..
the was the truth was out perfect...


And S want u to continue to gice it an even more beautiful end!!