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Posted: 13 years ago
who ever has res a place please jadi unres karo i am waiting to c ur commments so pleaseee
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: enrique



ok baba thanks nahi bolungi ok


hahahah that's like my good girl...😆
Posted: 13 years ago
Hola guys I am sooo glad dat u all loved the last part so much , I was so touch , now wih out ant further baak baak I will update here you go

Recap: the most sensuous dance and den lights goes off
u can refresh the page wen ever the song gets end
Now update
Wen the lights came back every 1 was just shocked .coz both the love birds flew away ,they wer not present and every 1 was searching here and der for them and swayam said'
Sw: bingo ! Kaam ho gaya ( he said in low voice and smirked )(as he was the one to switch the lights of )
Here rey just caught her wrist and dragged her on steps she said..
Kr: rey ur hearting me please leave me!


Re: (he stopped in middle and said he was hell angry) o really am I hurting , the little princess ..(and again dragged her on the terraces and banged opened the door and pushed her in and he turned back and closed the door.. And she was shouting , screaming and saying him nt to close the door .. ..and den turned and faced her and shouts on her..
Re: enough '.dats it ..stop it ..u had played a lot with my heart '..
Kriya was in tears now she thought that finally the "day' has arrived wer she have to face her love of her life and

she didn't had strength to say the truth and she just turned back and said ..
Kr: maine ..maine kab aap ke dil se(before she could say anything he cut her in middle and brutally caught her hand and turned her to face him and said)
Re: o ya 'kya tum mujhe se kabhi bhi pyaar nahi kiya'.
Kr: nahi ..mai to '

Wen she said this she was hesitating and a lump was formed in her throat as she couldn't bare the pain and anguish in his eyes , she couldn't bare the depth in his eyes , which was making her week which was draining all her strength'wen she said dat.. rey said..
Re: mai to kya kriya( he moved a step forward and was looking at her with all his love in his heart)

And to add the cherry on the cake, or soone par suhaga it started raining and the smell of the pure mud had entered the heart of the 2 lovers which was making go rest less and now they both wer completely wet and kriya started to shiver 'now rey asked with all love care hoping dat she will answer ..

Re: kya tum ne kabhi mujhe se pyaar nahi kiya?
Kr: (felt like to hug him and say the truth but ) na'aa..hi mai to
Re: mai to kya ( he moved 1 step a head again and she was breathing heavily and was feeling nervous)
Kr: mai swayam se pyaar karti hu!(by hearing this rey felt the whole world stop and he wished he would have been dead)

Re: w'a..t( now he was crying but was nt visible in rain drops, but could be in his voice)
Kr: was about to turn wen he stopped her and asked(rey's anger has crossed all the limits and now he wanted her desperately )
Re: if u didn't love me and instead loved swayam den y do u always wanted to fight with me '(he moved close to her)

Kr: coz I hate you ?(she moved back)
Re: if u hate me and loved him so did u every felt a high gush of love wen ever he touches you'..like you felt wen I touched you every time
She was just looking at him and he continued by moving more close and she moving behind'
Re: y did u always came in my arms wen lights went off 'rather dan going in his arms '.y in mine?

Kriya was now unable to bare the question , which wer piercing her heart like hell 'and even she was crying and (he caught her from her waist)


guess god also dint liked this and it was raining 'she pushed him and he said
Re: y did u break my heart '.(he was looking at her with all hopes dat she might answer him)
Re: y u always feel nervous wen I came close to you.(he came close to her)
Wen I danced with you?wat u felt ?did u every felt like dat wen u danced with swayam?those eyes by which u use to make me go crazy?
Y u wrote my name with yours rather dan his? (he touched her arms and slowly was moving his hand on her arms)
He was just asking and asking she was feeling weaker and weaker which was taking out all his strength he caught her shoulders from both side and shock her and asked '

Re: Y THE HELL DID YOU BREAK MY HEART WEN I WAS GONNA PROPOSE YOU?
Now the limits has crossed all the boundaries 'now they wer standing in front of each other and so close that they could feel der heart beat and der breath which was getting heavier and heavier coz of the rain and now ..she said

Kr: (she cupped his face and said in a low voice) jab jab aap mera paas ayate the meri heart beat fast beat karti thi '
Wen every you touched me I felt the same feeling which you felt ..in fact more dan you
Wen ever I looked in ur eyes I fell in more love with you '.(his face had a different smile wen he heard this from her)
Wen ever in dark I use to come in ur arms , those wer the safest place In whole universe for me'(his heart was

filled with lots of feathery feeling, he was feeling like his heart would pound out and run away )
I wrote ur name with mine coz I felt dat we r 1 soul in 2 differ bodies
I have always( she stopped saying this much 'and backed off she took 2 steps back , which annoyed him and made him angry '..
And he busted in anger and shouts on her'

Re: to mujhe ditch kyu kiya kriya'(hold her from her shoulder)(now she gave up she thought all her practice was in vain..and she gave the answer in same way only as he asked )

Kr: ha ha mai aap se pyaar karti hu( she shouts a loud the whole universe can listen to her the rain added a romantic touch to the line)

Maine aap ko ditch kiya mom ke promise ke vaja se (her knees gave up and she felt on the ground 'as rey was holding her he caught her and he also fell on ground'and now he hugged her from her shoulders)
Re: mom ka promise matlab'.?
She was crying lound and blured all her feelings and the whole truth to him to which his reaction was just one '. was stunned and shocked to listen wat she did for him and his friends''now he cupped her face and said'

Re: I am so sor..ry. .s.or.r.y. .ba.atcu.t.t.er I never tried to understand you I am so mean''
By hearing this she just placed her finger on his mouth and said ..
Kr: it was nt ur mistake 'u always understood wat I have portrayed in front of you!
Now her just said'.those words which she wanted to hear from ages ..
Re: "I Love You" "My baatcutter"'..
Kr: "I love you too rey"'
They was just sitting in rain and was feeling eachothers heartbeats which was like the sound of clinking sound of an anklets, which was so musical and lovable '
Ok guys now done phew I wrote this whole in 2 hours just'
Hhehe chalo now it you want me to continue it further 'den please do mention it in the comment I will surely continue
As I have a most beautiful dance I ever dreamt for kriyansh
If you guys want den I will continue'
Do hit like button and do comment weather should I continue or nt


Edited by enrique - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...unres...firstly, im so sorry!Unres karne ke liye bohut zyada time le liya maine!!But im so happy that I am the first to comment after this update...Ab update pe aati hoon..there couldn't have been a better KriYaansh confession than this!😊..it was beautifully written..especially Kriya's inner conflict where she struggles to be strong in front of Rey and in the process becomes weaker and weaker because of the effect Rey has on her..that was brilliant..And Maggie dear do you need to be told that you should continue??😉..of course you have to continue!!Looking forward to a lot of dance gyan in the next update!
Edited by idiot_box - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mujhe first Karna tha... 😡

Mumma...😭
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

Mujhe first Karna tha... 😡

Mumma...😭


awww baaha last part par kiya tha ...challo koi baath nahi unres dat comment also plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
plz continue...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWESOME YAAR LOVED iT
ESpecially the pics u added to the scenes!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was jst awesomeee

😊

do continue it
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ackraalkriyansh

AWWESOME YAAR LOVED iT

ESpecially the pics u added to the scenes!!!!!!!!!!

thanks a lot dear should i it continue or nt ... please help me in this

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