My OS: 'Main Aur Tum.. Hamesha' [Updated-Part 6]

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: shivi.10rocks
superb update
u r an amazing writer
d way u deal with characters n their emotions is just awesum

update s so well written that i could feel evrythng happening in front of my eyes
really luv can reduce anyone to anythng..

finally arnav called khushi as he realised that she s in pain... this s true luv
finally m vry happy after shedng my tears before

keep updating soon
miss u

Thank you so very the much 😆 for the compliment.. I'm obliged to it..

I'm glad I manage to do justice with the character.. thanks...

Yea.. Love can reduce anyone (it reduced Khushi's hatred and made her faith awaken once again...) do anything (She walked in the burning coal without bothering the consequences after that)

Yea he voiced out for her.. they both could feel each other.. distance has never stopped their heart waves 😆😆

I hope this was a re-payable treat to those tears you shed for last update...

Thank you for such a lovely comment and really happy to know you enjoyed it...

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: humsafar
awesome update hun
u portrayed it so well i was like as if m seeing all this in front of me
👏
loved it yara n the background music just polish ur update awesome awesome awesome

Di...🤗🤗

Thank you very miuch for the compliments...

If a reader is able to picturize the scene through words... that means the writer has be able to portray it right... So by you saying this has truly complimented my visioning skills...

Ohhh I loved the background music concept... it has always given a better impact in my daily life... so thought here too would do good..

Thank you for loving it and Me...❤️

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: bhadraprasad
Outstanding update...A joy to read with all those videos and audios...The update was a promising one...A hope to a new dawn.I t opens the eyes to the truth of God...There is no power other than HIM...loved it...Awaiting the next update and thanks for the PM

Thank you so much for the compliment 🤗

Pheeww it was tiring and confusing to edit them...

Yes... I needed to re-pay to those who shed tear in the previous update... so this is a new ray of hope... Phir Subah Hogi...😆😆 (sounds like I'm advertising another serial)

Yea... I once had disbelief in GOD and some incidents occur and I realized no one can deny the power of the great ALMIGHTY... its just an advise of everyone.. never blame GOD of the happenings because there is always a reason behind it.

I will update soon... let my ceremony get over.. let my heartbeat calm down.. then I'll update it for sure..

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Awesome...loved it...but does the brother kidnap Khushi? Oh no...they have been through so much...loved the depth of emotions! Super!

Lolzz... Vandana.. My OS are never predictable are they? Lets see what actually happens to Khushi... 😃 we are always put through tests and those sailing it are true lovers...

Thank you taking out time to read and comment... I appreciate it very much.

Originally posted by: Nichuss
Nice updt. Hope arniee wil get wel soon.
Kushi s always helping hand f arniee
who kidnapped her... Poor kushi

Well again... We shall see who kidnapped her...😃

Thank you for reading.

Edited by hetalmkn - 12 years ago

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK
Hetal tht was beautiful !!!!!
am simply in love with the OS !!!!
am sure arnav will get up for khushi !!!!
am waiting for ur next update !!!!
thanku so much for the dedication honey !!!!!
u made my day !!!
Dr.Jyoti ??? 😉 loved that !!!!!
make arnav get up soon...we all hate vivian...dont we ????
i loved tht part...cant wait to see him smashed to pulp by our ASR !!!!!
love and hugs to u and aaina 🤗

Aww Jyooo 🤗 🤗 🤗

It can't be more beautiful than you..😉

Well I'm so glad you are in love with my OS... being a great writer yourself.. its really an overwhelming comment...

Well... Lets see how things turn by... who saves Khushi...

I'm desperately waiting to write the next update believe me..

I have left many in questions... so really want them to get over this curiosity and jump into the next one...😆😆😆

Yea.. Dr. Jyoti...😳 get you hand on Arnav...😆😆

Aww Arnav toh Arnav hai... sab kuch apne time se aur style se karega...

Bechara Vivan...😆😆 introduction huva bhi toh kitne ghatiya style mein... but yaa it wasn't Shyam... 🤢🤢

I'm over with his deeds... so he has no screenspace for now in my OS...😃

ASR smashing Vivian into pulp...🤣 you are too good I swear...

Loads of love from me and Aaina...❤️🤗...❤️🤗...❤️🤗...❤️🤗

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Kurup
Wat an update...No words to describe how excellent a work it is...The effort that u took to add the audio clips wherever required is a work of brilliancy and perfection 👏👏👏 and I truly appreciate ur effort...Keep this UP...

The characters that u portrayed here, every single character is beautifullly chracterised,,,the emotions that everyone showed was just awesome...Khushi changing is a good sign...Arnav feeling that khushi is in pain was nothing less than a miracle..after one year this was the first time he spoke, he raised his hand..but the precap was reallly scaring...Update soooner and lengthier one next time plzzz...

Thnx 4 D PM

Thank you very much for truly enjoying it... Wow... excellent is a huge word buddy...

once again... brilliancy and perfection... wow... I'm really thankful... I appreciate your support and wonderful comments that makes me write better each time...

I'm glad you felt I justified the characters... Yes.. miracles do happen if you have faith in it...

I strongly believe.. "Dil se mangi huvi duva kabhi khali nahi jaati... der se hi sahi... par puri zarur hoti hai"

Well the precap is the upcoming issue but after every problem... there is solution on its way..😆😆

I will update it soon... and promise to write it a very long wan.. as if MAHA Episode😃😃

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Next Update Shall Be On Page 25

So there is 2 and 1/2 pages of comments to go...

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@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: hetalmkn

Aww Jyooo 🤗 🤗 🤗

It can't be more beautiful than you..😉

Well I'm so glad you are in love with my OS... being a great writer yourself.. its really an overwhelming comment...

Well... Lets see how things turn by... who saves Khushi...

I'm desperately waiting to write the next update believe me..

I have left many in questions... so really want them to get over this curiosity and jump into the next one...😆😆😆

Yea.. Dr. Jyoti...😳 get you hand on Arnav...😆😆

Aww Arnav toh Arnav hai... sab kuch apne time se aur style se karega...

Bechara Vivan...😆😆 introduction huva bhi toh kitne ghatiya style mein... but yaa it wasn't Shyam... 🤢🤢

I'm over with his deeds... so he has no screenspace for now in my OS...😃

ASR smashing Vivian into pulp...🤣 you are too good I swear...

Loads of love from me and Aaina...❤️🤗...❤️🤗...❤️🤗...❤️🤗

hetal honey...stop praisin me so much...am not a great writer and all !!!!

u girls praise me too much all the time !!!

and regarding vivian..i hate tht fellow so much when i see his constipated face tht i cant wait for asr to smash the living shit outta him !!!!!

ill be waiting for ur next update !!!!!

update as soon as u get time !!!!

wanna see arshi together soon !!!!

vivian thinks khushi is gonna warm his bed...well he dsnt know certain parts of his body are soon gonna be dumped into a furnace...then he wouldnt feel the need to be warmed 😉

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Hope

@Hope

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Very touching. Thank you. Can't wait for Arnav to stand next to her.
Eagerly waiting for your update. Please update soon.

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@hetalmkn

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

hetal honey...stop praisin me so much...am not a great writer and all !!!!
u girls praise me too much all the time !!!

and regarding vivian..i hate tht fellow so much when i see his constipated face tht i cant wait for asr to smash the living shit outta him !!!!!
ill be waiting for ur next update !!!!!
update as soon as u get time !!!!
wanna see arshi together soon !!!!
vivian thinks khushi is gonna warm his bed...well he dsnt know certain parts of his body are soon gonna be dumped into a furnace...then he wouldnt feel the need to be warmed 😉

Naa.. I'm genuinely saying it...

not to praise or butter you but itf it wasn't your written work... we both would have never met remember... I wouldn't have sent you buddy request...

Well.. we shall punish him then...😆😆 but first lets find out when and how will Arnav get up...

He has to naa😆😆

I will update very soon as soon as your jeeju leaves me to do it and as soon as comments reach 24 pages...

Lolzz... you wanna beat him up so badly yaa...