My OS: 'Main Aur Tum.. Hamesha' [Updated-Part 6]

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I would like to thank all of you for taking out so much time to read and comment on the previous thread... I did say that would be all but I was overwhelmed with the comments thus I decided to continue the story... I hope you all would enjoy and embrace it as you did with the previous thread...

If any of you would like to have PMs for updates, please do send me a buddy request. I wouldn't be sending PMs to those who doesn't send me a buddy request as it is really time consuming... So please do me a small favour by adding me on your buddy list.

Coming back to this new thread... For a start I would like to give you guys a very short episode... Just want to introduce some new people in it before I start with the detailing...

Presenting to you...
"I Promise... Tum Aur Main... Hamesha... Always..."

Credits to: princessunara

WARNING!!!!!Before you all start reading the OS... do me two favours please...

1. Plug in your speakers and increase the volume...

2. Scroll the entire OS... wherever you see the song bar...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PAUSE THE SONG... You should hear it as you read that specify part... Its going to be slighty messy... I agree but thats the best i could come up with...


Hello Hi Bye Bye... Sanju bitiya... Kahe Yaha Khari Ho...? Hum tumka all place find kerte rahe...

(Hello Hi Bye Bye.. Sanju dear why are you standing here? I have been looking for you everywhere)

šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†... A little girl was laughing cutely at Manoram's short speech...

Hum papa ko miss ker rahe hai naa nanimami... isliye unki photo dekh rahe hai... papa kab aayenge... woh mummy ko saath leke kyu gaye... humko unki yaad aati hai...

(I'm missing papa grandma.. thats why I'm looking at their picture.. when is papa coming back and why did he have to take mom with him? I miss them)

Arey bitiya... woh toh foreignwa gaye hai... papa ke arwad lene ke khatir... Haina...

Oh dear, they went to foreign, papa is getting an 'arwad' right)

Manorama... Arwad nahi... Award khaye... Angrezi aati nahi... toh kahe bolte hai..?

Manorama, its award.. Why do you speak English when you are weak at it)

Aap bhi naa sasuma... hum toh bas Sanju bitiya ko answer dhewat hai...

(MIL... i was just answering Sanju's question)

Arey Sanju bitiya... deewar ma itne gor se ka dekhet rahe aap? nani asked

(Dear Sanju, what are you staring on the wall)

Hamare papa aur mummy ki tasveer par nani... Kab aayenge...

(I'm looking at my parents' picture.. when will they come back?)

Door of Raizada Mansion opens...

Aap bulaye aur hum na aaye kabhi aise huva hai pari...?

(is it possible that my angel calls and we don't come?)

Sanju, Manorama and Naniji turned hearing the voice...

Papaaa... Sanju runs with her tiny little feet towards her mom and dad who are at the entrance...

Damaadji... Anjali bitiyaa... aap dono ai gaye... Nani and Manorama walked to welcome them back...

(SIL, anjali... you both are back)

Sanju was already in her dad's arms... hugging him tight hoping he won't go away... she is daddy's girl... Anjali is just smiling looking at both of them so attached to one another...

She hugged nani and mami who has just reached at the entrance... Sanju breaks the hug and goes to Anjali... while nani and mami blesses and congratulate their Son In Law...

Mama... you look beautiful... aapko meri nazar na lage... Sanju kissed Anjali's cheeks and hugged her tight...

(Mama, you look beautiful, no evil eyes get on you)

Thank you beta... Aap kaise ho? Aapne humein miss kiya...

(Thank you dear.. how are you? did you miss us?)

Arey... Saari baatein darwaze pe karenge yaa andar bhi aayenge aap Di.. Jijaji...?

(Are you going to ask everything at the door only di.. and BIL?)

All turned at Aakash's comment who was standing with Payal. Everyone chuckled and walked inside...

Both the couples hug each other... Payal tells them to sit while she will prepare tea as they must be tired from such a long journey...

Pari... aapne mummy ke saval ka jawab nahi diya... Did you miss us? Her dad asked her so lovingly...

(Angel.. you didn't answer your mom's question... Did you miss us?)

Nahi papa... humne bilkul bhi aapko miss nahi kiya...

(No papa.. I didn't at all miss you both )

Aap humse dhur thee hi nahi toh hum aapko kyu miss karenge? Sanju said so sweetly...however it surprised everyone specially Nani and Mami as she just mentioned she was missing them...

(you wasn't away from me so why will i miss you)

But hum toh aapko ek hafta keliye dhur gaye thee.

(But we went away leaving you for a week)

Kyuke main aapse roz waha baat kerti thi... Sanju is now pointing towards the wall showing the photo frames she was earlier staring at... Anjali and her dad followed the tiny finger looking at the item she meant...

(Because i used to talk to you everyday..)


The camera zooms at Sanju's father...

Anjali held his hand and smiled widely... so touched by 6 years old daughter's gesture...

Sanju smiled and jump on her daddy's lap and kissed his left cheek... Papa... aap hamare liye kya le aaye Singapore se?

(papa.. what did you got for me from Singapore?)

Anjali gestured him to give her the gifts... he smiled and nodded in agreement...

Nani told both of them to go to their room with Sanju and she would ask Payal to serve them their tea there...

The trio happily agreed and walked to their room...

Dadi... mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi hota itna sab kuch badal gaya...

(Dadi.. so many things has changed.. its unbelievable..)

Di kitni khush hai apne parivaar main... Aakash said while looking at the trio making their way towards the room...

(Di is so happy in her own sweet family)

Anjali's husband was holding her shoulders helping her to up the stairs while Sanju held on the her hand...

Haa bitwa... kaun keh sakta hai ke Shaleen bitiwa hamare Anjali bitiya ke dusre pati hai... Woh unke hasee keliye aasman aur zameen ek kerdete hai... nani responded to Aakash's comment

(Yes son.. who would imagine Shaleen is Anjali's 2nd husband... he would do anything for her happiness)

Sahi kaha aapne sasuma... Aur yeh bhi dekhye... Woh hamari Sanjana bitiya se kitna pyar kerte hai... yeh jante huve bhi ke woh Anjali bitiya ki pehli shaadi ki nishani hai... unka aapna khoon nahi phir bhi unse kitna pyar kerte hai...

(You are right MIL... and look at the way he loves Sanjana.. she is not even his own blood... but he still loves her unconditionally...)

Humein aaj bhi woh din bohot ache se yaad hai sasuma... 6 saal hogaye us baat ko...

(I still remember that day... it has been 6 years now)

Arnav bitwa ki shaadi thi, Anjali bitiya 7 mahine pet se thi... Woh dhoke baaz shyam humse milne aaya tha aur shaadi rukwane aaya tha...

(it was Arnav's marriage... Anjali was 7 months pregnant... that liar shyam came to meet us and stop the marriage)

Anjali bitiya ne unki saari baatein sunli thi aur uski aakho se parda hat gaya tha... Woh jaan gayi thi shyam kitna ghatiya insaan hai...

(Anjali heard everything and got to know the truth)

*Flashback*
Anjali's tears were flowing uncontrollably😭😭... She wiped her tears and with a stern look... she reached to her Mangalsutra and in a split seconds pulled it off her neck... Mamiji and Shyam was totally shocked at the action...😲😲Immediately after that she wiped of her sindoor... Her eyes were still locked at Shyam's shocked face... Inspector... Anjali voiced out... My Name is ANJALI SINGH RAIZADA...

*Back to present*

Anjali bitiya tut chuki thi... lekin fir bhi usne aapne gham chup liye aur Arnav bitwa ki shaadi dhoom dhaam se ki... Bohot saha hai hamari usse phool si bachi ne sasuma... lekin aaj uki jholi ma shaleen damaad ne bash khushiya hi khushiya bhar di hai...

(Anjali was so broken down yet she made sure the marriage took place grandly... she has gone through alot MIL... but today our SIL has given her all the hapiness)

Aakash, Nani and Manorama got so emotional... Nani put her hand on Manorama's shoulder gesturing to control her feelings... Manorama understood and quickly wiped of her tears...

Dadi... Dadi... Dadi... Manorama turn hearing a little kid who was now running towards her...

She went on her knees and opened her arms to take the little child in embrace...

Arey... ai gaya humra junior aakash? She kissed the little kid...

(Hey.. our junior aakash is back)

Dadi... hum big boy hai... aur hamara naam junior aakash nahi Aayal Aakash Singh Raizada hai

(Dadi.. I'm a big boy and my name is Aayal Aakash Singh Raizada not junior Aakash)

Aa from papa's name and Yal from mummy's name...

so call me Aayal dadi... hello hi bye bye...

Everyone laughed at Aayal who just imitated his dadi, Manorama.

Badmaash (Naughty boy) ... Manorama gently hit Aayal's bum...He then ran towards his pardadi and hugged her...

Nani then asked Aayal... bitwa, aapko malum hai aapka yeh pyar sa naam kisne rakha hai..?

(Nani then asked... son, do you know who gifted you this lovely name?)

Haa pardadi... hum jante hai naa...Hamara yeh naam bare papa ne rakha hai...

(Yes greatgrandma... I know... Elder daddy named me...)

Anjali who was walking towards them heard this and her eyes was now filled with tears hearing Aayal mentioning Arnav's name...

She closed her eyes and allow the tears to flow... she held her the support by the stairs and softly said... Chotte...

The camera then shows Arnav lying down in a room on the bed...

It seems he is lost in his own thoughts...

In the background you can hear this...



This is the entire scene + written lyrics explanation
This is the flashy moments going on in Arnav's mind...
Raah Dekhi Thi Is Din Ki Kab Se
(I had waited for this day)


Aage Ke Sapne Saaja Rakhe Thee Na Jaane Kab Se
(I had planned for the future)


Baare Utavle Thee Jaane Ko
(I was impatient to be there)


Zindagi Ka Agla Parav Paane Ko
(To live the next day)


Par Na Jaane Kyu Dil Mein Aaj Kuch Aur Aata Hai
(But I have a weird feeling today)


Waqt Ko Rokne Ka Jee Chahta Hai..
(Feel like stopping the time)


Jin Baato Ko Le Ke Roote Thee
(On those situations where I used to cry)


Aaj Unper Hasee Aati Hai...
(I feel like laughing on it today)


Na Jaane Kyu Aaj Un Paloo Ki Yaad Bohot Saatati Hai
(I wonder why I'm missing the moments today)


Par Aaj Na Jaane Kyu Lagta Hai Ke Kuch Peeche Reh Gaya
(Don't know why I feel something is left behind today)


Kahi Ankahi Hazaaro Baatein Reh Gayi
(Thousands of said unsaid matters are left)


Na Bhulne Wali Kuch Yaadein Reh Gayi...
(Unforgettable memories are left)


Meri Tang Ab Kaun Keecha Karega
(Who will pull my legs now)


Sirf Mera Saar Khane Ko Kaun Mera Peecha Karega...
(Who will bug me now)


Jaha Do Hazaar Ka Hisab Nahi Waha Do Do Rupee Keliye Kaun Larega
(Who will fight for 2 rupees when two thousands are left to count)

Not in the serial... but will come soon in upcoming parts :p

Main Ab Bina Matlab Ke Kisse Larunga
(Who will I fight with unneseccarilyi)

Not in the serial... but will come soon in upcoming parts :p

Bina Topic Ke Kisse Faltu Mein Bakwaas Karuga
(With whom will I chat on useless topic)


Woh Haseen Pal Kiske Saath Jeevunga
(With whom will i share the lovely momets)


Mere Certificates Ko Raati Kehne Ki Himmar Kaun Karega...
(Who would dare to call my degree, pieces of paper)

Not in the serial... upcoming parts

Bina Darre Sachi Rai Dhene Ki Himmat Kaun Karega
(Who would bravely say the truth without any fear)


Achanak... Bina Matlab Ke Kisiko Bhi Dekh Ker Paagalon Ki Tarha Hasna
(Who will suddenly laugh crazily looking at anyone)

Not in the serial.. upcoming parts

Na Jaane Yeh Fir Kab Hoga
(Wonder when all this will happen again)


Kaun Mujhe Meri Kabilyat Per Bharosa Dhilayega
(Who will remind me of my capabilities)


Aur Zyada Urne Par Zameen Pe Layega
(Who will advise me not to be overconfident)

Not in the serial.. upcoming parts

Meri Khushi Mein Sach Mein Khush Kaun Hoga
(Who will be really happy for me in my happiness)

Not in the serial.. upcoming parts

Mere Gham Mein Mujhse Zyada Dukhi Kaun Hoga
(Who will be more sad then me in my pain)


Zindagi Mein Milne Ki Fariyat Kerte Rehna...
(Always keep wishing to meet again)


Agar Na Mil Sake Toh Kaam Se Kaam Yaad Kerte Rehna...
(If we dont meet, atleast keep in memory)


Chahe Jitna Haslo Aaj Mujh Par
(Laugh on me as much as you want today)


Main Bura Nahi Manungga
(I won't mind)


Iss Haseen Ko Aapne Dil Mein Basalunga
(I'll keep this laughter in my heart)


Aur Jab Yaad Aayegi Tumhari
(And when i miss you)


Yehi Hasee Leke Thora Muskura Lunga...
(With this laughter, I'll slightly smile)


Kehdo Dosto... Dubara Sab Hoga...
(Tell me friends... It will happen once again)



Precap: Sim and Pam both came back to apply job in AR design... they spot Khushi over there...

Sim: Hey Chamkili... kaisi ho...

Khushi: Mera Naam KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA HAI!!!!!!!

Pam and Sim were shocked ...


I hope you guys enjoyed the first part... and please do comment...

I'm having a very high expectation from you all... so really hoping to see very many comments... I'll update it soon... believe me very many twist are coming up...


P/S: This is the continuation of my previous thread (link at the top of the page)... However.. for the first episode you might not find it linking well... but trust me the upcoming episodes will gel those parts well.. and it will also help you understand the part 1...

This part makes you think...

Khushi and Arnav had a perfect wedding and also SR... Shyam was caught by the police... Anjali knows the truth... Dadi has accepted Khushi with open heart.. the past will never come out as Dadi has forgiven Khushi... but then... what happen now... how come Khushi is not mentioned in this part... why is Arnav thinking or flashing back his moments... why is he wondering if all this will happen again...

To know the answer... wait for next update... I promise you will have the answer... and yes... for next update... COMMENT on this part 😃 if you find it worthy... share the link with your friends...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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New Character Introduction


Shaleen Agarwal


He is Anjali's 2nd Husband... He is a writer by profession and he writes for Star Plus serials šŸ˜†. He was a Bachelor and this was his first marriage...

Sanjana


She is Anjali's daughter... By right her father is Shyam Manohar Jha... but she doesn't know it. For her Shaleen Agarwal is her father... Thus her full name is Sanjana Shaleen Agarwal... She is currently 5 years and 10months old... She is a very cute and obident girl... She is just a mirror to her mother... she loves her Arnav mamu the most in the house...

Aayal Aakash Singh Raizada

He is Aakash and Payal's 4 years old son... He was named by Arnav and he is closest to his Dadi (Manorama) though he fights with her a lot too... Sanjana and Aayal are best friends... Aayal always wishes to be like Arnav... He is very much like Payal... Quiet and content... but he has pinch of Arnav's anger...


Edited by hetalmkn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratz for new thread.waiting for the update.did arshi separate?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice start..as always i loved the song...

loved the shaleen-anji part ..all snaps r wonderful...continue soon..n thanx for the pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crazy_soul

Congratz for new thread.waiting for the update.did arshi separate?


Well if i tell you about it now... then how will your heart have DHAK DHAK moments? šŸ˜†

Originally posted by: priyankaa

hey nice start..as always i loved the song...


loved the shaleen-anji part ..all snaps r wonderful...continue soon..n thanx for the pm...😊


Thank you very much...


thanks buddy...

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

good one buddy,,

update soon


yup surely.. as soon as i get inspired more via comments... I'll update it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So what happened to arnav and khushi ?
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P/S: This is the continuation of my previous thread (link on first page)... However.. for the first episode you might not find it linking well... but trust me the upcoming episodes will gel those parts well.. and it will also help you understand the part 1... it will all be crystal clear...

This part makes you question...

Khushi and Arnav had a perfect wedding and also SR... Shyam was caught by the police... Anjali knows the truth... Dadi has accepted Khushi with open heart.. the past will never come out as Dadi has forgiven Khushi... but then... what happen now... how come Khushi is not mentioned in this part... why is Arnav thinking or flashing back his moments... why is he wondering if all this will happen again... why such sad voiceover... why is he tearing in the end...

To know the answer... wait for next update... I promise you will have the answer... and yes... for next update... COMMENT on this part 😃 if you find it worthy... share the link with your friends...
Edited by hetalmkn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update... m confuse why s arnav thinking about past., where s khushi
i hope we wll get to know in d next update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...photo gallery was fabulous..the best ones!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful update with amazing photos. loved it.
thanks for the pm

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