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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

No, sorry! Whether it is one day or not, if you love somebody, you don't hurt them just to make a point. That is not love, that is domination. (Sorry, I guess my idea of love is a bit different.) He could have been cordial to Shruti, like I said, and given his attention to his wife, so that Shruti could have been the outsider. Not his NEW WIFE!! And he could have just told Kushi later on, that he does not want anyone to join from now on as he wants to be with her only. He knows Kushi and her personality, so he knows that this is what she does - goes out of her way to be nice to people, in spite of hurting herself, because she always puts others before herself. That's what we have seen thus far. But Kushi is not stupid, so she would listen to her husband's request of him wanting to be alone with her. So he could have explained this in a nicer way than to hurt her and discard her feelings. ON HER HONEYMOON!!!!!!!
I don't hate Shruti (yes, I don't like ANYONE coming in between Arnav and Kushi...) but I do hate Arnav's behavior. That is not the behavior of a newly wedded husband on his honeymoon with his newly wedded supposedly cannot live without you wife! You don't hurt your wife to make her understand something, just so that you can have your way!! What about her feeligs? he knew she was hurting, yet he continued with Shruti. I'm sorry, but I am just so livid at arnav for behaving like this! I guess we'll find out what happens next? I hope he is remorseful for hurting her. It didn't seem like that. Seems he's more interested in his own feelings and what his wants are than hers. And does not seem to take into account any of her feelings. Same thing with the nightie. She's uncomfortable. But who cares? This is what I want, so she must wear it!!!
Sorry, if this puts a damper on you, but this is the way I feel. And you did ask to write our feelings, so...!
Please do not waver from your path of writing just because one of your reader's is unhappy with ONE of your updates. "Hota hai!"
And besides, who knows, in the next update, Arnav might do or say something that will make it all right. But I am really sorry for hurting you in saying I did not like the update, perhaps I should have said Arnav's behavior, because the update, in itself was great. (Anyway, it seems like I was the only one who did not like it! I guess my idea of love is really different! I feel if you love somebody, you would do EVERYTHING in your power to ensure that not an iota of physical, mental or spiritual stress touches them. NO MATTER WHAT!! ) Perhaps this kind of love is rare? But it is possible (I have seen this in my parents, maybe, it's because my dad who is Italian, married my mum, who is Persian, against their families' and communities' wishes? Of course, time has ensured all families and communities have accepted their love. But this kind of rare love is possible in real life, too!)
OK, thanks, waiting for the next update to see what happens.
Thanks for taking the time to reply. Please continue on the course of your writing.😊 And sorry again, if I hurt you. That was not my intention.


hey! why are YOU saying sorry?! I AM sorry for disappointing you with such an update... i'm sorry that u didn't like his behaviour ... yes you're right in a way and i DO believe that everyone has their own point of veiw about love... and this was mine... YES! you're ABSOLUTELY rght that if you love someone you would not EVEr hurt the person just to show that he's right, however, it's a fan fiction... everything can't be perfect of course. yap may be it was arnav's fault and his way (actually my way lol) wasn't right but if it didn't happen khushi wouldn't have realized her fault by HERSELF (i think that) ... i'm just trying to make khushi see shruti's urge to come between them BY HERSELF!

abnd lol nope, i won't hover from my path of writing 😆why would i ? ppl have their own opinion and i'm sure u're right in ur palce and i am in mine so we're good...

but i'm still REALLY SORRY for this girl! didn't at ALL mean to hurt you or anything 😭

and i;ll try my best to make some changes in the next update k?> 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bansaldiya55

arghhh shrutii i will kill u


awmse 1 ... suprbb waiting


ahaha! go ahead dear1 i'm with you! 😆


and thnx a lottt!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update loved it
I dont like shruti
pls continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
dont like shruti
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi is an idiot what the hell your husband planned a romantic dinner for two of you and the stupid khushi invited shruti to have dinner with them smart boy asr teach you dumbo wife to let no one get between you guys really khushi some time i want to smack her please give khushi some common sense loved the update loved how asr was making her jealous idiot girl and it better not be calling him and knocking on the door at least she could have spoken up when the girl sat between them thanks for the pm loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

khushi is an idiot what the hell your husband planned a romantic dinner for two of you and the stupid khushi invited shruti to have dinner with them smart boy asr teach you dumbo wife to let no one get between you guys really khushi some time i want to smack her please give khushi some common sense loved the update loved how asr was making her jealous idiot girl and it better not be calling him and knocking on the door at least she could have spoken up when the girl sat between them thanks for the pm loved the update




lol... well she just didn't wanna be rude to her,.,,,,,... but yah... she must have some common sense 😳😆

lol i'm glad you liked the update and loved how arnav made her jealous 😉 lol yah i will tryto put some common sense in her 😳😳

🤣 thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was an amazing update
so cute and awesome
hope shruti doesnot create any rift between arshi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priasweet

Wow that was an amazing update
so cute and awesome
hope shruti doesnot create any rift between arshi



awww! thank you! 😳😳

and ya hopefully not 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! DONE WRITING THE NEXT 3 |PARTS!

now it's up to you guys. how fast you comment and like 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG that was superb .I am so addicted to ur updates that when I saw the pm I started reading if though I have exams :P It was adorable and I am loving this trouble bcoz I love to see a Arnav teasing khushi 😃 .This Shruti is gonna bring twists to honeymoon 😛 yaayyy .I am super excited for next parts .No sandals please BT I love to see a jealous khushi 😳

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