New FF on Ariya !!UNSPOKEN LOVE!!Chapt 48 Pg143 FEB 02 PMLATE - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
dat was fab
ohhhk when arjun saw riya wid sum1 elz he was jealous ;)
n he realized dat he luvs her :)
n hez on a mission 2 get HIS riya back n i cant w8 2 no what will happen n how he will confess his feeling 2 her
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...finally arjun realized he is in love...wow..i am desperately waiting for confession
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super.now arjun has realised his folly.update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
just read your two last updates..
Wonderful dear, so now our Mr Khadus has started to accept his feelings for Riya, and now he's out to get her😳
Wonder how Arjun will charm her back
Please update soonest😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KiSha13

Arjun is realy a khadus..all time he keep pushing riya away & now when she is with another guy he is jealous..m exited to know how arjun will confess his terms to her..update soon.. 🥳

Arjun is typical male...
who always hurt his dear ones for his ego.
And realiz his mistake after long time.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _mahi_

oh wow so much happened in those last two chapters.. 😛

i too believe that arjun shouldn't have taken such step😕.. now Sikandar is alert and will try to harm ETF in some way or another😲
n loved the way you portrayed his feelings when Riya was being cold towards him
he actually deserves it😡
thanks for the pms hunnie and a big thank you for great updates🤗
do update soon.. m greedy hehe😆
love yah😳

Thx dear...
Thank u so much..
Ys bt bcoz of Sikandar , Arjun rezalize his love..( See i give u a hint) lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am so angry on you...

😡😡😡

why don't u send me any pm ...u updated two parts and no pm for me...why??

😡😡😡
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

i am so angry on you...


😡😡😡

why don't u send me any pm ...u updated two parts and no pm for me...why??

😡😡😡

Sry dear bt i just ur requset , & i update bth parts in early mrng..
Dn't angry on me . nw i"ll snd u PM. k. 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 18.
Riya comes back her room in a afternoon. She is tired aft meeting so mny frnds wit him. Thy visited several places. She comes to her room & shocked to see her room. She feels so0mthing on her fttes. She look @ her feets & shocked to see rose petals thr. tht rose petals route goes to her bed. She remove her chappals & wakl on thm She feels so soft. Her room filled wit her fav scent smell. She sits on her bed . On bed thr few gifts , roses & ballons . she feels so happy . After so many days she flashed her sweet , dimple smile. She opens gifts , She found Chocholates , her fav movie Hum-Tum dvd , mirror , & in d last gift pack she found tissue box. She shouted 'Wht The.' Suddenely her gaze fell on Greeting Card. She open it & found.
My Miss ,. Hygenic ,
I knw im nt perfect.
bt im nt bad
i m d reason for your crying
bt i also want to a reason for smile.
i want you.
bt its your decision.
im waiting for u.
i belive your mine & i knw u also belive tht.
i m always waiting for u , always thr for u .
till my death.
Yours
Mr. Imperfect.
She holds card close to her heart & starting crying, aft tht night she become so emotional. She lift her gaze & found Arjun reflection in her mirror. (Actually he pip in her room , she caught him , bcoz he caught in a mirror.) Arjun look @ her & comes in a room , he lock d door behind him. Riya get scare. Arjun comes near her , & suddenely seated on his knees & say "im sry" & hold his ears. Bt Riya hold his ears & say him , " Why r u dng ths.?" Arjun tel her " For tht night i real... " bt She cut him " Sir in knw & i accept it nw , tht ws my fault. nt yours. " Arjun " No , i knw i hurt u lot. Everytime u come wit me wit new hope , bt i always leave u alone. " Riya look @ him. Arjun also look @ her bt found nthng. "Riya plz dn't punish yourself like ths . im die 1000th times whn i see u like ths, plz plz be happy , plz smile for me. " He hold her face in his hands , Riya felt somthing inside her , she still loves him. Bt she is also hurt bcoz of him. She hold onto his hand again for a minute , bt suddenely push his hands & tell him " Plz go" Bt Arjun dn't go he again hold her & turn her around. " I knw u r angry on me. beat me , cry bt plz smile. " Riya nw started criyng & fell on her knees & touches Arjun's legs . She held him vry tight. Arjun hold on her & lift her in his arms . she protest bt Arjun dn't listen her. He placed her on her bed & kiss her tears & started to drink tht. She continously crying. Arjun look @ her & hug her. bt she push him away. "Why why? why u do it nw ? why u felt bad. what u want frm me nw. , wht plz leave me alone , plz... u dn't deserve me. im d cheap girl. dn't talk to me. go away frm me. " Bt Arjun dn't move inches frm her. His eyes filled wit tears. She throws pillows ballons @ him bt he comes forward to her . Riya punish me . mai isi layak hue. tum cheap nahi ho , chaep to mai hue. jo apne ego ke karan tumhe hurt karta rha. tum to aisa heera ho , ki jiske bhi ghar jaaogi na uski life khushiyon se bhar dongi." "Aap chale jaayie yaha se mujhe kuch nahi suna na. " " Why i belive u." "Riya mai tumse kuch nahi chahta , mai jaata hue ki galati meri hai , mai tumse pyarr karta hue bt darta tha(Riya look @ him. she always want tht Arjun say ths wrd to her). , agar tum mujhe apne lyak nahi samzati to koi baat nahi. mai chala jaaunga yaha se , bahut dur , ETF chodkar kahi dur jaaunga, i promise mai tumhe phir kabhi apna cheara nahi dikhaunga. " " Bas Riya tum mjuhe maaf kar do." Wit tht Arjun look @ her eyes. he found somthing . Riya take his hands on hers & tld him " Maine aap ko maaf kiya" Arjun listens ths & goes frm thr. Riya look @ his back & said in low tone. bt i also luv u. u cn't leave me. i knw u hurt me so much , bt bcoz of your one wrd i forgive u . bt nw u dn't hva right to leave me. u hva to confess your love in front of everyone . i dn't want to force u. bt im waitng for tht day whn u come to me. & share your feelings wit me in front whole wrd. im waitng for u. " & she started crying again.
Someone look @ her frm her door . d person shocked to see , she also hears thr convo. She also see Arjun who comes out frm room so , she hide behind a pillar. so he cn't see her. She is happy to know tht her frnd love someone. Bt feels bad for her bcoz her love is nt wit her. Meera want to console her , bt cn't . Actually she comes thr to meet Riya , on d Rathod request . She goes frm thr , she walking alone in d long passage , wiping her tears . Rathod pases frm thr & sees her , & stand in front of her & blocked her path. " What happened Meera ?" He asked in concerned. As soon as Meera look @ him , she throws herself in his arms , she knows her lovestory is resemble to Riya's. She dn't want to lose him again. Once he leave her , bt nw , no never.. & she started criyng badly. Rathod hold her in his arms. & open his mouth to talk. Suddenely Meera speaks , " Tum hame chodke to nahi jaao ge na? " Plz mat jana , hame nahi seh paaynge." Wit tht she hold her arms around his waist & tighten her grip , tod she dn't care abt anything , she only wants him . after so many years wait , agony , crying , she feel like tod r never. Rathod look @ her in a disbelif . He carries her in his arms & took her in his room. & placed on d bed. Meera still criyng badly. Rathod try to console her bt all in vein. She again comes near him & hug him. Rathod dn't knw wht to do. In ths situtation he cn't call anybody. So , he just hold her & says her " Im nt leaving u Meera , im nt. " Meera look @ him wit her brown watery eyes. She takes a deep breath & suddenely say 'I Love You." & hide her face in his chest.
Plz scroll down to continue.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Rathod cn't belive his ears . he never thought , she feel d same for him , yes he started to love her , whn he first meet her in d hall , he felt always tht her eyes hide somthing for him. her song tht she sung in a party confused him. He repeat those magical words to her. Meera looked @ him like she got big shock in her life. She waiting for his slap & scolding bt instead of ths she receive her love back frm him. She lookinto his eyes , she found those eyes have a same feeling tht she hides frm everyone frm world. She kissed his cheeck Rathod smiles @ her, wit d shyness she try to hide her face wit her palms & Rathod hold her bth hands & leave thm thn he cupped her face & kiss her forehead , thn her eyes , her nose Meera shivers under his touch. she closes her eyes in a happiness. She felt his breath come vry near to her , within a second she feels he caputered her lips. she parted her lips & give him permission to come in Bth explores each other , She hold his hairs frm back wit her one hand & rested her another hand on his back & started caressing it. Rathod pull her colser to him . & rested his one hand on her waist & frm another he caressing her neck. She moaned loudly . Rathod leave her & wipe his lips frm his thumb & says , " hmmm i luv Strawberry. " She blush on his statement & bth again startted to kiss each other madly & fell on bed. Thy broke apart & smile to each other. She startes bite his earlope , Rathod look @ her. she look @ him & smile. He starts to bite slowly on her neck.. She moaned happily & close her eyes. 🤬She heard radio plays a song frm thr nxt room. (Hey girls w all only listen song & imagine wht thy do.😆 Im too naughty 😉) Meri adhoori kahaani
Lo daastaan bann gayi
Ho Tune chhuaa aaj aise
Main kya se kya ban gaya

Sehme huey sapne mere haule-haule angdaiyaan le rahe
Thehre huey lamhe mere nayi-nayi gehraiyaan le rahe
Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

Odhu teri kaaya
Solah sigaar main saja loon
Sangam ki ye raina isme tyonhar main mana loom
Khushboo teri choo ke kastoori main ho jaaun
Kitni pheeki thi main sindoori main ho jaaun
Sur se zara behki huyi meri duniya thi badi be-suri
Sur mein tere dhalne lagi
Bani re piya main bani baansuri

Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

Mere aasmaan se jo hamesha gumshuda thay
Chaand taare tune garrdishon ki lay badal di
Laut aaye aaj saare...

O Saiyyan...


Read more: http://www.lyricsmint.com/2011/12/o-saiyyan-lyrics-agneepath-song.html#ixzz28AooFZQWAfter 2 hrs. She open her eyes , & found only one sheet around her body. She turn her face to find Rathod is in deep sleep , Meera smiles to herself. She goes to near him & placed a small peck on his lips. Finally she got her love. She think now abt Nandini , no one stole him frm her . He look so cute in his sleep. She remebered song played on a radio before sme hours.
"Sur se jara bhatki hue meri duniya thi badi besuri.
Sur mai tere dhalne lagi bani re piya mai bani basuri
Jindagi mai pehli hai muskaan karne lagi hai , itne karam kyu na jaane
Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi , hai ankh num kyu na jaane.
O Saiyaan ...
& she agin goes close to him & hug him. In sleep Rathod also hug her & bth goes to sleep again.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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