~'Dil Hai Tumhara~'(Rajeev n Amna) - Page 21

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Posted: 19 years ago
Gr8 part 👏 i hope k aamna jaldi se theek ho jaye
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Posted: 19 years ago
mehru dear dekho Raj ka Amna ko uski bimaari ke baare mein batana bohat zarori hain..aur agar Raj ka Amna ko batana hain tho tumhe next part likhna padega...tho agli part jaldi se likho aur post karo.... 😆
plz continue soon........ 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx frnds......kia haina "ghar mai bohot hai kaam kaaz bhai ki ji mangini hai kuch din baad........(lol..ye to Limopani ka add hai.............)......

Next part.....
Rajeev is still thinking...
Amna comes there...


(sorry pix yehi mile......dress change hai rajeev ka.....)

Amna:Rajeev kia baat hai.....

Rajeev:hmmm kuch nahi..

Amna:mai tumhey os waqy se dekh rahe hoon......tum aaj reception pe bhi chup chup thay...q...

Rajeev:nahi ayse koi baat nahi hai...tum so jaoo thak gaye hogi.....

Amna:aur tum...

Rajeev:haan mai bhi a raha hoon.....ao......

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Next Morning..........
Rajeev office chala jaata hai aur Amna,Manasvi aur Kripa kitchen mai kaam kerne chalay jaate hain.....
Kripa:kaal reception pe maza aya na..

Manasvi:haan Amna tumhey aya na.....

Amna:ji bhabhi......

Manasvi:lo khana bhi baan gaya........aab hum bhi thore dayr aram ker lay......

Kripa:haan mai khana banate banate thak gaye hoon...

Manasvi:acha madam.....sara khana to Amna ne banaya hai.....aur aap keh rahe hain k...

Kripa:to......to........kia ......maine bhi to help ki haina......

Amna:haan bhai.....
..........
Amna apney room mai jaate hai...aur book parhne lagte hai........wo Rajeev ki cupboard kholte hai k achanak os mai aik envelope girta hai......

Amna:ye kia hai...(she open it.......n shocked......its her report........)......Amna kia........mujhe.....mu.....muj......mujheeeee cancer hai aur Rajeev ne bataya bhi nahi...... 😭 (she crys)........nahi q............aysa meray saath he q hua................q(she crys bitterly).................




Amna:Rajeev ne mujhse ye sub q chupaya........q..........

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At dinner.....everyone is sitting n having dinner......Rajeev n Suraj also comes from office........
Prerna:aray Manasvi Amna kaha hai...

Manasvi:paata nahi mama...apne room mai hogi......

Rajeev:mai bulata hoon.....

Prerna:hmmm.....khana thanda ho raha hai jaldi aooo..
..........
Rajeev room mai enter hone se phley sochta hai.....
Rajeev:kayse karo ga mai Amna ka samna.....kayse batao ga ose.....)he cry lightly..)...kayse.....




He enters n sees Amna sitting on bed ......
Raj:Amna khana lag gaya hai a jaooo khana kha lo.....

Amna gave no response.....
Rajeev:Amna.....Amna.....

Amna(coming out from thoughts):haan Rajeev...tum kub aye.....

Rajeev:baas abbhi.....kia baat hai tumhare tabiya theek haina,,,,,,,,

Amna:haan mai mai theek hoon.....

Rajeev:nichay mama bula rahe hain khana lag gaya hai.....

Amna:haan chalo.....

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Prerna:aray ao beta........Anurag aaj sara khana Amna ne banaya hai.....

Anurag:aray wah...tabhi itne achi khusbo a rahi hai.....

(Amna n Rajeev sits.....)
Rajeev (thinking):mai kia karon kayse bataooo ose............





Prerna:Rajeev kin socho mai gum ho.....

Rajeev:hmmm........nahi mama......kahin nahi...

Anurag:to khana khaooooo na tumhare bewi ne banaya hai........

Rajeev:hmmm......ji........

Prerna:wase Amna bhumika ki shadi kub hai...

Amna:mama.....papa ne kaha hai k parson shadi hai papa chahte thay k eng na ho aur sirf shadi ho........paata nahi itne jaldi kis baat ki hai.....

Prerna:jaldi to hogi na unhey kahin tumhey.........

Rajeev(interupts):mama..........plzzzzz(he gave her angry luk)........

Amna:kia baat mama aap kuch keh rahe thi......

Anurag:nahi beta tum khana khao wo baas shadi ka poch rahe tho k shadi k baad to Bhimika London chali jaye ge na.....

Amna :ji papa........(she thinks):mai jaante hoon aap kia kehna chah rahe thi......
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Now frnds here the parts end.....hope u all like it........
luv
tc
Mehreen.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
mehru a tooo good part.. 👏 aur haan mehru joh pics tumne lagaye hain they are really shooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttttttttt..... 😳
tho ab amna ko khud bha khud sachchayi ka patah chal gaya.......bechari....uska kya haal hoga... 😭
please let rajeev sambhal amna..& manify her for the treatment....... 😉 ab chalo jaldi se continue karna...me will be waiting.... 😛
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
aur kise ne nahi parhe......... 😭 .....thanx sur...........mai jaldi cont karon gi....u r soo sweettttt 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow great. 👏

I have just entered the Fan Fic section & it's the 1st ever Fan-fic I read. Mehreen u wrote really good.
I read some pages. Difficult to find them but too good.
Remembered those KTH days.

Plz cont soon. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ANKESH

Wow great. 👏

I have just entered the Fan Fic section & it's the 1st ever Fan-fic I read. Mehreen u wrote really good.
I read some pages. Difficult to find them but too good.
Remembered those KTH days.

Plz cont soon. 😳

than ankesh......i"ll cont tomorrow inshallah..............

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Posted: 19 years ago
Gr8 part 👏 aamna ko sach pata chal gaya bichari 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi i read yr ff for the first time n it mind blowing, fab n no other words to describe it.
plz write soon cant wait so long
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Posted: 19 years ago
mehru dear please continue karna..me waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago

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