~'Dil Hai Tumhara~'(Rajeev n Amna) - Page 23

thankuu everyone..........here the last part of Dil Hai Tumhara......hope u all like it......

At evening........
Rajeev office se ghar aata hai.....aur apne room mai jaata hai.........
Amna: a gaye tum.....laooo files do.....

Rajeev:hmmmmmmmm.....kayse ho...

Amna:bilkul theek.....

Rajeev:hmmmmmm......(he kiss her on her cheeks.....)

Amna:Rajeev.....tumhey es k ilawa koi kaam aata hai........

Rajeev:aata haina......

Amna:kia.....??/

Rajeev:tumhey dekhna......tumhare baare mai sochna.........aur.....

Amna:aur....

Rajeev:aur.....

Amna:Rajeev...

Rajeev:Amna........

Amna:shut up.....Rajeev jaooo fresh ho jaooo......

Rajeev:fresh wo to mai jub bhi tumhey dekhta hoon ho jaata hoon..... 😳 😳

Amna:acha......aur agar kaal mai na rahe to.....

Rajeev put his hand on her mouth...

Rajeev:Amna......plzz kabhi bhule se bhi ayse baat na kerna......werna tumhara Rajeev bhi...(he become seroius)

Amna:Rajeev mai to mazak ker rahe thi...

Rajeev:mazak mai bhi ayenda aysa maat kehna......samjhe...

Amna:smjh gaye.....

Rajeev:acha kaal tiyar rehna hosp jaana haina.....operation k liye

Amna:Rajeev.....paata nahi kyun mujhe daar lag raha hai.....

Rajeev:kis baat ka daar ...mai tumhare saath hoona.....

Amna:hmmm

Rajeev:to baas phir......acha chalo .....ice cream khane chalo gi.....

Amna:es time.....abhi khane ka time ho jaye ga...

Rajeev:to kia howa.....chalo...

Amna:per.....

Rajeev:chalo........(wo use uthata hai...)
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Prerna:aray beta es time kaha ja rahe ho.....

Rajeev:wooo......mama kuch kaam hai.....

Prerna:es time.....aur Amna k saath kaam..

Rajeev:haan mama hai kuch kaam hum chalte hain......ok bye.....
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In London..........(Arjun's house.....)
Arjun n Bhumika r having breakfast.....





Bhumi:Arjun..

Arjun:hmmm.....

Bhumi:mai soch rahe thi di ko fone ker loon.....kaal unka operation hai........kitne ajeeb baat haina......mai unki behen hote hue bhi ues waqt un k pass nahi.....

Arjun:tum q tension layte ho........humne to kaha tha na rukne ko per Amna di ne kuhd mana ker dia.....aur hum unki baat kayse taal sakte thay.....tum fiker na karo Rajeev un se bohot pyar kerta hai.....aur us ka pyar unhey kuch nahi hone day ga......

Bhumi:hmmmmm......

Arjun:hum kaal unhey fone ker lay gay.....theek hai..

Bhumi:haan...
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Next Morning.....
aaj ka din Rajeev k liye sub se bara imtihaan hai......aaj us k pyar ka uski duaon ka imtihan hai.........kia us ka pyar us ki duaye Amna ko bacha paye gay......................

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Ronit:Gunn beta .....

Gunn:ji papa....

Ronit:beta tum hos chal rahe hoo na.....

Gunn:ji papa .....

Ronit:theek hai tumhare mama kaha hain.....

Gunn:papa wo subha he Amna k pass chale gaye thi......

Ronit:chalo theek hai hum bhi nikalte hain aab dayr ho rahe hai......

Gunn:ji chaliye.........Krishna......krishna chalo........

Krishna:haan a gaya chalo......

They leave .........

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At hos.....
Amna abhi room mai hote hai Rajeev k saath operation ki tiyarian ho rahe hote hain.....

Karan comes there.....

Karan:so Mrs.Amna Rajeev Goenka........r u ready......

Amna:ji...

Karan:theek hai...baas thore dayr mai aapka operation shuru ker diya jaye ga.....ok

Karan leaves........
Amna:Rajeev.....mujhe bohot daar lag raha hai.....

Rajeev:Amna kaysa daar......mai hoon na tumhare saath......baas hamare pyar pe yaqeen rakho........

Amna:hmmmmm....

Nurse come

Nurse:chaliye operation ka time ho gaya hai.....

Rajeev:ji.....
They both hug...Amna cry's Rajeev os k anso saaf kerta hai ..........
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Operation shuru hue 2 ghante ho chukey hotay hain magar abhi tuk kkoi khabar nahi ayye hote......baha sub tensed hote hain Rajeev k liye to jayse aik aik paal katna mushkil tha us ki zindagi aaj naye dohraye pe khare thi.........aaj us ka pyar aik imtihan lay raha tha.........najane kia kismat mai likh diya gaya tha in kay............

Song in background (4 Raj)
Bewafa tum nahi ho
Bewafa hum nahi hain........
Apne kismat mai shyad gham bhi kuch kum nahi hain
Aik hulchul na jane q rahe mere maan mai
Kuch smjh mai na aye
Kia karon es uljhann mai
Tum khare os kinare
hum khare es kinare.........
hooooo oh hooooo
Kaye hai ye majbori
muur k jub bhi dekho to
ankh bhar aye.........................
Thora sa pyar hua tha
Thora hai baki.................

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Finally operation khatam hota hai ......Karan bahir nikal k aata hai..........All r tensed




Rajeev:Karan......kia hua Amna theek haina.....

Karan remain silent

Rajeev:Karan bolo na Amna theek haina......

Karan wo..........
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After 8 years.........
We saw a big house......a little girl of 7 years is sitting wid other some childs......juzt then someone comes there

Girl:kia baat hai ji aap bachay es tarha q bethay ho......

Child:dekhiye na Manasvi chachi aaj mera b'day aur mom dad ne mujhe gift nahi diya abhi tuk......

Manasvi:oh to hamare Riya es liye naraz hai.....kaha hai mama aap ki...

Riya:wo room mai hai...

Manasvi:acha anay do unhey nichay abhi pochte hain unse.....ok.....

Juzt then camera focus on upstairs n we enters a room......es room mai har jaga pic lage hue hote hain..........

Pic no 1......



pIC NO 2......



Pic no 3......


Pic no 4......(jo bed k bilkul oper hote hai...)



ji haan aab sub ka sochna bilkul sahi hai ye Rajeev aur Amna ka room hai...Amna zinda hai.....

Amna:Rajeev kitne bure baat hai tum apni beti ko kitna tang kerte ho aaj uska b'day hai aur tumne abhi tuk ose gift nahi diya........

Rajeev:ohhhhh Amna.....mai apni beti se bohot pyar kerta hoon aur use udas dekh nahi sukta...

Amna:to aab q use udas kia.....

Rajeev:uffffff kaha kia party mai doon ga na apni cute beti ko gift.....per tumhey bhi mujhe kuch dayna hoga......

Amna:kia mai tumhey q doon b'day mere beti ki hai........

Rajeev:haan per mai us ka papa hoon.....to mujhe bhi tumhey kuch dayna hoga.....

Amna:acha ji kia chahiye aapko......

Rajeev:bata doon...

Amna:ji bataye...

Rajeev:mujhe......(he pull her towards him......)...mujhe.....

Amna:Rajeev choro.....mujhe.....riya a jaye ge to kia kahe ge...

Rajeev:kia kahe ge...

Amna:Rajeev...... 😳 😳

Juzt then riya enters.....

Riya:mama papa......

Rajeev Amna ko chorta hai... 😳

Rajeev: a jaoo papa ki doll......)wo ose goud(lap) mai uthata hai.....n kisses her...)

Riya:papa aapne mujhe gift nahi diya.....

Rajeev:ohhh aap ne apney room mai dekha.....

Riya:nahi...

Rajeev:oh to my sweet doll maine aapka gift aap k room mai rakh diya hai......theeek hai..

Riya(become happy):sachi papa......thank u.....

Rajeev:ur wellcome my doll.....nichay chalay.....

Riya:hmmm.....

Rajeev:chalay Amna......

Amna:chalo......

Wo teeno nichay jaatey hain jahan sub unka intezar ker rahe hote hain......

Now i tell u that

Rajeev aur Amna ki aik beti hai........"Riya"
Suraj aur Manasvi ka aik beta hai....."aditiya"
Arjun aur Bhumika ka aik beta aur aik beti hai....."Neha" aur "Dani"
Laksh aur Tanya ki aik beti hai.........."Bhoomi"
Angad aur Kripa k 3 bachay hain ...2 daughters n 1 son........"Mansi"..."Hiten" aur "Archita"
Gunn aur Krishna k do betay hain..."prateek: aur "nakul.."

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B'day time.....
Riya cake katey hai aur sub use wish kerte hain...................
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Now they all live happily ........



Rajeev n Amna......



Angad Kripa......



Arjun Bhumika........


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here last of my story ends.........hope u all like it........
me waiting 4 ur comments........
this last part is dedicated to
Sur,Ayesha,Bina,Unum,Farah,Tuhina,Poonam,Shirley n everyone who read it.........
luv u all
tc
Mehreen........

(mai jald he wapis aoo ge apni new story k saath)
filhal mai 15 ko karachi ja rahe hoon...
bye...... 😳

a very beautiful endin to this stoy.i wish the story wwent on 4 a few more days. 👏

mehru dear what a wonderful part have you written.. me seriously very very very damn khushhhhhhhhhhh.....
yaar the part was totally rocking , too good , brillant , excellent , fantastic , lovely , beautiful , great , good , best , bindass , mind blowing , very well written , awesome....part isse zyada main kahoon tho kya kahoon..now all i can is 👍🏼 seriously yaar the part was very well written.. i totally loved it..... your story totally rocked from start to finish....👍🏼 thanks for the dedication... 😊 😛 😃 ab please jaldi se apni nayi story start
karna..me will be eagerly waiting for your new story please post soon... 😃

HEY MEHREEN dear thanks a lot for dedication... 😊
& last two parts were superb... 😊 maza aa gaya... 😛
nice story all in all.... 😊
😊

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

a very beautiful endin to this stoy.i wish the story wwent on 4 a few more days. 👏

thanx jhyoti.....but as i told u that i have to go karachi...so i don't have time........😳

Originally posted by: sun_423

mehru dear what a wonderful part have you written.. me seriously very very very damn khushhhhhhhhhhh.....
yaar the part was totally rocking , too good , brillant , excellent , fantastic , lovely , beautiful , great , good , best , bindass , mind blowing , very well written , awesome....part isse zyada main kahoon tho kya kahoon..now all i can is 👍🏼 seriously yaar the part was very well written.. i totally loved it..... your story totally rocked from start to finish....👍🏼 thanks for the dedication... 😊 😛 😃 ab please jaldi se apni nayi story start
karna..me will be eagerly waiting for your new story please post soon... 😃

thanx my dear sur......n ya no thanx yaar........baas wapis aate he new story start ker doon ge...........luv u dear thanx once again..........n ya i thing more i luv da way u comments dear.......😳

Originally posted by: KulBin

HEY MEHREEN dear thanks a lot for dedication... 😊
& last two parts were superb... 😊 maza aa gaya... 😛
nice story all in all.... 😊
😊

thanx bina 4 liking it.........

its a loving ff n a lovely ending as wel
it was mindblowing
hope to read from u for another ff too

Great Ending

Thanks for the dedication