~'Dil Hai Tumhara~'(Rajeev n Amna)

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

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Posted: 19 years ago

#181

ok finally i posted.....here da next part

Rajeev:Kripa........

Kripa:ji bhaia........

Rajeev:tumhare frnd nahi aye.....

Kripa:bhaia....us ka fone aya tha keh rahe thi raste mai hai......baas aate hogi.....

Rajeev:acha......

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Angad:wow ......

Kripa:hello Mr kaha dekh rahe ho......

Angad:wo waha.....wow kia larki hai......

Kripa n everyone also sees there..........
Kripa:idiot.........insaan...roko zara......

(Kripa goes there........)
Kripa:Hi fakhra kkayse ho....

Fakhra:mai theek hoon kripa.....tum kayse ho.

Kripa:theek thak.....itne dair u know wat bhaia kubse intezar ker rahe thay.....

Fakhra:oh sorry......chalo mil k aate hain......

Kripa;chalo........
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Angad:ye kripa ki kon hai.....
Suraj comes there.....
Suraj:Angad ye kripa ki frnd hai bachpan ki......

Angad:wattt.....oh god......

Lakshya:q kia hua.....

Angad:nahi kuch nahi........
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Fakhra:congratz Rajeev......congratz Amna.......

RAJEEV:THANX......Amna ye fakhra hai Kripa ki bachpan ki dost

Amna:hmmm....

Anurag comes there........
Anurag:aray fakhra beta kayse ho........
Fkhra:theek hoon uncle........wow uncle u luking handsome.........
Anurag:thanx beta........acha bacho chalo mohraat ka time ho gaya hai........oo beta Rajeev Amna........
(All boyz r wid Rajeev n galz r wid Amna)
Pandit ji saare mantar parhte hain aur shadi hoti hai.....)(sorry haan mujhe indian shadi ka kuch zada paata nahi.......)

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Afetr shadi.....
saare guests chalay jaate hain sirf ye saare frnd aur czn hote hain........aur unhoney decide kia hota hai k aaj saare raat wo jage gay.........na khud suye gay na RAJEEV AMNA ko sonay dayne gay...(poor couple.....lolz)
Angad:chaal RAJEEV tere to shadi ho gaye ......aab to tou hame bhul jaye ga na..........
Kripa:angad idiot.......of course aab bhaia ko bhabhi ko bhi to time dayna hoga na.....
Angad:hmmmm......dekha beta Arjun........abhi to tere sirf baat paki hue hai..........aur haan aik idea........
Lakshya&Rajeev:not again angad...
Angad:suno to sahi.....kyun na kaal reception k baad hum bachlors party karay????????/
All galz:watttttt................no way........
Angad:kia wattt...per aik prob hai Rajeev Suraj bhaia aur Krishna kayse a sakte hain unki to shadi ho chuke hai.........

Sur:Angad:koi party nahi hogi......
Bhumi:sur is rite.......
Tuhina:bilkul....ye dono theek hain.....
Arjun:bhumi party hogi.........
Bhumi:tum nahi jaoo gay.....
Arjun:dekha poonam........kash tum phelay mil jaate to ye sub na hota.......
(all laughs)
Rajeev:dekha bhumi......sambhal k rakhna.........ese...
Bhumi:haan jeju rakhna pare ga........
Lakshya:wasay shadi k baad larkay ka roob zada hona chahaiye........q kia kehte ho adi....
Adi:haan u r rite.....
Mita:no way.....
Sur:Amna tumhara kia khiyal hai..............??????
Amna:sur meray khiyal mai ye sub nahi hona chahiye......agar pati patni mai pyar ho to phir roob ki kia zarorat......pyar ki buniyad to vishwas hota hai......aur agar aap ka aik dosre pe vishwas hai to phir in sub ki kia zarorat......
Sur:hmmmmmmmm......u r 1000% rite...
fakhra:ya i also agree.....q Mr Angad jawab mila......
Angad:hmmmm.......wah yaar dost Rajeev kia patni paye hai kash......
Kripa(interupts):kash mujhe bhi aysa koi mil jaye.....hmmmmmm
Angad:wow kripa tum mujhe kitne achi tarha samjhte ho........
Kripa:shut up idiot......
Angad:tumhey es k ilawa koi word aata hai ......
Kripa;Angadddddd......... 😡 😡 😡
Suraj:wase tuhina tumhara shadi k baare mai kia khiyal hai........
Tuhina:nahi suraj abhi nahi abhi sirf parhaye.....aur wase bhi koi mila nahi ........pheley tumne shadi ker li aur aab Rajeev bhi chala gaya..........
(they all smiles)
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Prerna comes there........
Prerna:aray bacho.....tum loog kia sare raat yunhi bethay raho gay.....
Rajeev:mama......ye in sub ka idea hai k aaj sare raat baatien hongi.....
Prerna:wo q.....
Rajeev:inhey se poch lay...
Adi:wo kia haina aunty hum sub ne decide kia hai k aaj sare raat baas mazay kare gay aur kuch nahi......
Prerna:ufff tum bachay bhi na........acha laykin agar thak jaooo to so jana ok.....
Bina:ji......
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Poonam:waase Arjun shadi kub hai.....
Arjun:kis ki............(confused)
Poonam:tumhare aur mere.......
All:watttttt......
Poonam:ufff mere aur tumhare to hone se rahe pof course tmhare aur bhumika ki.....
Arjun:ohhhhhh........
Amna:poonam tumne to bhumi ko daara dia tha......
Poonnam:aray bapre.........sorry haan bhumi...
Bhumi:wat di.....jiju samjhao na di ko......
Rajeev:haan Amna q tang ker rahe ho ose.......wase i think poonam is rite choice.....q Arjun.....
Bhumi:wattt.........(she made fake sad face while other smiles)
Kripa:bhaia mujhe neend a rahe hai...........
Mita:ye nahi badle.....
Suraj:hmmmm........
Farah:acha Amna mai chalte hoon..........
Amna:farah itne jaldi......
Farah:haan wo baas tum to jaante hona.....kaal subha office jana hai......to es liye......mai kaal ao ge.....
Amna:ok.....ana zaror per.........bye.....
Farah:bye......(they hug)
Farah:bye Rajeev..........(also hug.........hm farah khush........lolz)
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Kripa:bhaia mai ja rahe hoon......aur fakhra tum bhi chalo inki baatien khatam nahi hongi......c'mon
Angad:kripa unhey to choor do........
Kripa:q..........chalo fakhra......
fakhra:ok chalo.............
(they also goes......)
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Rajeev:wase my dear frnds...hum yahan kia saare raat baatien kerte rahe gay........
Lakshya:q.....tune kia kerna hai........
Rajeev:matlab.....
Angad:kia yaar tum loog bhi..........u guyz r sooo boring...
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Ok guyz here da next part ends..........
hope u all like it.....
plz do comments..
tc
luv
Mehreen...... 😳

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#182

mehru yaar tooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddd............ 👏
i loved reading the part..it was very damn nice... 👏
mehru yaar yeh bechare raj aur amna ko sabne kyun rokh rakha hain...bechare.... 😉 ab plz agle part mein thoda sa romance add karna.......... 😉
& plz continue soon..me will be waiting...😊😃😛

Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: sun_423
mehru yaar tooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddd............ 👏
i loved reading the part..it was very damn nice... 👏
mehru yaar yeh bechare raj aur amna ko sabne kyun rokh rakha hain...bechare.... 😉 ab plz agle part mein thoda sa romance add karna.......... 😉
& plz continue soon..me will be waiting...😊😃😛

thanx sur dear......but sur dear actually mai 16 ko karachi ja rahe hoon..........aur jaane se pheley mai apni story khatam ker k jaoo gi............but i promise u k jub aooooo ge to new story zaror likhon gi....................n ya i luv the way u comments.............................😳......😳..........aur jahan tuk baat rahe Rajeev Amna ko rokne ki to........agla part parh layna................

SUR jub apni story cont ker do to mujhe zaror bata dayna,..............😉

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#184

gr8 part 👏 finally shadi hoayi im sooo 😃 fantastic 👏

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group_1223

@group_1223

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#185

gud part mehru....it was really funny....agree wid surya.....do add some romantic mements....n don't feel shy while writin em 😆 ...say bye 2 ur sharam 4 a while......(haaye allah... tum kaho gi...kaisi larki hai...lol)well newayz....will b waitin 4 ur update....n i m sure itz gonna b awesome....

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#186

when ur going to cont plz do fast cant w8 long yar 😊

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#187

Greaaaaaattttttt Fan-fic Continue Sooon Yaar!!!....Finally they got married..and ya some romanitc parts!..Needed 😳

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#188

mehru dear me will wait for your new fanfic me sure it will be totally rocking... 😊 yup i'll inform u when i post my story..pukka.. 😊 ab please continue soon me waiting...... 😃

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#189

ohoooo bachon se sabar nahi hota......chalo post ker he dayte hoon......

Angad:uffffff..........kitne boriat hai......chalo chal k so he jaate hain......

Rajeev:q beta aye na line pe......

Angad:Rajeev.....chal ja main e tujhe azad kia.....

Rajeev:watttttttt......to na......

Angad:chal ja ja......Amna...i mean Amna bhabhi thuk gaye hongi.....

Rajeev:oh........bye.....chalo Amna...

Angad:bye.....

Rajeev:Suraj bhaia......in sub ko room dikha de ga.....

Suraj:haan dikha doon ga...tum jao......gud nite.....gud nite Amna

Rajeev:gud nite

Amna:gud nite bhaia........
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In roooom.....................(lugta hai sub ka intezar khatam hua...)

Rajeev:aoooooo Amna ye hai hamara room..........
kaysa laga.......

Amna:acha hai.....

Rajeev:hmmmmmm........tum change ker aooo kafe thak gaye hogi......

Amna:hmmmmm.........
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Amna change ker k aate hain aur dekhte hai k Rajeev window mai khara hai........

Amna:kia baat hai Rajeev.......

Rajeev:hmmmmm........a gaye tum........

Amna:haan a gaye......per maine pocha kia baat hai tum yahan q khare ho......

Rajeev:nahi to baas ayse he......aooooo
....betho yahan...)wo bed pe bethte hai Rajeev nichay bethta hai.....

Rajeev Amna ko dekhay ja raha hota hai........

Amna:ayse kia dekh rahe ho........

Rajeev:yehi k tum bohot khubsorat ho.....

Amna:ohhhhh.........kia baat hai ji..........

Rajeev:Amna tum mera saath kabhi choro gi to nahi na......

Amna:kabhi nahi Rajeev......mai hamesha tumhare saath rahon gi.........

Rajeev:i love u Amna......i love u soo much........

Amna:i love u too Rajeev..........
(they hug.....)n then.....ahem ahem........(agay kia lihon...gande bacho sharam nahi aate......chalo in k room se chalte hain......)

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Next day...its reception.........
Amna uthte hai aur washroom jaate hai..........(ane k baad..)

Amna:Rajeev.....Rajeev utho na........

Rajeev(sleep guy):hmmmm......Amna sone doo na......tum bhi soo jao.....

Amna:wattt........Mr.Rajeev Goenka.....subha k 9 baj rahe hainnn...aur aap aab tuk so rahe hain........chaliye utjiye.....

Rajeev:Amna........

Amna:theek hai tum ayse nahi utho gay.....(she get up.....while Rajeev hold her hand........)
Amna:kia hai Rajeev......choro na.....

Rajeev:nahi choro ga.....

Amna:Rajeev kia bachpana hai..utho na.....choro mera haath.....

Rajeev:nahi......(wo ose apne taraf kerta hai.....)

Amna(shy):Rajeev chror na......kia ker rahe hoo.....utho........

Rajeev:aab tum to mere pass a nahi rahe thi to maine socha k tumhey es tarha bulaoo......

Amna:Rajeev.....pagal ho gaye ho kia....

Rajeev:haan......tumhare pyar mai...

Amna:shut up...utho........

Rajeev:raat ko maza aya...

Amna:wattt.....

Rajeev:Amna.....kaal raat.....

Amna:shut up Rajeev.....utho na......(she pushes him back.....)

Rajeev:theek hai aik shart pe......

Amna:wattttt.....aab kia hai......

Rajeev:give me a kiss........ 😳 😳

Amna:wattt...

Rajeev:kia wat wat laga rakhi hai tumhara husband hoon...itna to haq haina ........

Amna:Rajeev......... 😳 😳

Rajeev:jaldi karoo na.....agar na di to mai nahi utho ga......

Amnna kisses him on his forehead......

Rajeev:hmmm......aik aur do na.....

Amna:Rajeev.....uthooooooooo......... 😳 😳

(Amna waha se uth jaate hai aur Rajeev washroom chala jaata hai........)
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wo dono nichay aate hain......
Prerna:aray aooo beta .....

Rajeev n Amna take blessings.....

Anurag:aooo bacho nashta kar lo........

they both sits.....n Angad also sits with Rajeev...
Amna:mama......aap ne mujhe bula liya hota mai nashta banane mai aapki help ker dayte......

Prerna:aray nahi beta.....abhi to kaal hi shadi hue hai........aur naye dulhan itne jaldi kaam to nahi kerte na beta.....

Amna:mama.....aik taraf aap mujhe bahu kehte hain aur aik taraf beti........to kia aapki beti ko itna huq nahi hai......

Prerna:aray nahi beta......theek hai jayse tumhare marzi.....

Amna:kaal ka khana mai banaooo gi...

Prerna:theek hai...per apne saath es kripa ko bhi laga layna........din bhar farigh bethi rahay ge..... tum manasvi aur kripa mil k kaam ker layna..........wase Anurag tumhey paata hai tumhare beti ne pore aik hafte ki college se chuti le hai......

Anurag:to kia howa........os k bhai ki shadi hue hai........os ka huq hai enjoy kerne ka.....

Prerna:kia......tumhare he lad pyar ne begar dia hai ese.....

Kripa:mommmmm......kuch nahi hota.....

Prerna:to chup ker k nashta ker......Rajeev beta Amna ko aaj os k ghar chor dayna.....puk pheray ki rasam k liye,..........

Rajeev:ji mama.....

Anagd:ahem ahem......aunty ye wase rasam kitne dayr ki hote hai......

Rajeev:tujhe kia kerna hai.....

Angad:chup ker..

Prerna:beta Amna aab jaye gi rasam k liye aur sham ko Rajeev k saath a jaye gi.....

Angad;oh.........phir to Rajeev ko lamba intezar kerna hoga.........

Rajeev:watt..........Angad....nashta ker....

Prerna:tum bacho ki baatien bhi na......
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After breakfast.........
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Amna apne room mai jaate hai aur Rajeev k liye dress slect..... kerte hai.....

Rajeev:ye kia ker rahe ho.....

Amna:tumhare kafray nikal rahe hoon............shaam mai jub aoo gay to yehi pehena.....

Rajeev:ok ji Mrs.Amna Rajeev Goenka.......jo aapka hukum......

Amna:shut up Rajeev......chalo dayr ho rahe hai.....

Rajeev:chalo............
((they leave.....)......

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ok frnds here da part ends......hope u all like it,,,,,,,,,,

n thanx everyone........
...
luv tc
Mehreen.....

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KulBin

@KulBin

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#190

hey mehreen lovely parts.... 👏
i wasnt able to comment on wedding part... 😕
that was really good fun loving part.... 👏
this one is too good..... 👏 or yaar dono pics kya mast direction pe dali hai superb.... 😛
gr8 gng... 👏
do cont soon... 😊