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..Jyoti..

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

beautiful update dear.. 😊

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#652

Thank you for clarifying that! I know I made the mistake of misunderstanding!

interesting chapter.. so she is slowly trying to get better.. but the main thing that is holding her back is fear.. that she will go back into the darkness!

very nice!

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jeya0301

@jeya0301

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Posted: 13 years ago

#653

Thnx..:) another beautiful update..:) want more ...

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

That was a haunting chapter...to see her thoughts and feelings defined so simply into light and darkness, liquid, fire and touch. What will make her pull down that curtain? It has to be her doing, it can't be anyone else. Loved the simplicity of it.

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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#655

whoa woman written khushi's emotions so well... u know m crazy for this kinda writing. loved the chappie... i had to catch up on two updates.. i wont be active till november cz of exams so i might catch up on this late so dont mind if my comments are irregular...

and yea thanks a lot for the special pms.. it means a lot

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Checkmatee

@Checkmatee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#656

Lovely update, thanks for the pm!!:)

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#657

Could u explain the last para..I mean why does she feel its a sieve..i am missing something i bet..and foot falls fail her, didnt get that also..

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Xaffi

@Xaffi

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#658

Amazing... Continue soon... Loved the style of writting...

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#659

wowww zehra.. fabulous.. So the light was actually coming from arnav right.. aha.. after so long i got to use arnav instead of asr..but just reading how terribly terrified khushi was is making me more and more sympathetic to her.. ASR has to go a long way to make her actually reach the threshold of happiness.. Loved the way u wrote khushi's POV

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#660

so the darkness has surrounded her
and the footfalls is arnav of course
oh dear she is afraid to go towards the light scared that the darkness will come after her again
dude what have we done the damage is even more worse than we thought
oh god one hope she gets out of the dark place and finds the light again
could the motherly voice be that of the doc
man if he ever comes to know of her pov he is going to hate himself even more right
cheers for pm