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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

reserved 😃

***edited***

just read the update,and am back. . 😉

well,i had served this section for commenting,but now,i have no works!

well,what to comment then!very very well described Khushi's point of view . .
the depth of your words,OMG,am just not gettin words to praise... .
your a gifted writer. .with beautiful writing skills. .
***
about the note,
well,i did understand that wat was linked with destroyed and you added it to show that Arnav has changed now. .
can't wait for more now,plz bring it on. .thanks for the pm . .
😳

Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago

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sree1993

@sree1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

loved it zehra

i was waiting to read khushi's pov

thankyou for updating😃

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Hira

@hira_arnie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Very well written zehra hatz off to u..brilliant update i really feel each and every word of ur update..i have no doubt in this update..love the way u express her feeling just wana cry..ur update touch my heart seriously...i hope khushi try her best to become normal...superb update.. Continue soon plz:):)

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Deepa

@harshdb

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#644

WOW.. this made me emotional... good going.. update soon.

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

loved it

i can see the bit where it was in destroyed and at which part and then now at unconditional

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KKKA

@KKKA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

DOUBLE L ...BEAUTIFULLY EXPLAINED THE TWO POLE APART

EMOTIONS OF FEAR AND SCARE

EXCELLENT

SHE IS IN THE DARK ,THE BLACK WHOLE HAS CONSUMED HER

SHE FEELS DEFEATED BUT WANTS TO COME OUT OF THE DARK

WANTS TO TOUCH THE LIGHT

ARNAV YOU HAVE TO GO A LONG WAY SHE WAS TOO INNOCENT

YOU TRAMPLED A ROSE PETAL UNDER YOUR FOOT

THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME POSTED

KKKA

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#647

her pain is beautifully portrayed...amazing update dear👏next update soon pls😊

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#648

loved it

i cud see clearly which part was destroyed and at which part and which was unconditional

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#649

have edited my comment for your touching part 6 on page 98. .
😊

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Sona

@mistyrains

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#650

That was a terrific chapter Zehra. Firstly I'm glad we got an insight to Khushi's mind. Even though her thoughts were painful really, it helped us understand her silence more. But the way you have written it is applause-worthy. It was poetic, abstract, yet conveyed all and more it had set out to do. I am moved.