Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

read the whole last chapters together!!

wow yaar!! it was too good.

will miss this SS a lot!!

come back again with a bang...

pls...

👏👏👏

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#402

hey avantika

loved each and every part of your writing

believe me i really liked it alot

thanks alot for this story

hope to read more of your work

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

avantika di..
i m speechless di...
outstanding
fab
amazing
superb
brilliant
excellent
marvellous
piece of works.!!...
i m touched by each update of dis...
dis is one of my fav reading!!.
a request di plz if possible put a epilogue plz...
awesumest work..
chumneshwari in ,terence style di...
congo fr becuming writer of d week di..
hats off di!!.
keep rocking di..!!
all d best fr ur future di...!!!
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loved dis ss...!
grt efforts di...!!

beautiful

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princesshelen

@princesshelen

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Amazing update...
U r such a amazing writer

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Aww Such a beautiful ending to a wonderful story... Thank u so much Avantika for penning down this wonderful piece of work🤗

waiting to read more works from you... hope u vl continue to write on Ariya... All the very best for ur other nd upcoming works...

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Thats was lvly ending dr ,
amazing update

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

thank u so much avantika di🤗🤗 4 writing ADHOORI SI DUA it was such an beautiful story that i read on forum a millins of thanx ti u i just loved its each n every word of it form the bottom of my soul...loved ariya...now a lil bit sad ab to yeh bhi neh keh sekti ki update soon🥺

well aap ek epilouge kyu nahi likhate of ariyan ther princess n etf' life after this time plz try

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-Rajvi-

@-Rajvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Read all the 3 parts in one go and they were absolutely fantastic...

In first part ARIYA romantic moments were too good...and the little conversation between Riya,Shree,Chotu and Arjun was very cute(especially Arjun's comment on Shree for waiting for few more years😉).
And what to say about 2 part...it was super hawwtt😉while reading it,i was blushing like an idiot😆

Ending was very good...especially the last para...it was very touching...

Story was very beautifully written and narrated,hats off to you for that..👏👏
and i have a request,if possible please do write a epilogue,its one among my ADHOORI SI DUA😳😳

Thanks a lot for the story and PM!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Avantika I read this like three hours ago and I still haven't come up with a way to say how much I loved this update.

Thank god for all your warnings otherwise I would have had a silly grin on my face which would have made anyone sitting with me wonder about state of my mind.😆

Seriously my gal this was as perfect as it gets and as hot it can get.

Above was for part 9B.

While I was making a comment on 9B I realized that you actually posted the last chapter also, so I stopped and read it.

Anyway the ending was superb of course and it was so sweet. I remembered when you started writing this, and I was one of the ones who begged you to continue it and I am so glad you granted us our request.

You are so right this is the most beautiful story about love, marriage and parenthood, the most beautiful part of any couples life and portrayed it so well.

Thank you for making me smile, grin, laugh, cry and blush. Perfect ending to a perfect story.

Thanks so much for the PM.