Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Thank u so much for writing such a wonderfull ss...
Cant have word to express hw sweet the ss was...
Fabulous fantastic excellant and etc...
Ur ending part was so so so so hot and romantic specially bathroom shower...tat was such a awesome scene...
If u can come with epilogue...
Waiting for next work on ariya...

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Perfect<3
Beautiful Journey Of Adhoori Si Dua Written By An Amazing Writer
Indeed The Best SS Of Ariya Which We All Will miss
The Ending Couldnt Get Any Better
Totally Ariyallicious And Fabulous
Sad At The End Of The SS But It Was The Best My Favourite Out Of All Cuz This Was The First SS Of Ariya I Actually Began Reading So Its Special To mee Too
Truly Great
Amazingly Portrayed Arjun And Riya's Character
Loved It

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JennyPenny

@JennyPenny

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

That was simply outstanding but I am so disappointed to see an end to this beautiful story.

Cannot for you to write more Ariya FF! Lovely work and beautiful end.

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

WOW...what an amazing end to an amazing story!

Loved it...thats an understatement

Hats off to u girl!

yes Parenthood is definitely a gift and its an amazing feeling to become parents...it changes the life once and for all and it never remains the same...happiest moments of life!

a big applause for capturing that so brilliantly in ARIYA's life...

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Avantika Di,

a super amazing n 1 of my favorite story is dis ...dis was i think d first love story i read on d forum ...mujhe Love stories boring lagti Thi but i guess after reading dis work...mujhe boring nhi lagti ..😆

loved each n every chapter ...

superbly written

liked d additional statements u wrote at d end or begining of every chapter

Whether it was arjun disclosing d news of ris'a pregnancy to her or b it d extra care n concern she had wen d team was going on for a dangerous case...

or b it d happy moment wen she finally cum face to face with him ...all were just amazing

A very beautiful n romantic story ..which one obviously cant expect in d show...

The extra romance in last 2 chapters was mind blowing definitely

one thing i liked more was ...we have always seen a soft side of ria ...dis story dere was a different n a very beautiful , a very protective side of arjun was shown ...the utmost concern , a feeling of protectiveness which he had for his wife n to b child... was "top of d world"

The way he was asking for forgiveness in last chapter was just amazing ... he was genuinely feeling sorry for troubling her...dat was nicely written

Chalo now i think i shud nd my bakwaas...warna aap bore ho jaoge read karke ...

Bye n thanks for such a amazing story 1ce again ...

~~Purva~~

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

this is a beautiful update
And awesome one
Loved their relationship
U written so beautifully so thanx 4 written it...
Thanx 4 d pm Dear

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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

you can see my cheeks turned red...I am Blushing...

So Romantic...

Arjun is getting Naughtier now a days...I am loving this side of Arjun more..😉

Too Good Avantika..

Congrats on being WOTW...

Brilliant Writing!!

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

really awesome love-story!!! I loved the way u showed their parenthood...!! U showed it something very beautiful...!!!

I loved the calling Mumma- papa concept a lot!!!

Thank u so much!!

Do keep us entertaining with more wonderful stories

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

avantika :

haww ! this SS ended ! that's absolutely unfair..waise thanx for putting p the HAWTNESS ALERT !! in the previous updates, the way it continued in the final part too, i would have landed myself in a serious trouble without a sufficient supply of water handy😆. do give us an epilogue of mummy, papa and princess😊. and best wishes for your other FFs.😊