virman os : ye dil bhi naa... COMPLETED - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice updates. thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
another awesome os!!! plzz do update soon!! n thnx for d pm!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
another awesome os!! plzz do update soon!! n thnkx for d pm!! tc:))
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Great update.Poor Manvi ,to help virat she said that lie .Either dadaji will scold her or accept them.If he accepts them then we could see some fun and awkward moments between Virat and Manvi as still manvi has no special feelings for virat .Waiting for ur next update eagerly to find out what happens next.


pls pls pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Lovely OS... Would love to read more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
lovely update, wnder wats gna hppn nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lolz virman ye kya kiya 🤣 ab Dadaji hi dono ki shaadi karva denge... Awesome huh luvd it... Thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THIS PART WILL BE A SHOCK TO ALL MY READERS... BUT I SUPPOSE BY NOW YOU ALL MIGHT HAVE REALISED THAT I LOVE TWIST AND TURNS... ACTUALLY TO BE PRECISE I LOVE GIVING YOU ALL JHATKAS...

PART 3

after sneha and her parents left, virat and manvi turned around to go to their rooms but dadaji stops them...
dadaji : rukk jao...
virat and manvi turns back...
dadaji : hum bahut khush hai tum dono ke liye...!!!! shaadi waadi karni hai ya nahi tum dono ko...???
virat : ji...
dadaji : ji kya...??? chalo dono aakar humara aashirwaad lo... aur hum kal subah hi hrishikesh waalo ko bula lete hai, tum dono ke rishte k liye...
virat n manvi : kyaaa...????????????
vanshika : kyun...??? koi pareshani hai kya...???
virat : maa woh kya hai na... k manvi na abhi itni jaldi... mera matlab hai k wo abhi sure nai hai...
vanshika : kis liye sure nahi hai manvi...??
virat : humare baare mein.. shaadi k baare mein..
vanshika : manvi... beta yeh virat kya keh raha hai...??? tum btao mujhe...
virat : plss maa... main nahi chahta k manvi se koi kisi bhi tarah ka sawaal kare... main taiyaar hoon intezaar karne ke liye... mujhe koi problem nai hai.. main bas ye chahta hoon k manvi khud apni marzi se shaadi ke liye haan kahe.. koi pressure mein aakar nahi...
vanshika : lekin...
virat : maa maine pyar kia hai aur mujhe apne pyaar par pura bharosa hai... bas chahta hoon ke aap sab bhi hum par thoda sa bharosa kare...
dadaji : waah... tum sach mein samajhdaar ho gye ho virat... humein garv hai tumpe...
swamini : toh virat tum ye kehna chahte ho k tum dono ek hi ghar mein rahoge, ek hi chhat ke neeche aur ek dusre ko samajhne ke baad shaadi ke baare mein sochoge.. ryt...???
virat : toh isme buraai kya hai...??? mujhe toh kuch bura nai dekhta isme...
swamini : par duniya ko toh dekhega na... wo toh yahi kahenge k virat apni girlfriend k saath apne ghar mein rehta hai aur ek taraf ghar wale hai jo apni hi dhun mein mast and they are not even concerned... tumhe koi kuch nai kahega... ungiliyan toh manvi ke character par uthengi na... log usse naa jaane kya ky
virat : plss buaji... aage kuch mat boliyega plss... main bardhasht nai kar paunga...
viren : dekh bhai... shant ho ja... hum kal baat karenge...
virat : jis aurat ko khud kabhi pyaar nai mila woh mere pyaar pe ungli utha rahi hai... dat is outstanding...!!!
viren : virattt... how dare you...????? 😡sorry bol... virat maine kaha sorry bol... 😡
virat : i am sorry... bhai main aisa kuch nai kahunga...
manvi : virat plss sorry bol do... tumhe ehsaas nahi hai tum kya keh gae...
virat : manvi maine...
manvi : mere liye... plsss
virat : bua ji i am sorry... mujhe maaf kar dijie...
swamini said nothing 😭 and went to her room... so do others...
now only virat and manvi were there in the hall...


manvi : kya kia tumne ye sab...??? u messed up everything...???
virat : i messed up everything... ohh really...??? 😲
manvi : yes u did it...
virat : didnt u hear what bua said...??? how can she speak like that about you...???
manvi : saara panga tumne kia hai virat aur ab bill bua ke naam pe faad rahe ho... how smart, isnt it...??
virat : ohh yeah.. right... sab meri hi toh galti hai... tumse pyaar kar baitha par tumhe khone ke darr se tumhe nai btaya... meri hi toh galti hai mujhe apni ded futiya ke siva koi aur chehra nai dikhta, tumhari awaaj ke sive aur kuch sunai nai deta... meri hi galti hai k main tumko deewano ki tarah chahne laga gya bina yeh jaane k tum kya feel karti ho...
manvi : virat pls ye drama dobara mat shuru karo...
virat : toh main drama kar raha hoon... are you blind or what manvi...??? cant u see the love in my eyes...??? cant u see how much u mean to me...??? kabhi socha hai ke kyun tumhare ek baar kehne pe maine office join kar liya.. kyun...??? kyun office mein sincerely kaam karne lag gya...??? u know why bcoz i wanted to see the happiness on your face... i wanted u to be proud of me... pyaar dekhna chahta tha main tumhari aankhon mein apni liye... par main ye tumhe kyun keh raha hoon... kyunki tum... tum kbhi kisi se pyaar kar nahi sakti... kyunki tum kbhi bhabhi k alawa kisi ko apna pyaar dena hi nai chahti...
manvi : virat... meri baat suno...
virat : rehne do yaar... kuch mat bolo... its my problem that i love you.. pls dont bother...
manvi : hadd ho gai hai... chup bilkul chup... kya hai..??? tumhari problem kya hai.. chep kahin ka..???
virat : pyaar hi meri problem hai... aur pyaar hi meri problem ka solution... but i know k main tumhe deserve nahi karta... lekin iska matlab ye nahi hai ke tumse pyaar nahi kar sakta...
manvi : main nahi jaanti ye pyaar kya hota...??? nahi janti ye kaisa ehsaas hota hai..?? par mujhe ye pta hai k mujhe tum acche lagte ho... i like spending time with you... jab tum mujhse door jaate ho na toh mujhe bahut bura lagta hai.. i miss you virat.. whole day long i miss you and think about you...
virat : toh keh do na partner...??? kehdo na k tum bhi...
manvi : mujhe nahi pta virat... nahi pta... 😕
virat : take your time partner... i give you whole of my life to think but dont say no... agar tumne mna kar diya na toh main jee nai paunga...
manvi : shut up... okkay ... agli baar marne ki baat ki na toh main khud tumhe maar dungi... sherni hoon main rishikesh ki... samjhe...???
virat : samajh gya... par u know what sherni sher ki hi hoti hai...
manvi : dekhi jaegi... so jao jakar bahut drama ho gya aaj ke liye... ☺️

one last part coming your way guys... the last part...!!!
but pls dont forget to click the like button 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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virat loves her yeah knew it n e1 she loves him...waitng for last part wen will u update it>
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: viratmanvi

virat loves her yeah knew it n e1 she loves him...waitng for last part wen will u update it>

thnks for liking it and i will update it tmrw...

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