FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

oh wow awsuuum dear...oh man khushi puked over him...really..lol...loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

Nice one. Thnks for the pm.

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

Brilliant update loving NK. Cant believe Khushi puked all over him cant wait to see what else happens at the rest of the tour and the flashback

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-Suchi.P

@-Suchi.P

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

Awesome Job!! she threw up on him!!! LOL that would be a treat to watch!!
This is only FF on Arshi I have read where Armav talks more than khushi!
Wonderful Job and thanks for the PM!

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Noni

@sweetnoni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

Im loving this lolz. Great update:)
I loved the flashback scenes. So keep it up!! Cant w8 4 more:D

Continue soon n thx 4 d pm.

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved da drunk khushi...adorable...NK n akash were hilerious...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

Interesting...really enjoying this ladies...Thanks for the pm.

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@Iluvmyself

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

Ummm... A cliffhanger ...
Really luved ur writing
And the way u continued the story was awesome
Flashbacks of the night before ...real cool dude !

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

wowd whole post though was a ride in past n present..loved it..sumwhr got confusd bt read again..n got it..:)well..NK!!!lyk really..z it d same.?lolofcourse its him on both syds..:Dshe did wt ovr him..at d bar?dt was lyk..yuck..bt dn it made point..d stry held it..n moved wid it..she almost slept at d door..n nw..facin d consequence..wid n w/o towel..😳wud stop hea..:Pcnt write more..m blushin blushin n blushin..:D☺️do pm me wen u update more..😛😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊