FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#381

I loved the chapter :)

The starting part about Akash, NK and Arnav was a great twist...NK knowing Arnav... Now Kushi doesn't know it... OMG what if she tells him something about Arnav ?? Its going to be interesting !!

I loved the switch between the past and present...it was Amazing...

Great update :)

Jess...update soon !! :)

Edited by asrcraze - 13 years ago

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titanichomeless

@titanichomeless

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

part 3 seems not continue with first 2 parts, isn't it

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tanvia

@tanvia

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

res

that was funny and different...awesome

Edited by tanvia - 13 years ago

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arisai

@arisai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND
Rafa!!! It was amazing...

Why the hell did you stop there!!! Damn I wanted you to write the whole scene😉

So Arnav already knows NK... that changes things

Jess not you have to complete where Rafa left us😆

I'm loving it

It's so fun writing a story like this😃

great job dear

Thought it'd be an interesting dynamic if it turns out Khushi is friends with Arnav's cousin. Fun for whoever writes the next bit. 😆

Edited by arisai - 13 years ago

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

No one tells me beforehand about this resing business!

RES!

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Res-
Wow another new updates!
& its fabulous like the other 2 updates👏

Edited by coronapsyche - 13 years ago

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Maha Ayaz

@Mahi_Butt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

woho an other new story loved it plz update soon!!!

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

sorry for the double comment but samiya please PM us!

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#389

Lmao is jus nt the word!! Lol she threw up on him n ended up in d same bed wid him :p its usually the other way round u see :D lol cant wait to read on whats next!
cheers fot the post :)