FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED* - Page 41

I dont care if Im spamming here.. but I read the chapter and I bloody well loved it.

Originally posted by: jessicad

I dont care if Im spamming here.. but I read the chapter and I bloody well loved it.

My comment will be unresd in a while on page 61.

I stopped my shower so I could read lol. 😆

p.s.- Im so scared. Im next!

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND

and you get to do a sex scene🤣...go jess... make us proud😃

Originally posted by: arisai

Indeed Jess.

Consider it a gift. From me to you. 😆

Oi hoye! jess ho jaa shuru :D I mean writing the chapter. What did you think? 😉

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Oi hoye! jess ho jaa shuru :D I mean writing the chapter. What did you think? 😉

res.

Absolutely Brilliant...👏👏loved loved it...all my fav writers together...total bliss !!! loved the song choice..very apt for the situation...now i cant wait to read the next chap...continue soonn...😊

Arnav thought for a bit. "No. Not really. What can I say? You ignite my fire. Light of my life. Fire of my loins. And all that."

Khushi cringed. "I'm not a child so there's no need to quote Lolita at me.And... about last night- I think it's best we just pretend it didn't happen. I think we can both acknowledge it was a huge mistake."

"I don't acknowledge that at all."

"But-"

"We're both consenting adults- as you have just confirmed."

This part was so damn hilarious. I loved the way they expressed themselves. I mean they were really frank with each other. I thought they will act awkward towards each other but the way the part progressed i really liked it. And the flashbacks in between were really very well described. The reactions after the tequila shots were seriously frolicsome.😆 It was indeed an entertaining part.Loved it :) This FF is really a very interesting one and it is getting more interesting day by day :) Continue soon :)

So far, this collaberation is great! I loved all the parts! Waiting to read more!

Woah. .awesome 😊
Always love a talkative Arnav & an embarassed Khushi 😉