FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

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annab

@annab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

loved it zehra..wt a wonderful idea to collab btwn the wonderful writers...👏👏..they both r in a weird situation...waiting to read the nxt chap...thanx for the pm

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

awesome cant wait to see what kushi says to arnav next and his reaction...continue soon

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Maha Khan

@Charmz_58

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

That was a total shock but that was superb

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kuchnaakahoo

@kuchnaakahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

woww,,, khushi mentally slapped herself not being able to recall his body,, this thing cracked me up..🤣 bt y too short update

Edited by CuteSARUN - 12 years ago

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falak9090

@falak9090

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Nice update and pm me

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Omg the end was a shocker !! Shit he was her professor ??😲 Haha how is Khushi going to handle it now?I'm loving it and cant wait for the next part dear !!😳🤗Samiya !! Awesome piece of writing dear ⭐️

Edited by -sweetgal19- - 12 years ago

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Maha Khan

@Charmz_58

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

That was brilliant do write more

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Sorry I I double posted by mistakewa 😆 Sorry dear !

Edited by -sweetgal19- - 12 years ago

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

I already love the concept and I am sure both of you will do justice to the story.. Loved the second part.
Him looking at Khushi when he needed to pause was cute...the situation itself is super hilarious.