FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

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Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

wow wow jusy wow... Loved loved it... Well done girls!!! Pls update soon and pm me the next part if u can/// Thank u both of u!!!

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rashmi

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

wow...that was really nice...cant imagine the great ASR a professor...

OK Part2 was also here and i blindly was searching for it...!

yep both the parts were awesome...update the next part ASAP

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Hehehe poor khushi, poor arnav…;) well I got glued too it for two reasons um studying cse too and the second is I am also in love with grey's anatomy. And I call arnav mcdreamy too.. ;) hehe Dr Richard choose khushi to show arnav the campus.. Well mohabbat door jane na de we got too understand that..I really am liking this collaborative writing idea. U both wrote the updates awesomely.

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

She slept with her professor awww. nice start and continue soon

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pinky89

@pinky89

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

As usual awesome Zehara !!!!! interesting concept ...Poor khushi

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

mind blowing and waitin for the next part

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stupid

@SaRun_Arshi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

It was quite entertaining i loved the concept lolz the fight from both sides with their minds amazing update soon

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

yayy for collaboration!! 2 great minds working together!! I am excited!!

I wonder how she will things clear between her and arnav!!! Cant wait!

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subiscs

@subiscs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

its collab !!! cool...loved this update😊

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

honestly..u both r fantastic wen it cums 2 writin..u no hw 2 grip ur audience..😉1st Samiya shocked us in d 1st chptr..makin Arnav..d Professor..unlyk..ne odr studnt..n nw..u made me laugh lyk nethin in dis chptr..:)it was ossum..lovin d descrptn of Arnav..which La gav..:Dlovin d way she's tryin 2 avoid him..bt destiny has othr plans..well..she wasnt in her senses..d previous nyt..still u hav named it The mistake..wndrin hw wud u frthr justify d title..:)though i wud lov it newazz..:):Ddoo pm me wen u update more..😛😛thnxxx😊😊😊😊