FF - The Mistake#1-Chapter Five *COMPLETED*

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Awsome ss...read the part 1 and Part 2...was awsome loved it...waiting for next part...thanks for the PM...

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

awesome part!!! :) Great job!

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Thanks for the pm, loved update, that was amazing how both Arnav and Khushi were mentally thinking about the night before. It was funny both had to discipline their thoughts. Them been alone together is going to get difficult. Please update soon.

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amritafan

@amritafan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

awesome part.arnav pausing to look at her

awww

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Loved part 2 too !!Haha loved how both were thinking about last night !! 😆 Wonder how they're gonna be alone now !! 😛Awesome update Zehra !! ⭐️🤗

Edited by -sweetgal19- - 13 years ago

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

I was wondering all the way, that this FF is supposedly Sami's and y Zehy has updated it and also there was no note saying it will be a collab stuff :P

No worries. 2 amazing cool writers! WIll make stuff very good :P

The whole class, Both imagining the other in naked :P I'm blushing!

Alone time, again!!

Thanks for the pm

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Wow...A collaborative work...Wonderful update...Awaiting the story to unfold further...Thanks for the PM

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Loved it!!it was soo well written...i loved how both checked each other out and scolded themselves for it!

And khushi getting worried about him knowing her name when he had seen her naked was too good!!

To excited for the next part...!!!wonder how they are going to talk!!

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pratikshanoel

@pratikshanoel

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

HI LL... amazing update sweety.

i jst looove it.

especially this part----"

Darn he knows my name now, Khushi thought. You are just worried about the name Khushi? He has seen you naked! You slept with him! And here you are worrying about your name. Very intelligent Khushi very intelligent! "

go on girls

waitin 4 d nxt update